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POND like a tiny lake we laughed as darting tadpoles slid in and out of our eager grasping hands “childhood’s secret summer retreat” For Joseph May's Pyramids3---- 7 Lines Poetry Contest

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Date: 5/2/2023 9:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win for this whimsical 7-line poem. Carol Louise
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Date: 5/1/2023 9:31:00 AM
I love your poem, Andrea...beautiful nostalgia that tugs at the heart. Congratulations on First Place!
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Date: 5/1/2023 2:59:00 AM
Back to your poem to Congratulate you on your first first place win dear Andrea !
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Date: 4/30/2023 4:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win and for this beautiful poem my dear poet friend Andrea! I enjoyed your poem a lot. Thanks for sharing. Blessings to you always and your golden pen. Hugs...
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Date: 4/29/2023 4:30:00 PM
So lovely! Love the imagery, Andrea!
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Date: 4/29/2023 2:32:00 PM
A wonderful poem Andrea. Truly lovely, congratulations on the win.
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Date: 4/29/2023 1:08:00 PM
A beautiful poem of a childhood memory, delightful...I entered Pond as well, glad yours is a winner. Congratulations Andrea on your placement! Hugs
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Date: 4/29/2023 11:44:00 AM
- Happy summer memories, Andrea :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs
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Date: 4/29/2023 9:52:00 AM
Sweet, fun one Andrea. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 4/29/2023 8:58:00 AM
I remember a similar experience Andrea, Congrats on your win
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Date: 4/19/2023 10:11:00 PM
Love your childhood memory, dear Andrea . I can very well relate. We used to catch tadpoles thinking that they were minnows.
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Date: 4/14/2023 10:16:00 AM
I know a man..Whos really into the watery World Andrea he's U K based, but will travel Should you have need.? His name is Pond.. James Pond..!
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Date: 4/14/2023 10:16:00 AM
I know a man..Whos really into the watery World Andrea he's U K based, but will travel Should you have need.? His name is Pond.. James Pond..!
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Date: 4/13/2023 5:05:00 PM
Fun poem for the contest. In childhood I had the most fun times in my life. Thanks for sharing the memories, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 4/13/2023 10:56:00 AM
A fun write. Good Luck. Have a blessed day writing away..............
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Date: 4/13/2023 5:48:00 AM
Lovely. Wonderful imagery. Love it!
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Date: 4/12/2023 2:35:00 PM
What great memories when things were simple: ). Sounds like a great day in the joy of a child.
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Date: 4/12/2023 2:30:00 PM
Reads like a winner for sure. I got as far as looking up some examples of this form. LOL..Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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