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Chief Hawk Eye

The mighty Chief Hawk Eye Rests under this ancient tree All his weapons lost Ignores the sounds of English guns His heart heavy with his people’s sorrow Plays his flute towards the setting sun A man who loved too deeply Lonely and defeated His spirits remain free As music rises around him Shimmering colours in these enchanted woods Fades and vanishes into his soul His mind searches memories Of those long lost years Before the white man arrived.... The sad song of the thrush The tears from the clouds Pierce his body with pain Shadows dance around him His scared lands are stolen Mountains blasted open Gold ripped from the earth’s belly An end to the old ways of life He is ready to become a stone And to be left alone......................... By Tahera Mannan For Constance La France’s ‘Tell His Story’ Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/22/2011 1:05:00 PM
Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of Constance, Tahera
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Date: 3/22/2011 12:15:00 PM
Love your storytelling, Tahera! Congratulations on your amazing win in Constance's contest! Always, Annalise
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Date: 3/22/2011 11:29:00 AM
Always a pleasure to see you at the top, Tahera. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored fourth place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/22/2011 11:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win Tahera in Constance's contest " Tell His Story". Love, Carol
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Date: 3/22/2011 8:56:00 AM
Way to go, Tahera. Congratulations on your big win in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/22/2011 8:30:00 AM
Wonderful story, Tahera. Many congrats on your WIN. Lainie
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Date: 3/22/2011 8:00:00 AM
WEll done, Tahera....a very believeable and tale...it almost feels like it should be sung. Congratulations on your win! love, Carrie
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Date: 3/22/2011 6:32:00 AM
Congrats to you one your big win..you told the tale very well..BG
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Date: 3/21/2011 11:59:00 PM
enjoyed this piece Tahera, & congrats on the win
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Date: 3/21/2011 11:40:00 PM
hail to the chief!my happy cheers to you for the special win, tahera :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/21/2011 8:07:00 PM
Clever write Tahera. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/11/2011 8:46:00 AM
I haven't seen the picture for this contest yet, but I got chills reading your poem. I have a deep admiration for the Native Americans and hate to see how so much of their culture has been lost. Incredible story, Tahera! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/11/2011 1:50:00 AM
I can picture the scenes your words paint completely Tahera. Colours so lush, just lovely. Have a lovely weekend....:)
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Date: 3/10/2011 9:37:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest, Tahera, you poem captured the image very well~~
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