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Sloth Steaming Sin

Sloth’s Steaming Sin Sluggishness slitters solely straightforward Sedentary survival styles scold, strain Self-centeredness - sloth’s shinning standard Squandering silvers… spiritual sprain July 21,2022 11.31pm PS Syllable Counter Syllables Per Line: 10 10 10 10 Total # Syllables: 40 Proverbs 19:15 Slothfulness casts into a deep sleep, and an idle person will suffer hunger. Sin of Sloth Contest Judged: 8/2/2022 3:20:00 PM Sponsored by: Margarita Lillico Place 1 (one of the 8 first placers)

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/11/2022 10:15:00 AM

Clever alliteration Len. Congratulations on your win! Linda

Len Gasun
Date: 8/15/2022 12:39:00 AM

Thank you so much for your uplifting words and your congratulatory greetings my dear friend Linda/ God bless.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/6/2022 5:01:00 PM

This is so clever and supremely created Len. Well deserving of your first placement. Congratulations! Blessings xxoo

Len Gasun
Date: 8/7/2022 12:29:00 AM

Thank you so much for stopping by, your uplifting comments and congratulatory greetings my dear friend Connie. God bless you and make you safe always my dearest friend. Hugs

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/5/2022 11:04:00 PM

Very creative to do it all with 'S' words, simply sublime, and congrats!

Len Gasun
Date: 8/7/2022 7:05:00 AM

Thank you so much for your encouraging words and your congratulatory greetings my dear friend Michelle. God bless you always. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/3/2022 11:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away...................

Len Gasun
Date: 8/4/2022 11:18:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear friend Paula for your congratulatory greetings and your very uplifting words. God bless you always. Hugs

Valsa George

Date: 8/2/2022 11:07:00 PM

A great entry and a great recognition! Congratulations Len on your well deserved win !

Len Gasun
Date: 8/4/2022 11:17:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind words and congratulatory greetings my dear friend, Valsa. God bless you always. Hugs

Bill Baker

Date: 8/2/2022 3:46:00 PM

Great entry for the contest, Len. The alliteration was perfect! Bill

Len Gasun
Date: 8/4/2022 11:16:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear friend Bill for your very uplifting words. God bless you always. Hugs

I Am Anaya

Date: 7/28/2022 5:43:00 PM

Perfect alliteration and message and goes well with proverb 19 15! Len good work! Best to you

Len Gasun
Date: 7/30/2022 7:38:00 PM

Thank you for your visit and uplifting comments my dear friend, Anaya. Blessings to you always. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/24/2022 7:37:00 AM

awesome with the S alliteration, Len.

Len Gasun
Date: 7/30/2022 7:37:00 PM

Thank you for your visit and uplifting comments my dear friend, Andrea. Blessings to you always. Hugs