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Suzanne is a Retired Registered Nurse certified in Med/Surg. She began writing poetry  in 1998. Since retiring she has participated in poetry groups both in the Community and on-line. She is originally from Australia, has lived in the Hawaiian Islands for most of her adult life and now lives on the mainland US.  Her poetry is a mixture from all these  places.   In her writing she has explored many forms but finds ease of expression mostly in free verse.  Her poems are included in an Anthology "A Bridge to ALL Nations."with other poets from  Connie's site: Poetry for Thought. One of the greatest joys in her life was to be contacted by Carol Mays, a fellow Souper, to publish an Anthology together, titled, " Poems of Nature, Enchantment and Mystery, available in Paperback and Kindle on Amazon. Here is a link.

https://www.amazon.com/Poems-Nature-Enchantment-Mystery-Carol/dp/B086MN2K6X

Suzanne has three poems included in the PS It's Poetry Anthology and three poems in PS: It's Still Poetry - An Anthology of Contemporary Poetry from Around the World also available on Amazon and most recently, three poems in "Radiant Vereses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry.". https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0DNWGWTFZ  

and is also a regular Contributor to Old Mountain Press Anthologies with poems accepted in the 10 most recent publications. 

http://www.oldmp.com/anthology/booksinprint.htm

 

 

 

 

 

New Contest- BANTU with UPDATE

Blog Posted by Suzanne Delaney: 3/22/2023 12:35:00 PM

 

Update:  I found another link about Bantus here:

http://www.writersdigest.com/writing-articles/by-writing-genre/horror-by-writing-genre/how_to_create_haunting_imagery

 

I have posted a new Contest today.

Time to brush up your Metaphor skills.

There is an article below that explains the form in more detail. Looking forward to reading your imaginative entries. 

 

Two-line Bantu (or Abantu) poetry developed from the Bantu people of Africa (speakers of the Swahili, Kinyarwand, Kirundi, Zulu, Xhosa and other related languages). It arose from the oral tradition of “call and response.” In the rhythm of their work and perhaps in the spirit of a game or to relieve boredom, people would call out to each other. The first speaker called out a line that contained an image. A second speaker replied using a second image. This second image was meant to function as an elaboration or metaphor of the first.

1. It has two lines.

2. Each line contains an image.

3. The two images work together to form a metaphor.

4. Bantu don’t have titles.

5. There are no rules about rhyme, rhythm or line length.

 

What does a Bantu poem look like? Sheila Bender used the Bantu poetry prompt in classes she taught. Here are student samples from her book Writing Personal Poetry:

Wire hangers on a bar in the closet

Wild geese walking by a lake.

 

Children in a circle on the floor.

The beaded necklace.

There is more info on the link below.

https://beforeitsnews.com/books/2022/08/sparking-your-writing-using-abantu-2550550.html



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Date: 3/24/2023 4:48:00 PM
Hi Suzanne...can we write more than one...a string of Bantus? Thank you and goodnight // paul
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/27/2023 4:49:00 PM
Hi Paul: Yes, I encourage you to write as many as you want but pick your favorite for the Contest. So glad you are joining the challenge. Best, SuZ
Date: 3/23/2023 1:25:00 PM
I have one for ya. It's just not up yet. I am proud that I thought of one!!!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/23/2023 5:20:00 PM
That’s great. More may come.
Date: 3/22/2023 2:24:00 PM
Im like Andrea, Im not too good at this kind of stuff. You make me think too much. That always gets me in trouble. I'll read a few and see if anything pops.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/23/2023 4:02:00 PM
You can do it!!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/22/2023 3:00:00 PM
Imagery is something felt on a deep level. If it is trouble you want to avoid I will understand. LOL SuZ
Date: 3/22/2023 2:03:00 PM
Hi SuZ, according to the link the first line could be in any of our 5 senses, making it all the more fun. What is your take on it? This looks like a lot of fun :))
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Suzette Richards
Date: 3/22/2023 9:28:00 PM
Thanks, Suz:))
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/22/2023 2:57:00 PM
Hi Suzette: Yes….I included the link so that people could read about using the senses. It was too much to put in the contest instructions. I’ll welcome all interpretations.
Date: 3/22/2023 1:40:00 PM
Suzanne, it sounds really interesting, I will have a whirl at it, thanks for the contest, blessings, Constance
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/22/2023 3:53:00 PM
Great, Constance: I know you have great observation skills and special insight. SuZ
Date: 3/22/2023 12:39:00 PM
this kind of thing is a bit hard for me. I really like the second example, that one I could really "see."
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/22/2023 1:31:00 PM
I agree ….for me too. That’s why I thought it might be good to practice looking at the world a bit more with the intent of making unusual connections. Please have a go if you can. I have one to post soon.

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