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Willingly, You Risked Your Life

We were drifting off.... deeply into sleep! Time was running out for my pups and me They lay unconscious from inhaling dense smoke The door was locked, so we crawled under the bench And I barked as loud as I could, hoping attention to reap I had paced for our while even though chances were slim By myself I would’ve tried try some brazen escape But, no way could I abandon my pups in this place I began to think that our lives were a wrap Until I felt your warm and gentle pat You filled your suit pockets with my little pups You risked your life willingly to save each of us Now, in gratitude, let me wipe the smudge off your face Could I speak your language, I would graciously say, ‘Thank you!’ ~*~ For Joyce Johnson's "Doggy Gratitude" Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/23/2011 4:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Joyce's contest Annalise. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/5/2011 6:04:00 AM
Many congratulations Annalise on your win in Joyce's contest with this little gem....:)
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Date: 2/4/2011 5:00:00 PM
Annalise, congratulations on your win. You have great descriptiveness in this entry.
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Date: 2/4/2011 1:54:00 PM
Hi Annalise - Congratulations on your win in Joyce's contest. Best wishes, Kory
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Date: 2/4/2011 12:44:00 PM
A touching and sweet poem of such a harrowing experience! Well done! Congratulations, Annalise
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Date: 2/4/2011 12:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Annalise with this wonderful poem!!--kashinath
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Date: 2/4/2011 9:43:00 AM
Very touching, dear Annalise. Many congrats on your well deserved win. Lainie
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Date: 2/4/2011 9:41:00 AM
The dog may not have had a human voice, but his thank you was perfect, Annalise. So happy to see your poem in the winners' circle. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/4/2011 7:57:00 AM
Congrats Annalise on your winning poem in Joyce's contest with this extraordinary and touching entry my friend.. enjoy another grand success with luv..
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Date: 2/4/2011 7:28:00 AM
Annalise, good to see you in the top ten. Enjoy, Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/4/2011 7:15:00 AM
This is awesome.Tons of congratulations for this victory
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Date: 2/4/2011 1:13:00 AM
oh yes, anna.. so delightful and marvelous in language and imagery.. my best cheers for your win.. :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/3/2011 10:23:00 PM
Congratulations Annalise. I am glad you entered and happy to find your name her. I ejoyed. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/22/2011 5:40:00 PM
Excellent take on the wonderful photo Joyce posted, Annalise. It seems most of use are using personification and speaking in the voice of the mother dog. I like the way you had the fireman put the pups in his pockets -- got me a bit choked up. Best wishes in the contest, dear friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/22/2011 11:53:00 AM
Nice one Annalise, you have captured the image so well with your words. Good luck in the contest....:)
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Date: 1/22/2011 10:56:00 AM
Annalise, what a beautiful write, I absolutely love every line.. Good luck for Joyce's contest.. Hope your weekend is a great one, love Wilma
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Date: 1/22/2011 4:09:00 AM
Hi Annalise, This is a wonderful heart-felt free verse. Great contendor for the contest. Lainie
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Date: 1/21/2011 4:26:00 PM
Good one that reads like winning work..Good luck..Sara
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Date: 1/21/2011 4:13:00 PM
It is so beautiful, " I just love it, best of luck in the contest~~
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Date: 1/21/2011 12:24:00 PM
Oh how touching is this piece of poetry Annalise.. tender and emotion filled lines and the last line is a powerful one... good luck in the first contest by Joyce our friend... so glad she decided to do one... enjoyed and happy weekend with luv..
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