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Where I Stand

As Long as I can see, I'll wear my sins to the sea; That is where I will be so long as you breath. You can meet me by the shore, Where the untutored youth vaunt stylishly like babylon whore's; Where sinning is normal and we are accepted in the false forgeries of this world for our love is just embers burning, here is where my love shall stay, beautiful as a summers day.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/28/2015 2:26:00 PM

- Hello new member: Jourdan - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poem here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you good luck. - (Give and receive comments) - / / Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 5/27/2015 6:37:00 PM

back here again, Jourdan, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Skat A

Date: 5/27/2015 6:17:00 PM

Jourdan, Enjoyed reading one of your latest poems, Hugs SKAT"

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/27/2015 5:02:00 PM

Jourdan, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@