Be Free, My Brothers

Penned like cattle, as if chattel,
     cages rattle, sounds of brattle,
          no more tattle, keen for battle.
Be free, my brothers!

The cause is great, our rights innate,
     not fuelled by hate, we’ll change our fate,
          we won’t be freight, not long to wait.
Be free, my brothers!

Marched out on deck, end of the trek,
     each one they check, from toes to neck,
          the merest speck, is cause for heck.
Be free, my brothers!

As we make land, I rub my brand,
     the time’s at hand, to make a stand,
          with me my band, just as we planned.
Be free, my brothers!

No longer sane, we share the strain,
     endure the pain, it’s not in vain,
          it’s all to gain, I break the chain.
Be free, my brothers!

Accursed whip, my clothes do rip,
     he splits my lip, I smash his hip,
          he’s lost his grip, knocked off the ship.
Be free, my brothers!

We're in the dirt, the words are curt,
     I wield the quirt, then shred his shirt,
          his blood does spurt, he's badly hurt.
Be free, my brothers!

The dock we shun, just feel that sun,
     we’re on the run, but not yet won,
          all said and done, it’s just begun.
Be free, my brothers!

Free of the snare, the wear and tear,
     the vacant stare, the matted hair,
          because we dare, to breathe the air.
Be free, my brothers!

So they give chase, don’t see the face,
     our fall from grace, because of race,
          their motives base, traded for lace.
Be free, my brothers!

More men appear, they mock and jeer,
     the end draws near, that much is clear,
          we hold life dear, so fight your fear.
Be free, my brothers!

At last we’re caught, not been for nought,
     got what we sought, for what we fought,
          to them we’ve taught, will not be bought.
Be free, my brothers!

Out in the field, wounds far from healed,
     blood not congealed, our fates are sealed,
          their guns they wield, we will not yield.
Die free, my brothers!

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Originally composed in 2013, this is one of my longer poems. I was unsure about letting it see the light of day due to the sensitive nature of the subject, but this was my take on a particularly dark part of man's history.

Submitted to the "Go Ahead... I Dare Ya!!" contest sponsored by John Lawless.
(1st Place)

Poem of the Day: 10 April 2017
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John Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 1:54 AM
You've worked so well with rhyme. D'you do it all the time? OK, I joke here. I'll shut up! But do admire this rhyming. I'll be reading this again, John.
Hoffman Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 8:29 AM
I'm glad you decided to share this poem, John. It is powerful piece that speaks volumes. You are a master at rhyming, my friend.
Delaney-Barron Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 8:26 AM
I’m so glad you chose to share this powerful poem. The structure is brilliant, with a unique rhyming pattern and repetition that strengthens the message. The contents are so important and while risky to share, taking that risk speaks the truth from a troubled history. Bravo! Thanks for being a bold poet!
Greener Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 7:48 AM
Very insightful poem and spot on what it conveys in todays world. I really like your rhymes they bring forth it's entire clarity. Keep on writing free.
Hamilton Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 10:11 AM
Glad you freed this poem, that was shackled to your computer, it was obviously crying for the very freedom it invoked. Congrats for POTD, I thoroughly enjoyed your internal rhymes, gives an urgency and importance to the subject material. a super 7
Michaels Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 1:04 PM
Thank you for the great comments, John. So glad you enjoyed it (and pleased that you picked up on the rhythm / urgency). Regards, John.
Andresen Avatar
April 11, 2017 at 1:52 PM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Michaels Avatar
April 14, 2017 at 5:33 AM
Hi Anne-Lise. Thanks very much for your comments. Regards, John.
Raina Avatar
April 11, 2017 at 1:43 PM
Congratulations on your first place....I can imagine the hard work that has gone in the making of this masterpiece ....loved each and every line....will add it to my favourites.
Michaels Avatar
April 14, 2017 at 5:32 AM
Wow, thanks for the amazing feedback. I'm honoured this is being added to your favourites. Many thanks. Regards, John.
Dietrich Avatar
April 11, 2017 at 12:20 AM
I see you have congrats here, so I am very happy for you for your win with this call for unity in the light of atrocity. I have seen so many movies based on this most terrible time of history, It is unfathomable to me how man can treat another human so inhumanely. Loved this part: endure the pain, it’s not in vain, it’s all to gain, I break the chain. There are new kinds of slavery in the world today. Oh, but if they could break their chains!
Michaels Avatar
April 14, 2017 at 5:32 AM
Thanks for the great comments, Andrea. You're quite right - whilst this poem is written about that specific time in history, slavery is still an issue today. Regards, John.
Roper Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 11:26 PM
Savored every word, John, congratulations on poem of the day
Michaels Avatar
April 14, 2017 at 5:18 AM
Thank you so much! Regards, John.
Talwar Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 11:16 PM
It's too amazing. A little lengthy though but interest I'd maintained. Too good it has. Some musical quality too. Be free my brother's repetitive created a tone and music .Kindly read my works too I've just joined.
Michaels Avatar
April 14, 2017 at 5:17 AM
That's very kind of you to say. Regards, John.
Asuncion Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 11:02 PM
Well-composed poem.... congrats on being picked....
Michaels Avatar
April 14, 2017 at 5:17 AM
Thank you for your kind words. Regards, John.
Raven Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 6:48 PM
Hi John, congratulations on your Poem Of the Day, the piece is most deserving of the accolade....Mike.
Michaels Avatar
April 14, 2017 at 5:15 AM
I really appreciate that! Thank you so much. Regards, John.
Duet Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 6:32 PM
What a statement! Bravo John! And, congrats on POTD.
Michaels Avatar
April 14, 2017 at 5:14 AM
Thank you for your kind comments! Regards, John.
La France Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 12:08 PM
John congratulations on port with this wonderful write.
Michaels Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 2:22 PM
Many thanks for your comments and support. Regards, John.
Wanter Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 9:17 AM
In my opinion this is right up there with the best poets of our time. A 7+++++
Michaels Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 2:22 PM
I'm absolutely speechless. Thank you so much for your incredibly generous feedback! Regards, John.
Deo Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 9:11 AM
Shalom, shalom (peace of Christ) John; congrats on this one for two main reasons: 1. For seeing the light of day when the political moon was auguring caution 2. For making a unique contribution with your words, dreams for others, & music. Anil Deo
Michaels Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 2:21 PM
Thanks so much for your kind comments. Regards, John.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 8:02 AM
A powerful piece John! Big Congrats on having this honored for POTD! 7 ; )
Michaels Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 2:21 PM
Many thanks for your kind comments. Regards, John.
Smith Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 6:43 AM
Freedom anthems are never gentle flowers, yours is certainly no exception, the fact that you feel it makes it necessary to be said. Congratulations for POTD honors John, and for your cause...
Michaels Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 2:20 PM
Thank you for your sage comments and great feedback. Regards, John.
Krampe Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 6:42 AM
Coming back with congrats on POTD
Michaels Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 2:16 PM
Thank you for stopping by again, with more kind words! Regards, John.
Ricci Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 6:21 AM
Good Morning John. This is exceptional and outstanding. The execution and expression are marvelous and powerful. A true must read out loud entry with emphasis and expression. Honestly. Be proud of this entry. Congratulations to you and "Be Free, My Brothers" for being chosen Poem Of The Day. It is so deserving.
Michaels Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 2:15 PM
Wow! Thanks so much for your wonderful comments, Lisa. Much appreciated as always! Regards, John.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 6:02 AM
Congratulations John! I'd say your poem is liberated :) xomo
Michaels Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 2:14 PM
Many thanks for your comments. Regards, John.
Puddifoot Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 3:51 AM
stellar rhyming in this one - both internal and end rhyme; to carry monorhyme through a poem of this length is no mean feat - congrats on your 1st place win in the contest!
Michaels Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 2:13 PM
Thank you for the kind comments and lovely feedback! Regards, John.
Pett Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 2:59 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in contest and achieving POTD John, so well written.
Michaels Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 2:11 PM
That's very kind of you to say! Regards, John.
May Avatar
April 9, 2017 at 8:55 PM
Congrats on your top win John
Michaels Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 2:10 PM
Hi Joseph. Thank you for your kind comments!
Leiser Avatar
April 9, 2017 at 7:47 PM
Excellent message in your fine poem, John! Congrats to your top win. :)
Michaels Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 2:08 PM
Thanks so much, Laura! Glad you liked it!
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