Gesture

...a sonnet for R.S. Thomas

A shaft of straw lodged loosely 'twixt his teeth,
a shifty glance from here to everywhere,
he toils the livelong day 'tween farm and heath,
a sullen youth with wild and shaggy hair.
The elements have pulverized his face,
a body lean and hungry from the plow, 
in silence, with a slow and steady pace,
he struggles hard with sweat upon his brow.
Untutored still, yet he can read the sky,
the circle of a buzzard high and free,
more welcome to his sharp and seasoned eye
than any book or harsh calligraphy.
   Today I had him pause to shake my hand,
   a gesture he and I both understand.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lane Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 4:14 AM
You painted the whole picture in this sonnet, Keith. He was wise in ways other than book smart; more useful to his way of life. Very nice, especially the line, "Untutored still, yet he can read the sky."
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January 8, 2016 at 6:00 AM
Thanks for your insightful review! Best wishes, Keith
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