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Premium Member Narrow Margin

Sometimes, in uncertain outcomes, as life agitates,
It can sway either way, maneuvering on the edge,
For a difference rather modest, makes the final call,
When a narrow margin determines a win or a loss.

If a win we choose to celebrate, or defeat we deride, 
Prudent to bear in mind, that it wasn’t a landslide;
When results are so close, why not cheer them all,
Cognizant to recognize~ distinction is awfully small.

Slender is the layer between eve’s dusk and twilight,
Between dark of dawn, and luminance of sunrise;
Between safe and danger, there lies a narrow divide,
Where, between cliff and fall, life’s border resides.

Mementos of love embraced, and love sadly repelled,
In albums of beloved, or memories forlorn dwell,
Clamoring from corridors of good or bad choices made,
Between narrow margins of hope, and contours of fate.

O, a narrow margin can be of mighty consequence
Inhabiting elation of success, or anguish of regrets,
When death lingers in the clutches of final moments
Stilled between breath inhaled, and breath exhaled.
Form: Verse

A Dream

subconscious mind agitates
                    happenings screened behind eyes
                    man in sleep watches
Form: Haiku

Fishing

Reflecting back I see beyond yesterday,
Light glistening brings a new view,
The water's rays rippling about,
I set my bait my soul,
The fish it agitates.

A guilty pleasure, wasting time,
Tomorrow's trouble I catch,
Yesterday's worries swimming under,
My rod and reel are the keel,
Thought enraptures me,
Learning bending recent history.

The safety of this doc disappeared,
I must've gone adrift somewhere near,
A horrid smell not so bad,
The past filets the fish all to well,
Tomorrow I bid, thou shall soon,
Time to fish, out to conclude.


A Distant Voice

Thy voice sounds like violin from distance
Melody of the holy angels
Thy beauty bouncing along the conductor
The airwaves beautified by the rhythm
A glut of neurons awakened by a giggle
How thy voice closes distance by wire?
My receiver agitates from life
Thy words transmit power through the wire.

The command you possess over my body;
Pauses not there!
 Pass it on to non-biotic
Come dismiss my lesions.
When the air is saturated
It penetrates my dual engine of life,
With trebled effort much as of gamma
Even the clouds display thy image
Oh! What a natural wonder!
 Do all the eyes witness the beauty at once?

I wonder what gives you reign.
Who crowned you this way?
My mind meant to rest-you take me far
The frame is at rest-your presence feeds my spirit
Together we traverse the world
All places far from imagination
Within a blink of the mental eye!

A Feeling So Fresh

A Feeling So Fresh...

Ahh...! The streak of pain,
The rough floor
And the red stain.

How can I forget that agony?
They were five
And I was only.

They dragged me like a rucksack,
A feeling so fresh...
Not at all a Flashback...

The strong smell of alcohol,
The half burnt cigarettes
And their faces like a black coal.

I’s like a fish out of water
Repeatedly pleading
Like a stubborn beggar.

How could they listen?
Unlike humans
They were all demons.


Tightly, they tied me with a rope,
Not a movement possible
Breathing was only a left scope.

Unsuccessful to unwrap me,
They took a knife
And put cuts, one...two and three.

Echo of their laugh still agitates me,
The smell of their sweat
Is still chasing me...

One by one, they quench their thirst,
Good thing is that
They were fighting to be first.

They murdered my innocence,
Unbearable and brutally
Killing all my sense...

Leaving me, not less than a dead
Chained, in time coffin
 Still trying to move ahead...
Form: Couplet

The Nice Guy

Sometimes it sucks being the nice guy
the girl you love isn't interested
just friends says she
just friends the next
pain is all I feel
to cover it agitates the wound
it's exhausting
I drive, as far as possible
return still slightly insane
haunted, f*cking go away
I want to cry, but they're looking my way
so my struggled smile here and their
walk away in tears
living in fear
Form:


Premium Member Gregorian Chant

deep monophonic sacred melodies 
resounding inner tremors and oscillation
reverberating incursion agitates my soul

stirring an ethereal timelessness of mystery
that transcends the enigma of life and death
and embodying mystique throughout the ages 
bellows echoing within ancient monastery walls

a rich cadence and tone larger than life
assaulting all senses with vibrating
conjunct and disjunct tetrachords and hexachords 
gregorian melodies most direct channel to divinity

most appropriate as we lay my father
in his final resting place
on this overcast rainy afternoon
and see him off to the higher realm



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Submitted on June 30, 2018 for contest MID SUMMER 2018 PREMIERE sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 3RD

The Abyss

Anger so deep it penetrates, agitates and aggravates
Feeling so helpless, clueless and ruthless
Knowing my physical pain and the flaw in my brain is like a derailing train
Wondering why no one cares and no one is there.  Why do they all sit with a blank stare?
Confused as to why I can't grow.  Who is it I really know?  With whom my emotions I should 
show?
Tired of all the selfishness and phoney bliss.  This is truly an abyss.
Questioning if I really exist.  I think I'm here, but Maybe I'm just a mist.  Maybe I don't get 
the gist.
Frustrated that I even need a crutch.  Do I really ask for too much?
Sad for myself too much it seems.  I'm free of flaws in a distant dream.  I want to 
scream!!!!!
Never can I get along.  I'm never good enough and I don't belong.  Why is everything so 
wrong?
Unsure why things never change and I have this new found rage.  Can we please turn the 
page?
Holding on by a thread.  There are so many things I dread.  I sink again and my soul is dead.
Why do I suffer this way?  Why do I have to pay?  All I ever used to do is pray, but not today
Alone is what I've been for so long.  Maybe it's the only way I feel strong.  Maybe that's how 
I belong
Desire exists to understand life.  I do yearn for minimal strife.  At times I can't make it in 
this life
Misunderstood all of the time as if I've committed some crime.  It's about time I end this 
rhyme.  After all it's not so sublime.
Form:

Word Play

word play 
 agitates
 souls
 that 
 lack the
 right 
 alignment in
 their back

 eyes
 drawn with 
 markers 
 that have drawn 
 eyes that are gold
 that mold 
 and glaze over
 like love that
 has been left in 
 the cold.

 breathe me 
 in through nostrils
 that resemble lips
 that taste like ears
 that hear nothing but senses
 laced in acid

 enhancement in veins
 run like advancement
 through generational names
 this nonsense....

 no.
 this is word play

 -Destiny the Poet

Deep Within

Feeling deep and dark from inside is where it starts, mentally departing for an hour or two. 
What has become of what’s inside is getting harder and harder to hide. 
	
Inside having pride, but always what’s inside still finds a way to hide. On good days of shine 
never feeling like in mind, different directions in mind is dreaming divine. 
	
Where to look; being hard to find aloft through the mind, electrifying sounds in my ears and 
eyes through the blindness still managing to find the inside. 
	
A daring soul so deep, eyes wide shut and crying it’s the inside always ever prying. Never 
trusting until one sees the wide view, then what’s inside starts to slowly decline. 
	
Years go bye the inside has seen much, somewhat out of touch. There is no denying the 
projection and view, in taking all we are small but not few. With the world in dissolve, ever 
wanting to evolve. 
	  
Inside what agitates the gravel in all, flowing smooth and clean. Graying with what inside has 
seen what a sweet thing to take the inside and make it gleam. 
	
Picking up vibes from every voice, eye to eye living by choice, a natural selection through 
reflection. So powerful in sounds so profound, like watching lightening without the sound. 
	
Reflexes alike never having a need to smite or fight, just a need to dream full self-esteem. 
Mind aloft on high and skin tough as steel harvesting what we accomplish, what we show is 
what we feel. 


Inside… 
		
								
	
James C Bryant Jr.
January 23, 2002

Let Go the Ego

"I was right", and "You were wrong".
The turmoil of noise , overblows along.
Rage agitates, a scapegoat is blamed.
Trapped in Ego, the "We" gets maimed.

A deep breath , through my Wisdom tooth.
As introspection , liberates the truth,...
I control and cut off, the shackles of past.
An exasperated Ego, finds peace at last.




Dated 21st November 2018.
Submitted to the Unrest  of Spirit Poetry Contest
Sponsor Julia Ward.
Form: Rhyme

And Yet I Cross

I arrive at the churning river,
with one option.
I stare at the jagged rocks below.
White water agitates across the gorge.
And yet I cross.

Forward or to retreat I must.
Uncertain I am
 of the future, distant bank,
my knowledge scant of its terrain.
And yet I cross.

A wooden span held with rusted iron
bearing the scars
of countless crossings, creaks
and voices the sighs of protest.
And yet I cross.

The opposing shore may offer paradise,
bright acres of rich inheritance.
Or perhaps consists of a land without shade,
possibly a territory desolate and destitute.
And yet I cross.

In unfamiliar maps I find myself.
lost in the forward progress,
unwilling to reverse my course,
standing at a rushing boundary.
And yet I cross.
© Wayne Hill  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Fall From Grace

Our hypnotic stupor, cause of our fall from grace
The flame flickers and our attention oscillates
The ego offers mind endless puzzles to lace
Deluded, rudderless heart then agitates
Voice of soul, as conscience, negates

When head and heart align
The ego dies for we we feed it not
As God-essence, for His love we pine
Exiting serpentine pathways of narrow thought
We thus regain freedom by non-doing self-taught

17-April-2022

Premium Member One In Seven

Ticks imperceptibly further from tocks
Sally-anne gracefully brushing her locks
Perusing the papers in yesterday's socks
One eye on the news on the old goggle box

Lawns that want mowing, maybe today
No firm decision on that, either way
The daffies sway gentle their livery gay
As early the spring edges out winter grey

Wave at the neighbour out washing his car
Seems in no hurry, he's not going far
Exaggerate motion of tipping a jar
Inviting a post dinner trip to the bar

Somebody passing outside shares a laugh
While yellow billed blackbird agitates bath
Fido brings slippers, wife calls him staff
Then aerates the logs to enliven the hearth

Upon us the day when no desk shall tether
And only the mower shall fret over weather
A shower means trim the lawn next week or never
Well maybe not never, simply whenever

Dinner now served at family table
Sneak Fido a tidbit whenever I'm able
Courteous chat with mum in law, Mable
Kids stifle giggles, she's slightly unstable

Now Mable snoring, I do the dishes
Kids drying up conceal Facebook wishes
Mum by the pool sprinkles pellets for fishes
Whimsically lost in multi-finned swishes

And when gibbous moon gives off scant shadow light
And gone is the sun that shines somewhere else bright
Retire to our slumbers prepare for the fight
Batteries energise over the night

For five days or six we shall toil away
Earn twenty four hours to rest and to play
So never forfeit the day some people pray
This one day in seven, the Sabbath, Sunday.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Risque Triplets

      Clover superlative lovers, sprung via same stem
      Umbrella immunity protects sprites supple
      Filter purity lacy leaf shade kindly dapples them
      

      Desiree samples pitchfork debauch, spicy morsel
      Charcoal meats mesh ashes as a couple 
      Ambidextrous temptress directs a dirty rehearsal 


      Slides snakelike under bellies of cavernous crime
      Noir nymph' s naughty retorts immortal 
      Eclipses mens' deception with suspense sublime


      Renee seeps charisma, dripped dagger stalactites 
      Fever lucid rouge cog spins fire's scorch
      Sword slung blood hungry royalty raunchily ignites 


      Challenges zealous volunteers alter ideal rhythm 
      Their arteries' iron absorbed easily by hers
      Victims slump lethargic in archer's hearty system
      

      Daisy cartwheels through clouds of chaste cherubs
      Recklessly devours disappearing desserts
      Meringue marries her tongue to immaculate merit

      
      Sunrise serene promise of peace glides with dove
      Subtle touch petal's glitter silken sensual 
      Agitates a fragile ego to dream unconditional love 
   
      
       Virgin indulges a glutton with wedding splendour
       Impulsive maid skips in fields plentiful 
       Expressive poses pollinate their dramatic detour


        Reunited trio resplendent, red black white card
        Dervish of dizzying seductive curses
        Climb dandelion conducted, an angel on guard 
      

      


                    26th April 
        Tantalising Apparitions!
Form: Rhyme

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