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Meeting Expectations

Mamma praised her Johnny well For every word he learned to spell. She taught him to use the dictionary For each one he found contrary. Sally’s parents showed displeasure, Gave her a slap just for good measure, When she failed to get an A or B In Arithmetic or Geometry. Wanting to make his mamma proud, John studied and read his words aloud. He learned to spell so speedily That he won every spelling bee. Sally’s father sneered and said, “You can’t get ‘nuthin’ through that head”. Sally could only sit and cry And decide there was no use to try. John now has met his every goal. Sally is pregnant and on the dole. I can say without any hesitations, They both have met their expectations. For Paula's contest). (From comments I have received some readers are commenting that this is not always the result of how a child is raised. I never intended to say that it was. I was following the request of the contest and John's parents got the result they fully expected. They could have been disappointed but weren't. Sally's folks got what they were expecting. She could have risen above it but didn't. I am sorry about that. Joyce)

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Date: 2/22/2011 11:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Joyce in Paula Swanson's contest "Meeting Expectations". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/9/2011 4:29:00 AM
Get powers of observation and wisdom. Well written poem with a powerful message, Joyce. Many congrats on your BIG WIN! Lainie.
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Date: 2/5/2011 9:12:00 AM
Hi Joyce - Congratulations on your WIN in Paula's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 2/4/2011 10:31:00 PM
Joyce, congratulations on your win with this fine poem. You have great descriptiveness and rhyming throughout this work.
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Date: 2/3/2011 4:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/2/2011 10:39:00 PM
I'm with Deb here.Why did you have to explain anything . This poem needed no explanation. I took it for what you intended and the message is a valid one. I am glad to see you placed high with it. Congratulations, Joyce. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/2/2011 4:47:00 PM
Sometimes folks just don't want to think Joyce..I loved the layering of concept in this verse, and I'm sorry you felt a need to explain what could have been gotten from a wee bit of hmmmm...I enjoyed your thought process! congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 2/2/2011 3:54:00 PM
Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest, Joyce
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Date: 2/2/2011 3:30:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your winning poem in the Meeting Expectations contest with this charming entry my friend.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 2/2/2011 10:32:00 AM
People our often victims of their familys expectations, whether high or low, you did a wonderful job expressing that congrats on your fifth place win in the contest
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Date: 2/2/2011 8:06:00 AM
So happy to see you in the winners' circle, Joyce. This is a great poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/24/2011 2:49:00 PM
I read your footnote, Joyce, and I can see that parents who applaud every success are never disappointed. Sally's parents had little regard for their daughter's feelings and she grew up lacking self-respect. A very interesting poem that makes us think! Wishing you success in the contest, dear friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/22/2011 10:58:00 AM
This poem says it a lot, a child is a result of the love and nurturing they receive, but not in all cases, some children rise above to become pretty incredible adults, well done, best of luck in the contest~~
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Date: 1/22/2011 10:01:00 AM
Nice use of rhyme in this poem. The circumstances will predict the outcome as to whether or not they met their expectations. Interesting write. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 1/22/2011 8:39:00 AM
i like the rhyming. but i have to disagree with the subject matter. a diciplined child does not always end in rebelion or failure. sally could be pregnant but what if johns the father. of shal we presume that john is chaste.
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Date: 1/22/2011 6:16:00 AM
You got a great one here...I know it will do well in the contest..BG
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Date: 1/22/2011 12:49:00 AM
gripping work you have here, joyce! winning wishes in the contest! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 1/21/2011 9:34:00 PM
awesome, wonderful job
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