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Brahms Lullaby

The spiral staircase made her high heels sing, the metal tips on her heels dinged on the metal steps. 
The sound reminded John of bullets ricocheting on a tin roof he had heard two weeks before. 
She reached the stage and joined the other dancers and then one of the girls sang Brahms lullaby. 
John was enjoying a day’s leave at the hotel, last week it was full of German soldiers, Paris was now liberated and the look of joy on the Parisians was evident on their faces. 

Tomorrow his regiment was being deployed, to where he did not know, it was just after midnight when they got back to their camp; a couple of miles from the hotel. 
At the briefing the next morning the orders were given to assist US forces at a town called St Louise, It was 04.00 as they drove up a steep hill and from here the city churches pierced the mist.
They arrived at the town and he could hear sporadic bursts of machine gun fire, an American captain signalled Johns regiment to keep their heads down. 
He soon found out why as the whistling of artillery shells hit their target at the far edge of town. 

Silence now, and then they began a sweep and search operation going from house to house. 
Then he heard music, cautiously he entered and at the far end was a young girl of about ten 
John approached her and she smiled, he picked her up and she was still clutching the music box. 

He went outside and in case of snipers he closed it and now smiling crossed the square. 
There was a field ambulance by the fountain and John handed her over to the medics there. 
He started back to join his patrol and then the girl opened the music box which started playing, yes of course he had heard it before, the unmistakable sound of Brahms lullaby.




Written on Wednesday 6th June 2018

For one nine and sixteen poetry contest sponsored by Viv Wigley
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Beaufort Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 8:35 AM
Tom, I thought I would look at something you wrote a while back. This has very kind and tender sentiments and covers so many different aspects of human behavior and sensibilities. The story touches my soul and will be something I will think about at various times for the rest of my life. This is about the highest complement I can give to a fellow poet. Many thanks and smiles too!
Cunningham Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 9:32 AM
Thank you very much for your lovely comment Duke, much appreciated. I'm happy that you enjoyed the story. Sadly wars never really solve problems but create more. Tom
George Avatar
January 28, 2023 at 5:56 AM
Music finds its soul even amid turmoil. The war scene is described beautifully well as if you have first hand experience ! Great penning dear Tom.
Cunningham Avatar
January 28, 2023 at 7:34 AM
Thank you very much Valsa, thankfully I've never had to experience the horrors of war and I find it hard to believe that in this day and age wars are being fought. Tom
Carber Avatar
February 7, 2020 at 11:48 AM
Congrats Tom on yr 1st place-- you picked one of my favorite composers.
Cunningham Avatar
February 7, 2020 at 12:00 PM
Thank you very much L. J., without doubt one of the great composers, whose music is as popular today as it was back then. Tom
Kauffman Avatar
February 7, 2020 at 11:26 AM
Tom, Congratulations on your first place. The story in this poem, so well told, is filled with a touching irony. Music lives even among the ashes and always in the hearts of children.
Cunningham Avatar
February 7, 2020 at 11:58 AM
Thank you very much Sam, I totally agree, music you'll find in both happy and sad situations. Tom
Gentry Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 4:23 PM
Congratulations on your win. What an interesting story and very well told. Through the worst of times a piece of beauty can be found. Reminds me of the forest for the trees thing, except yours is beautiful. Enjoyed.
Cunningham Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 5:27 PM
Thank you Susan, glad you enjoyed it. Yes, sometimes light can come from darkness. Regards Tom
Roper Avatar
July 14, 2018 at 8:11 PM
Back with congratulations on your win and well crafted write . Hugs Eve
Cunningham Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 1:03 AM
Thank you again Eve, much appreciated. Tom
Hamilton Avatar
July 14, 2018 at 12:13 PM
Great story telling Tom, congrats on a fine placement!
Cunningham Avatar
July 14, 2018 at 5:20 PM
Thank you so much John, and of course a big thanks for hosting the contest. Tom.
George   Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 9:45 AM
What a story evoking such images of war and yet through it all...hope lives on through the beauty of music with Brahms Lullaby. Wonderful writing, Tom. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
Cunningham Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 9:50 AM
Many thanks for your congrats Elaine, glad you enjoyed it. Tom
Fisher Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 12:52 PM
Congrats! Really interesting poem. Haley
Cunningham Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 1:29 PM
Thank you very much Haley, happy you liked it. Tom
Wigley Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 11:15 PM
Congrats, Tom, I must admit I hadn't pegged this as one of yours, thought it would be more like Frederic Parker. A fine write, would make a nice mini movie. Well done. regards, Viv
Cunningham Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 11:27 PM
Thank you very much Viv, Id tried different combos , rhyme , sonnet but ended up with FV.Wasn't sure if the lines were to be stand alone, anyway took the plunge. Tom.
Pett Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 7:09 AM
Wonderful story Tom with a heartwarming ending, excellent write, good luck in contest. :))
Cunningham Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 7:10 AM
Thank you very much Roy, enjoy the weekend. Tom
Roper Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 10:30 PM
Tom, this is a great write. I know it took years for my husband to get over the sounds, but still sits with his back to the wall .. luck in the contest .. hugs Eve
Cunningham Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 12:13 AM
Thank you very much Eve, I hope he's better now, it must be a terryfying experience for anyone caught up in it. Tom
Talbot Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 7:44 AM
Tom, you have indeed written a masterpiece, however, after nigh on 24hrs of contemplation I can't rid my mind of the horror it depicts. A horror which persists to this very day; young innocent children orphaned as the result of wars'. I agree with your comment re. the Nazis' for had Blighty not reacted, then would we be putting our thoughts to paper? I think not! With much respect to you and fellow commenters... Mick PS Good luck in the contest!
Cunningham Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 1:17 PM
Thank you Mick, whilst there is good and evil then there will be wars, and we are constantly reminded of it in film, TV books and even poetry,it is heart-breaking to see especially innocent children caught up in the horrors of it.watching on TV about Syria and seeing the horrors there with children being dug out of bombed buildings and gassed by that lunatic Assad,one thing we should never become numb to it.Tom
Krampe Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 2:39 PM
Great storytelling, Tom. I loved the glimpse of hope and joy in a dark wartime.
Cunningham Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 2:51 PM
Thank you Agnes, sometimes in the dark horror of war there is a bright ray of light. Tom
Onclaud Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 2:00 PM
a terrible battle softened by the tenderness of a life's promised lullably...s tale lustrously scribed, tom... huggs
Cunningham Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 2:17 PM
Thank you Nette, even in war there is sometimes a happy ending. Tom
Andresen Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 12:38 PM
- Even during war ... it's good memory - A wonderful story, Tom - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 2:13 PM
Thank you Sunshine, Glad you enjoyed it. Tom
Smith Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 11:22 AM
Wonderful story telling Tom, well done...
Cunningham Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 11:45 AM
Thank you very much Charlie. Tom
One Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 9:01 AM
Wow Tom, that is quite a powerful write... I love the title and you told it so well..
Cunningham Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 9:42 AM
Thanks SO, shock horror, spotted a typo in the title , sorted now. Happy you liked it. Hope alls well Tom
Sands Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 6:32 AM
Tom this is a powerful story ,you have written. Well done! Good luck in the contest :)
Cunningham Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 7:01 AM
Thank you very much Heidi, it started off as a sonnet but couldn't get it all in so changed course at the eleventh hour lol. Tom
Trifiatis Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 6:31 AM
D-Day celebration and your marvelous writing is the most appropriate tribute to that historic day! Superbly written with a touch of hope! Good luck!
Cunningham Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 6:59 AM
Thank you Demetrios, The men who gave the ultimate sacrifice did not do so in vain, The evil nazi regime was destroyed. Sadly evil would flourish if we looked the other way. Tom
Williams Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 5:41 AM
Captivating story, I enjoyed it from beginning to end. Good luck in the contest Tom....Maria hugs
Cunningham Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 5:48 AM
Thank you Maria, glad you enjoyed it. Tom
Manassian Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 5:21 AM
I enjoyed this look at history with a creative insight on the lives of those touched by war. Sometimes...in the midst of the carnage, one must hold on to normalcy...and life. Intriguing write.
Cunningham Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 5:47 AM
Thank you very much Eileen, sometimes evil raises its ugly head and as a result wars happen, sadly the innocent are caught up in it to. Tom
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