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The Beginning

Wandering, leave my world behind,
A journey, new beginnings.
Unsure of what I’ll find,

Thoughts and images flash my mind
On this journey I’m embarking.
Wandering, leave my world behind.

These thoughts I have aren’t always kind.
Tangled, jumbled, darting, seeking,
Unsure of what I’ll find.

Pausing briefly to unwind,
The prospect of reflecting.
Wandering, leave my world behind.

Emotions strapped and, in a bind,
My steps slow down, I’m faltering.
Unsure of what I’ll find.

So, I embark, eyes remain blind.
This challenge I’m accepting.
Wandering, leave my world behind,
Unsure of what I’ll find.

Silence breeds another beast

Your hurt in turn hurts me
You are not sharing your pain
But you willing share your anger
I am not in your team
I am the opposition
You have closed your self away 
Put up a defensive wall
Say little and expect the world

I can’t help if you dont want help
I can’t listen if you dont speak
I can’t read your mind if you isolate yourself 
I can’t predict what will happen next

But you are doing a good job of barely staying alive
A good job of protecting yourself and hurting others
A good job letting others carry while you stay away
A good job of breaking everything while doing nothing

Premium Member an honest attempt at introspection

honesty...

disregard the tears streaming down my face
just hand me a tissue
and allow me a chance
to string some words together
to explain
honestly, explain 
and in retrospect
it would be the next October
where I would actually feel the rain...
the wetness, the coolness
the awareness, and the agony
eventually, yes, I felt it all


(to be continued)


haunted

i tried to see you again
for the first time in almost five years
it was my fault for leaving
but when i said goodbye
i didn't know it'd be forever
i wonder what i would've done differently 
if i had known
and now it's going on three years
since you passed
and i miss you more than you know
i just wanted to see you 
so i tried to join you
but as i sat in the bathroom
with my head over the toilet
color draining from my face
vision going in and out
my brain imagines you're there 
waiting for me
arms held open
but i know now i won't make it to you
yet another time i failed you
my brain puts you next to me 
almost as if taunting me
just sitting there
watching me at my lowest
and we both know
this is my punishment 
this is what i deserve

first attempt

The first attempt

This is the first poem I try not to think about.
It is like crossing the plateau of Alentejo
 I see the tarmac road that stretches miles ahead
 must follow the lines of the road
or, fall off and sink into oblivion
Poetry is not unlike arithmetic; using words instead 
of numbers
The hope is that the writing has an inner logic 
That defies jumbled words  
The instrument has a hidden note that tells us 
That two is not four
I try  telling you what I  hear, it is easy, our obligation
to love our fellow beings 
This request can be obtained by honest feelings

Premium Member How do you fight when the battle is within you, and every attempt seems doomed to fail

How do you fight when the battle is within you, and every attempt seems doomed to fail,
When you thought you were strong, but now you see you're caught in the web of doubt,
A stranger in your own skin, searching for a self that once seemed so certain,
I try to rise, but I fall again, chasing pieces of myself that have disappeared.
Once I was confident, but now I'm full of uncertainty,
Wondering if I'll ever find that part of me I'm searching for,
A labyrinth of intertwined thoughts, where the echoes of doubts constantly resonate,
Like a river flowing endlessly, taking me on unknown paths of the soul.
Every step is a battle with shadows, a search for the light hidden deep within,
When the heart remembers the times when faith was simple and clear,
Now, lost in a thick fog, I seek the fulcrum to find myself again,
In a world that changes incessantly, like a dream from which I cannot wake.
I gather strength from memories, from moments of courage and instants of peace,
From the brilliance of a clear morning when the sun warmed my soul,
And I try to remember who I truly am, beyond doubts and fears,
For deep in my heart, I know my true power awaits to be rediscovered.


Left at Rockbottom

I walk into my mom’s room, filled with fear,
As nausea is bubbling in my core.
I say nothing, it’s already clear;
I took a b’ttle of pills just like before.

Tears fall from my eyes and drip from my chin,
As screaming insults fall from my mom’s lips.
She yells, “Get in the car,” and the pr’cess begins.
She cont’nues to yell like she’s read’ng a script.

She says she’s not staying for this bullsh’t this time.
With that, she left—no “I love you,” no goodbye.
I’d never felt more alone in my life.
In the weeks that followed, I did nothing but cry.

In those three weeks, I only felt like a problem,
Reminding me, my own mom left me at rock bottom.

Attempt to sale

Just got charged for attempt to sale
Words on paper no need for a scale
   Just pure joy and pain frowns and laughter 
Living life to the fullest anything can happen 
   Dreams come true but the foot work has to be done by you
So many start and never finish 
   Made it through the beginning and then stopped I guess that's the ending 
   We all know a lot of people or pretending ride your wave and pay them no attention 
   See remember I just got charged for attempt to sale words on paper no need for a scale

Premium Member Do NOT Attempt This on YOUR Movie Set

     Into racially charged environs
        burst cattlemen with branding irons

     Followed, fortunately, by squadcars' screaming sirens  
        Whew... Sure glad those were 'dry runs'

Premium Member an unexpected rescue attempt

In snow and mud stuck off the road
On hill—we killed anti-skid mode
Then cleaned your tire tread
And rocked straight ahead
So now you've no need to be towed!

A Vain Attempt

Do not knock on the door of my heart 
if you don't know how to love

Attempt In Vain

I just tried to leave sweety memories behind
Yet, ants and flies were rather unkind

Failed Attempt At Humor

You can’t understand how that sounds.
You laugh, but you look like clowns.
Don’t repeat the joke. Don’t assail
my ears with what you would call a humorous tale.
I don’t have the patience for this. My head pounds.

I’d rather eat coffee grounds
than listen to your waste of nouns.
But heaven forbid you notice this detail.
	You can’t understand.

Your obliviousness astounds.
It begins to escape the bounds
of what reality should entail.
Yet you seem infinitely able to exhale
nonsense. There is so much about you which confounds.
	You can’t understand.

Sigrid's Sandbags

Braced to fight tough for triumph 
         Stockpiled testosterone
         Fizzed bicarb in her bloodstream 
         Sucked bitterness alone


         Flooded home, battle surmounted 
         Safeguard marshy roost
         Maladvised maveric trudged pond
         Stacking bags of no use

        
         Swirling water swarmed by spiders
         Fear erased from register
         Starless, deserted street industrial 
         Duty lead dim endeavour 
         
     
         Depth defiantly rejected her efforts
         Scream's echoing ignorant
         Yelled "help" at selected emptiness 
         Six months pregnant Sigrid


         Fortfied ego, throat sore, exhausted 
         Dry in her fortress upstairs 
         Concede agitated bruises encumber
         Defences laid dull despairs 




          
                      31st March
          Dependence is not defeat

Haiku Attempt 4-Old Memories

Reminiscent time
Good days and bad days behind
Look to the future

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