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Premium MemberHow Naive Can JD Be

       JD Vance will certainly get skewered
       For he came off as naïve, untutored

          Boosted the military
          Promoted prosperity

       Such naivete can get him murdered
Categories: untutored, innocence, military, money, murder,
Form: Limerick

Premium MemberRoosters From Another Creek

Urban jungle roosters,
born-again scarecrow,
to untutored city eyes,
tawny pipit stonewall  nester,
jet black Inca dove bereft,
of dovetail on a croque monsieur,
idle bone grub crawl,
mother hen to sandy brown,
and velvet bill gazer,
from an nearby creak,
recent rural migrant now,
a tree house side kick,
chickadee a late date sitter,
on this air flock beaky natter,
or tweet between the  ice float,
edgy grey day species wield,
their sprightly ruffled  feathers,
as an orthopaedic surgeon,
and their spatula when  scraping,
rancid bark off windmill elm trees,
gastric bugle trenchermen ahoy,
while ogling a fellow common redpoll,
oh these tummy rumble diners,
will zoom in on every gourmet,
tangled wire mesh feeder station.
round and round they’ll  fly,
on zesty mission beetroot,
a cock-eyed scavenger‘s delight,
are they siblings of  a  noble  order?
white tale mountain bluebirds swopping,
habitat for granite boundary  habit,
off key off discordant choirboys,
six sided snow bird chorus,
ear splitter for tardy wakening,
they cheep religiously as if,
their only  valid  creed  was,
window squinting  prayer meets
Categories: untutored, art, beautiful, beauty, environment,
Form: Ekphrasis


Premium MemberCoulda, Shoulda, Woulda

A trilobite born in a pond
     thought that he would evolve
   But untutored was he in DNA
     gene puzzles he just couldn't solve

   Two million years or three went by
     his fossil embedded in clay
   Just think if he'd known about DNA
     He'd be on your fish plate today
Categories: untutored, fish, food, future, giggle,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberToday

On this Day
On this day,

the lonesome vine broke,
A cargo ejected at nature's will, 
blood shatters from the womb 
another life from Life brought forth. 

On this day, 

umbilical cord severed 
the conception ripened 
A body clothed in innocence
untainted from the womb of Nature 

on this day. 

The mind in obscurity wonders 
The passage from unknown to the world  
untutored, unlearned  unweaned. 
what's the mission here ?

On this day

A servant of time,
A product of Prayer 
sustained through unceasing plea.
Live said He, Live, 

From this day

ecstasy transforms into realities. 
from the first cry,
the breath, garnished  looks and smiles.
to  uncensored path from dissipating  paean. 

And this day,

the whole earth waits for the manifestation, 
Who, what, where, and when?
A fire brand Ready to burn.
Thou quickening power of the spirit of Life, 
set the fire ablaze.
Categories: untutored, baby, birth, birthday, blessing,
Form: Free verse

Season Change

The leaves of Alder now are taking on 
Fragility of finely woven lace
 As Nature bids the sun: ‘Not yet be gone!
‘But stay awhile!’ though he moves on apace

The trees perceive the signs as they foretell 
With fading of the light, increasing chill
The portents of the changes they know well
And answer by transforming with a will

Should we not take example from the trees
When change shall come to pass beyond our sway
Adapt, protect and thus the travail ease
With life’s resource what could we not allay!

 Untutored prophets tell impending dooms
That pass bare-seen; undaunted life resumes
Categories: untutored, nature,
Form: Sonnet


Reserata Carcerem Lvi

Erewhile took hoisted oath crushed cod,
'pon Cecilia 'n' cramped Cynthia's nod.
T' his lusty lover he'd rehearsed
pored pledges gored b' lanky love's lurch.

Damp dell 'n forg'ry hewn dark deceit,
'n which sassy smirk 's draped - smothered spree.
Furred fabrics ergo "f cloning sewn
torn was b' bounty blitzkrieg b' time thrown;

"Trade thy love with me. I'll borrow",
thrived oft - offshoot "f th' ticker's sorrow.
But untutored mind 'n deceit lagged 
"s her words smarter than visage nagged.

Anon did wielded wits 'witch him,
'n' anon sent he her 'way raging.
        '20:07:25:11:00

Note:
a) of damp dishonesty
b) Written apace with Middle English lexis:
i) Erewhile - long ago
ii) Cod - a man
iii) Cynthia - moon
iv) dell - young woman
v) ergo - then
vi) oft - often
vii) visage - face
viii) Anon¹ - immediately
ix) Anon² - At once
c) The following are used with no syllabic consequences:
i) 'pon - upon
ii) 'n' - and
iii) t' - to
iv) b' - by
v) 'n - in
vi) 's - is
vii) "f - of
viii) b' - by
ix) oft - often
x) th' - the
xi) "s - as
xii) 'witch - bewitch
xiii) 'way - away.
Categories: untutored, love,
Form: Sonnet

The Wily Thorn

The wily thorn that signifies the rose
abides; some hapless fool will come along
untutored in the art of willful pose
to grasp, and sustain a sharp reminder!

His gift bestowed and modestly attended,
there stirs a trembling only she may know
whose pledge is true and joyfully intended,
first semblance of a passion soon to grow.

How powerful beauty's lure can be!
it supersedes, and pricks the heart to bleed,
and captured in its snare they're led
on rapture's path, where'er that path may lead.
Categories: untutored, love,
Form: Quatrain

Amongst the Dregs of My Cups

I do not, amongst the dregs of my cups,
Consider you worthy to be the theme 
For my untutored scribblings.
There, Madame, there: I put you 
In your place, amongst the detritus 
Of my life, the forgotten effigies of life, 
As she should be lived.
Yet, you do not acquiesce to my intentions,
And re-emerge into my consciousness
To disturb and argue for attention and 
Writings.
I am weak, and accede to your importuning
With versification to placate your demands, 
To show my love.
Categories: untutored, love,
Form: Sonnet

The Wily Thorn

The wily thorn that signifies the rose
abides; some hapless fool will come along
untutored in the art of willful pose
to grasp, and sustain a sharp reminder.

His gift bestowed and modestly attended,
there stirs a trembling only she may know
whose pledge is true and joyfully intended,
first semblance of a passion soon to grow.

How powerful such beauty's lure can be!
it supersedes, and pricks the heart to bleed,
and captured in its snare they're led
to rapture's path, where'er that path may lead!
Categories: untutored, love,
Form: Quatrain

The Wily Thorn

he wily thorn that signifies the rose abides, 
some hapless fool will come along, 
untutored in the art of willful pose 
to grasp it, and sustain a sharp reminder. 

His gift bestowed and modestly attended, 
there stirs a trembling only she may know 
whose pledge is true and joyfully intended, 
first semblance of a passion soon to grow. 

How powerful such beauty's lure can be, 
it supersedes and pricks the heart to bleed, 
and captured in its snare they're led 
on rapture's path, where'er that path may lead!
Categories: untutored, love,
Form: Quatrain

Gesture Re-Post

...a sonnet for R.S. Thomas

A shaft of straw lodged loosely 'twixt his teeth,
a shifty glance from here to everywhere,
he toils the livelong day 'tween farm and heath,
a sullen youth with wild and shaggy hair.
The elements have pulverized his face,
a body lean and hungry from the plow, 
in silence, with a slow and steady pace,
he struggles hard with sweat upon his brow.
Untutored still, yet he can read the sky,
the circle of a buzzard high and free,
more welcome to his sharp and seasoned eye
than any book or harsh calligraphy.
  Today I had him pause to shake my hand,
  a gesture he and I both understand.
Categories: untutored, dedication, writing,
Form: Sonnet

The Wily Thorn

The wily thorn that signifies the rose
abides; some hapless fool will come along
untutored in the art of willful pose
to grasp, and sustain a sharp reminder!

His gift bestowed and modestly attended,
there stirs a trembling only she may know
whose pledge is true and joyfully intended,
first semblance of a passion soon to grow.

How powerful such beauty's lure can be!
it supersedes, and pricks the heart to bleed,
and captured in its snare they're led
to rapture's path, where'er that path may lead.
Categories: untutored, love,
Form: Quatrain

Gesture

...a sonnet for R.S. Thomas

A shaft of straw lodged loosely 'twixt his teeth,
a shifty glance from here to everywhere,
he toils the livelong day 'tween farm and heath,
a sullen youth with wild and shaggy hair.
The elements have pulverized his face,
a body lean and hungry from the plow, 
in silence, with a slow and steady pace,
he struggles hard with sweat upon his brow.
Untutored still, yet he can read the sky,
the circle of a buzzard high and free,
more welcome to his sharp and seasoned eye
than any book or harsh calligraphy.
   Today I had him pause to shake my hand,
   a gesture he and I both understand.
Categories: untutored, nature,
Form: Sonnet

The Wily Thorn

The wily thorn that signifies the rose
abides; some hapless fool will come along
untutored in the art of willful pose
to grasp, and sustain a sharp reminder!

His gift bestowed and modestly attended,
there stirs a trembling only she may know
whose pledge is true and joyfully intended,
first semblance of a passion soon to grow.

How powerful such beauty's lure can be!
it supersedes, and pricks the heart to bleed,
and captured in its snare they're led
to rapture's path, where'er that path may lead.
Categories: untutored, love,
Form: Quatrain

Where I Stand

As Long as I can see, I'll wear my sins to the sea; That is where I will be so long as you breath. 
You can meet me by the shore, Where the untutored youth vaunt stylishly like babylon whore's; Where sinning is normal and we are accepted in the false forgeries of this world for our love is just embers burning, here is where my love shall stay, beautiful as a summers day.
Categories: untutored, betrayal, desire, heart, love,
Form: Prose Poetry

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