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Jeff Kyser is a retired software developer who lives with his wife Frances right ‘round the bend in rural Lacey’s Spring, Alabama. A late comer to the world of poetry, he has been writing contemplative and whimsical pieces on family, on redemption, and on faith for the last several years. His eight grandchildren are the source for much of his inspiration, fueling a desire to spur their imagination and to share his life’s journey with them.

Tall Tales 1 Finalized

Blog Posted by Jeff Kyser: 3/25/2022 3:13:00 AM

Thanks for participating in the Tall Tales 1 Poetry Contest! There were a lot of creative entries, and I enjoyed judging my first contest thoroughly!

 

I set up some “scoring” to help me select:

  • Several entries were eliminated for not having the requisite 3-5 stanzas.
  • From there, I assigned 1 to 3 points for each of: tall tale, meter, rhyme, and humor.
  • A “tall tale” was considered one with a high degree of exaggeration or unbelievability; obviously, there’s some subjectivity here.
  • Meter is an interesting subject, and perhaps more on that with another contest, but really the best test of all: reading it out loud. I recommended equal meter, but that’s only a guideline, and some will argue the reading is more important. 
  • Rhyme was preferred over near-rhyme
  • Humor is, of course, subjective, but some entries attempted humor and others, less so. 
  • Tallying these up, I arrived at a clear winner, a clear second, and 2 entries that were tied for third. I rounded out the top 10 scores with honorable mentions. There were no perfect scores. There are also no perfect judges, at last at PS anyway! :-)

 

As final thought on meter, consider the following two couplets:

 

There once was a lady from Freeling (9)

Who had a peculiar feeling. (8)

 

Once there was a lady from Freeling. (9)

Oddly, she developed a feeling. (9)

 

The first couplet, though not identical in length, produces a far smoother read in the limerick tradition.

 

It was a great privilege and honor to review your tall tales, and I look forward to doing so again soon!

 

-jeff



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Date: 3/27/2022 2:46:00 PM
Hi Jeff it was a fun contest and thanks so much for my placement, i like your thoughts on not having a strict syllable count to help make the meter flow better, hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/27/2022 9:38:00 AM
Congrats to the winners!!
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Date: 3/25/2022 9:25:00 AM
Jeff, congratulations to all your winners ~Constance
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Date: 3/25/2022 8:36:00 AM
Thank you for your helpful hints on limerick meter, Jeff. I agree completely. Forcing an equal number of syllables often destroys the rhythm of the lines. Personally, I think we would write better limericks if we ignored the syllable count, but that's just my personal feelings. Thanks, again, for my Honorable Mention.
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