Agitates Poems | Examples

Premium Member Narrow Margin

Sometimes, in uncertain outcomes, as life agitates,
It can sway either way, maneuvering on the edge,
For a difference rather modest, makes the final call,
When a narrow margin determines a win or a loss.

If a win we choose to celebrate, or defeat we deride, 
Prudent to bear in mind, that it wasn’t a landslide;
When results are so close, why not cheer them all,
Cognizant to recognize~ distinction is awfully small.

Slender is the layer between eve’s dusk and twilight,
Between dark of dawn, and luminance of sunrise;
Between safe and danger, there lies a narrow divide,
Where, between cliff and fall, life’s border resides.

Mementos of love embraced, and love sadly repelled,
In albums of beloved, or memories forlorn dwell,
Clamoring from corridors of good or bad choices made,
Between narrow margins of hope, and contours of fate.

O, a narrow margin can be of mighty consequence
Inhabiting elation of success, or anguish of regrets,
When death lingers in the clutches of final moments
Stilled between breath inhaled, and breath exhaled.
Form: Verse

Premium Member On Havana's White Shore -

On Havana's white shore –
With each salt-infused whirl
That agitates its border –
Every sand is a potential pearl.
Form: Rhyme


Premium Member Musings

MUSINGS
synthesis
of
fearful
intensity
original
instinctive
&
otherworldly

curiosity
agitates
intimacy
&
then effaced
by
the exotic
elaborate
in little
glimpses
particularly
so
modest
yet absolutes
&
engrossing

NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE   using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
Copyright © Brian Strand
Form: Other

Premium Member Fall From Grace

Our hypnotic stupor, cause of our fall from grace
The flame flickers and our attention oscillates
The ego offers mind endless puzzles to lace
Deluded, rudderless heart then agitates
Voice of soul, as conscience, negates

When head and heart align
The ego dies for we we feed it not
As God-essence, for His love we pine
Exiting serpentine pathways of narrow thought
We thus regain freedom by non-doing self-taught

17-April-2022

Premium Member Zigzag Route Leads Nowhere

Earth life a jigsaw puzzle, soul navigates
Floundering about in vain
Fickle and fleeting is joy, so heart agitates
Measuring loss and gain

We see all around, perfect divine order
Planets orbiting the sun
Save man, no living creature a hoarder
High time then, we come undone 

Looking back at the zigzag route we took
Delusion cause of our bondage 
Soul not this body, seems we were mistook
Fears and desires, our form ravage

We recognise head and heart at divergence
Misaligned with throb of love
So we stand still, enabling joy convergence 
With God’s will, hand in glove

Layer by layer, our cravings disappear 
We become an empty shell
It is then we feel, bliss magnetism spear
Fulfilled at last, all is well

05-December-2021

''Z'' Contest, New or Old - Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France
Form: Rhyme


Premium Member Gatekeeper

She holds a set of dangling golden keys,
In front of a massive silvery gate.
Knowing the prize I ask to enter please,
But she shakes her head which denotes my fate.

I take out magical potion to trade,
But no interest as she agitates.
I have no army to perform a raid,
So I am thinking I will come back late.

"I can read your mind", she awkwardly smiles,
Though my destiny is beyond her reach...
That is, if I can walk a hundred miles,
To enter from the unprotected beach.

Then to surprise she quickly chages her mind,
With her and the dragon that I may dine!

3-September-2021
Form: Sonnet

A Distant Voice

Thy voice sounds like violin from distance
Melody of the holy angels
Thy beauty bouncing along the conductor
The airwaves beautified by the rhythm
A glut of neurons awakened by a giggle
How thy voice closes distance by wire?
My receiver agitates from life
Thy words transmit power through the wire.

The command you possess over my body;
Pauses not there!
 Pass it on to non-biotic
Come dismiss my lesions.
When the air is saturated
It penetrates my dual engine of life,
With trebled effort much as of gamma
Even the clouds display thy image
Oh! What a natural wonder!
 Do all the eyes witness the beauty at once?

I wonder what gives you reign.
Who crowned you this way?
My mind meant to rest-you take me far
The frame is at rest-your presence feeds my spirit
Together we traverse the world
All places far from imagination
Within a blink of the mental eye!

Premium Member Easy and Breezy

Conjuring formulae to attain God
Reflected consciousness narrow thought prods
Accustomed to trials and tribulations
Unable to rest in meditation 

What is immediate and intimate
Known not to ego, which oft agitates
Presupposing separateness from source
Assuming enablements gained by force

Employing mind to go beyond the mind
Rather than letting go off ego bind
Self imposed dilemma, tragic-comic
Simple shift to heart, births bliss ecstatic

Struggle not hermit, the table is laid
Feel the throb of bliss within, ready made 

25-March-2021
Form: Sonnet

Premium Member Slow and Easy

Slow understanding
Assimilation
By percolation
Osmotically 
Layer by layer

Caterpillar
To butterfly
Let latent heat
Gently transform

The ego
Ignorant 
Agitates

Let calm
Within

Be

21-November-2020

Premium Member Let Go of To Get To

Heart
Flutters
Agitates
For expansion
Lunging at illusions ephemeral

Eternal not found in the external
Search shifts within
Tranquil calm
Clear light
Dawns

17-October-2020
Form: Tetractys

Premium Member Imagined Deaths

ecstasy of piranhas, perhaps
to dream the dream of falling
S P L A T
flying...i’m flying
thereafter eaten by raptors
well there’s that
the big bang
i’m the new world
inhabited by Fraggles
shake that off
the dust bowl
i think therefore i am sucked
up by a hoover
the anchor agitates the floor of the beautiful blue sea
surreality is attached to me
black eyes
of a pea lodge
in my eternity
dressed in a green and purple Barnie suit
my kids won’t even bury me
afraid of i love you you love me

5/11/2020

Let Go the Ego

"I was right", and "You were wrong".
The turmoil of noise , overblows along.
Rage agitates, a scapegoat is blamed.
Trapped in Ego, the "We" gets maimed.

A deep breath , through my Wisdom tooth.
As introspection , liberates the truth,...
I control and cut off, the shackles of past.
An exasperated Ego, finds peace at last.




Dated 21st November 2018.
Submitted to the Unrest  of Spirit Poetry Contest
Sponsor Julia Ward.
Form: Rhyme

A Feeling So Fresh

A Feeling So Fresh...

Ahh...! The streak of pain,
The rough floor
And the red stain.

How can I forget that agony?
They were five
And I was only.

They dragged me like a rucksack,
A feeling so fresh...
Not at all a Flashback...

The strong smell of alcohol,
The half burnt cigarettes
And their faces like a black coal.

I’s like a fish out of water
Repeatedly pleading
Like a stubborn beggar.

How could they listen?
Unlike humans
They were all demons.


Tightly, they tied me with a rope,
Not a movement possible
Breathing was only a left scope.

Unsuccessful to unwrap me,
They took a knife
And put cuts, one...two and three.

Echo of their laugh still agitates me,
The smell of their sweat
Is still chasing me...

One by one, they quench their thirst,
Good thing is that
They were fighting to be first.

They murdered my innocence,
Unbearable and brutally
Killing all my sense...

Leaving me, not less than a dead
Chained, in time coffin
 Still trying to move ahead...
Form: Couplet

Premium Member Gregorian Chant

deep monophonic sacred melodies 
resounding inner tremors and oscillation
reverberating incursion agitates my soul

stirring an ethereal timelessness of mystery
that transcends the enigma of life and death
and embodying mystique throughout the ages 
bellows echoing within ancient monastery walls

a rich cadence and tone larger than life
assaulting all senses with vibrating
conjunct and disjunct tetrachords and hexachords 
gregorian melodies most direct channel to divinity

most appropriate as we lay my father
in his final resting place
on this overcast rainy afternoon
and see him off to the higher realm



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Submitted on June 30, 2018 for contest MID SUMMER 2018 PREMIERE sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 3RD

A Dream

subconscious mind agitates
                    happenings screened behind eyes
                    man in sleep watches
Form: Haiku

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