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A Different Song

To once again hear the renditions of the songbird’s morning trill as leaves upon the trees tremble in triad tones within the moorside tempest; and lyrical waves in unsung meadows symbolically crash against limestone walls and telephone wires in viola whines an archaic symphony. © Harry J Horsman 2022

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Date: 9/25/2022 4:15:00 AM
In my minds eye your poem took me right there to the sights and sounds of a peaceful place. Thank you for sharing this Harry. A lovely read for me this morning :-)
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Date: 9/21/2022 6:29:00 PM
different indeed. This is so cool, Harry. So will you start a novel for that one contest?
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Date: 9/21/2022 8:01:00 AM
This is very nice. It is peaceful to me Harry. A Fave :)
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Date: 9/19/2022 11:51:00 AM
oh, you quite transported me there, my friend - a truly lovely write
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Date: 9/19/2022 11:22:00 AM
ThanX again Sir Harry. We mourn passing of Connie M. Wong and the British Queen, QE2. SHALOM SHALOM
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Date: 9/19/2022 1:03:00 AM
This takes me to another land where I have never been before, thank you for your well written poem, it paints an impression on my heart. I Love this!
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Date: 9/17/2022 1:08:00 PM
Especially liked the singing note of the Telephone lines Harry, we get the birdsong In spring/summer at 4 am here Harry it tails Off around 6, An empathy with creation fills Your honest lines.'
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Date: 9/17/2022 10:48:00 AM
A fast-paced dance that I thoroughly enjoyed Harry. :) Linda Alice
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Date: 9/17/2022 10:05:00 AM
It's good to miss the Yorkshire Moors, a stark beauty, from.mynlutersry "visits". But Harry, you did ask J. Maverichba urgent question, "faith in the face of people who use/ prostitute church& Christ Jesus"? Watch first new poem with shalom shalom forgiveness
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Date: 9/17/2022 7:34:00 AM
I had a wonderful time reading this exquisite poetry, which was crammed with so much action, many vivid descriptions, and lovely music.
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Date: 9/13/2022 8:03:00 PM
Such an exotic and lively land, I would honor it's beauty and song if ever I could. I am faving it! Blessings
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Date: 9/13/2022 4:50:00 PM
Love the flow of your poetry, my friend. Bill
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Date: 9/12/2022 9:44:00 AM
Indeed it seems a melodic joy to know Harry! Your write is very beautifully crafted ! Happy Monday!!
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Date: 9/11/2022 7:13:00 AM
It is so enlightening to hear a birds symphony. Love your theme and your creative abilities Harry. Hope you are well and the dictators in Australia are losing power for they wish to control you there. Stay well my friend and remember we win in the end for we haved our Lord who is in control of this madness taking place all over the world. The countries they have brought the New World Order first are China, the Netherlands and Australia. They removed the weapons and now these ruthless tyrants
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Joe Maverick
Date: 9/17/2022 1:02:00 PM
Michael, its a living nightmare That is being enabled, yet can Be de-railed.. If just needs that Awareness and some Resistance ignoring the reality Is so counter to what Constitutes a better life, which In reality we all did.. Before the Improvements..If it wasn't so Sad it would be laughable.'
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/11/2022 7:21:00 AM
are causing food shortages, gas shortages, power grid shortages, and soon colapsing the economy and starting a bitcoin system controlling your money and based on your information you are tract with they will give you a credit score that will determin your rights. In China if you are a free thinker your score decreases and prividges are taken away such as flying, acess to help from the government etc. It is coming here and there if the mases dont protest and get rid of this cancer growth that is destroying our lives. Prayer is the best defensive tactic we can do. God bless you Harry and your family...
Date: 9/11/2022 3:48:00 AM
Nature's beautiful symphony, so sweet and euphonious falls in my ears as I read your verse. So beautifully composed, dear harry. Into my FAVE .
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Date: 9/10/2022 12:02:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this gem of a poem, with such action, so many sights, and such beautiful music! Evelyn :)
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Date: 9/10/2022 9:10:00 AM
Any music that comes from nature in its simplicity and beauty far outweighs the crash of waves against limestone walls and an archaic symphony that comes forth especially when added to this symphony is the whining of telephone wires. Fantastic write Harry my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 9/10/2022 3:50:00 AM
Wow fab symphony blend with nature and man made stuff. Kudos for this superb poem! <<<<<<<>>>>>>>^^^^^^^>>>>><<<<<<<< Plz read and comment my newest poem too.
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Date: 9/9/2022 6:56:00 PM
The song may be somewhat different, but the melody is still simple and sweet. This is beautiful in every way, my dear friend. Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 9/9/2022 7:54:00 AM
Wow!! Very expressive and creative a work. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 9/8/2022 11:14:00 PM
So beautifully written Harry…..lovely! Debx
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Date: 9/8/2022 11:03:00 PM
The pure music of nature in contrast to the artificial symphony of telephone wires, I know which I'd rather hear~
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Date: 9/8/2022 10:59:00 PM
I love the image of waves as the wind beats the long grass and heathers on the moors against the dry stone walls, yes it is like the sea in a storm.xx
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Date: 9/8/2022 2:30:00 PM
I love your Unsung Song!~lyrical waves in unsung meadows symbolically crash against limestone walls...I think beautiful.
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Date: 9/8/2022 9:14:00 AM
I like this a lot, harry; something very lyrical and appealing to me, and I can't tell you exactly what it is. I do like the images very much, however.
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