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Sorry I can't make this bigger. THis was my dear Ollyver, a miniature Eskimo dog whose unconditional love was the greatest I ever experienced from any living being.

“Even in your absence, there is hope my friend. On that rainbow bridge we’ll meet to love and play again.” M. Morris It’s at the Rainbow Bridge I wait for you, dear human friend; my love for you is deep. You were my only friend. You know that’s true. Each memory inside my soul I keep. As I wait here, I think about each time I followed you around the house and when you petted me. Dear friend, it was sublime! I’d lick you in return as we lay then in sweet contentment, and how well you know I would protect you. I too had no fears. while with you. When to Slumber Land you’d go, I’d be there too and each night for ten years! You’d leave four days a week. I don’t know why. Where did you go those days? Where did you roam? I wished to be with you. I’d almost die from my excitement when you came back home. In my ten fun-filled years with you, I’d learn so many things about you. At the door I learned to wait each night for your return. You’d enter, and I’d jump up from the floor. You’d catch me in your arms. For you alone I did that trick. You loved it. I could tell. You gave me treats and once - a plastic bone. That toy, unlike my others, was not swell! But mostly you got everything just right - the walks we took together and the food you let me lick from your plate every night (though I could tell some people thought it crude!) Your mate and children thought that I was bad. I barked at passersby. They’d yell at me. But mostly I believe I made YOU glad. I’m very sure I did. Don’t you agree? One night I went to sleep, but I did not awaken to your voice or smiling face. To Rainbow Bridge my spirit somehow got. Come for me, Friend. I wait for your embrace! For the Personification- Pets Talking Poetry Contest of Constance La France Option 2: Pet that passed away

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Date: 7/19/2022 4:39:00 PM
Artistically told from it's perspective. Sometimes I find God in instraments played at the beginning of songs and I tell Him How beautifull You are. But here I am reminded how God touches. and without words He spreads His love. for the first time I see this in this piece.
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Date: 7/11/2022 3:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your first placement Andrea. I knew this would score high. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 7/5/2022 3:55:00 PM
Oh, Andrea ~ Your poem had me in tears. They love us and we love them. And when they have to go, it's so hard. The Rainbow Bridge you reference is a beautiful poem, and so is yours.
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Date: 7/5/2022 9:56:00 AM
Andrea, I wept reading your poem, so emotional and beautifully penned. Congratulations on your placement in my contest, I love the quote too, bleasing~Constance
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Date: 7/2/2022 8:13:00 AM
So touching but your pet lives on in memory. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/2/2022 3:18:00 AM
Beautiful and I'm sure your dog was beautiful also - God bless you always and Congrats. Love, Gina
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Date: 7/1/2022 9:37:00 PM
A very touching tale.... ! I can gauge the amount of love you had for him. So.... your dearest companion would be waiting for you at the rainbow bridge. I am reminded of my dear Tippu. I had the same sentiments for him. Congratulations on our top win Andrea .....
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Date: 7/1/2022 11:31:00 AM
A very beautiful poem on pet. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/1/2022 11:16:00 AM
Our pets patiently wait for us whether it is for us to return, to take a walk or go for a ride. Paddy waits at the door for us with determined knowledge we will return. This poem really reaches down into that tender spot reserved for our special friends now at the rainbow bridge! Congratulations on your first place win! Ollyver - too cute!
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Date: 7/1/2022 11:01:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your first-place win! I love Ollyver's ears, too cute and I can help by running down the steps to make his picture larger. Save on word click on it (picture format) 2.0,3.0,4.0! So sad, you were so good for him.
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Date: 7/1/2022 9:10:00 AM
Congratulations on this win. WOW!!! A wonderful tribute and picture to your dear Ollyver. Enjoy your win and day with blessings...........
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Date: 6/14/2022 3:45:00 PM
These poems for this contest make me smile for the love and sad for the loss and happy for the hope. Yours is like that, so I loved it, Andrea. The sincere expression of love toward anything, is pleasing to my soul. Bless you sweet Andrea and your heartfelt poetry. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 6/12/2022 6:19:00 AM
They are our best friends... Excellent write... Love the whole dance, as it is close to my heart. Ann
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Date: 6/9/2022 10:14:00 AM
This is darling "When to Slumber Land you’d go, I’d be there too and each night for ten years!"and true!
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Date: 6/9/2022 6:23:00 AM
Furbabies wait at the rainbow bridge for their human friends. Sweet. Sorry for your loss.
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Date: 6/9/2022 5:41:00 AM
I am sure he will be there to meet you one day when you cross over the rainbow bridge. This poem tugs at the heart. I know what it feels like to lose a beloved dog. We had a lovely Shepard that was half Moscow wolf. His name was Shep. He was my companion and protector for years. He would let our two Siamese cats sleep on him in the winter and never showed aggression. I can relate Andrea. So sorry you lost him. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/7/2022 4:55:00 PM
Andrea, your writing is so excellent that I was fascinated as I read every word. I really enjoyed reading this heartfelt verse.  My very best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 6/7/2022 4:17:00 PM
Anatole France said...Until you have loved an animal, part of your soul will have remained dormant....i think there is a great deal of gratitude in this poem....from the other side of the veil...loved it
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Date: 6/7/2022 2:17:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this heartfelt verse. Blessings my friend
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Date: 6/7/2022 1:51:00 PM
Andrea, this is so heartwrenching. But I know the feeling very well. Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest.
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