Sweetening Poems | Examples

Premium Member Weighing Up Bittersweet Goodbyes

Goodbye cuts the air
with an odd, misshapen lance-
too sharp to swallow
it lingers on ragged breath
it's aftertaste scalds the soul

It feeds like a beast
clawing at the heart's locked gate
demanding more tears
its anger never subsides
its hunger never sated

Yet inside the wound
a new dawn begins to break
away from parting
sweetening bitter sorrows
with a palatable sauce

Goodbye has a seed,
to be cast in barren fields
fragile and daring
when given a chance to grow
now the stubble has been cleared

Kneading the old clay,
we shape what remains behind,
sculpting mementos
into what can not be done
before the goodbyes are said

Each farewell when made
to echo in memories,
fierce, bitter, and sad
can welcome what's to follow
by seeing sorrow as sweet

Premium Member Sweetening Life's Air

Like flowers blooming,
let us scent the air with peace;
breezing God's sweet love:-

Life Is Change

No eyes to see
its beauty
no nose to smell 
its fragrance
opening buds 
in silk elegance 
nourishing bees 
and butterflies
coloring day
with rainbow 
and sweetening air
with fragrance
then bowing stem
to life's demands
it drops its halo 
of colors
on sparkling
morning grass
or heart of rocks
in sorrow
to ripen fruits
it cannot taste
picked by thieves
or saints
with secrets
of life
encoded in seeds
miracle of
rebirth
it serves neighbor
without lament
as programmed by
the Creator 
and if man took hint
from humble plants
switching 
from ego demands
to God's 
sweet commands
all earth would rejoice
and sing hymns of glory
to life's Creator 
Love.

First Place Winner: Brian Strand-Only Feb 2025 Posted-2/26/25


Premium Member Then there is that star and the cradle

The search

Names all experience:

Discomfort searching for comfort

Poverty searching for more

Death searching for life

Unsweetened searching for sweetening

The not-yet searching for already

And on and on..

Then there is that star and

The cradle...

Ketchup Packet

My worst nightmare sat down beside me 
With the most angelic face 
And whispered things too hard to swallow
His smile sweetening the taste 
“All that’s wicked has the upper hand 
“All that’s pure has gone to waste.”

Premium Member Steam Room View

Sweetening is the morning due
      sheets of mist enveloping two 
     Shower curtain our naked view
   balmy gazes, we see right through 
     Sight to behold, her beauty true 
        saturated, midst honey dew


Premium Member The Belle of Yule

She walked in the natural belle of Yule 
lit up like the glitter upon the trees; 
Holding a dove waiting for it’s release 
in her arms the white bird appeared a jewel;
Harmony poured from every molecule,
joy rang in and sang of freedom and peace;
Flying off fingertips into the breeze
it’s wings carried an iconic symbol;

Encompassing each of the Northern Lights 
her smile grew like the return of the Sun;
Sweetening the lips like a candy cane 
something to believe in rose to new heights; 
The journey to warmth and light had begun
bringing some hope that all year would remain.

Premium Member Valley Haven

Valley Haven

Swooping down across the valley,
Glistening green sequins reflecting the sun,
Dozens of green parrots playfully rally
As their sunset ritual has begun.

Misty rain along valley walls
Brings a mystical Hawaiian rainbow
Sweetening the air as it gently falls
Enlivening the tropical foliage below.

I watch, enchanted, from my lanai
Awed by nature's brilliant display
Surely, none is more fortunate than I
To dwell in such beauty, day by day.

My refuge during this challenging time
With the world appearing tempest tossed
This valley exudes an atmosphere sublime
Assuring me that hope is not lost.

Molly Moore

A Public Preacher of More Money

He tightly sermonized on Harmony,
Neatly anchoring it in More Money:
How none of it unleashes Acrimony
And could crush A Holy Matrimony.
Soon, he alighted on Ceremony
But still built it on More Money:
The Humorless it clothes with The Funny,
A fiesta sweetening like Honey…

A public preacher, then, on More Money,
Now, his listeners fooling with Harmony
Next The Thing titling Ceremony.
More Money Man’s Doubly Assured Harmony,
Even the seeds from Strangled Matrimony,
Keeps tending with Authorized Alimony.

Deceptio

I'm just talking as if I don't know 
how to put the weight of mistakes 
on the scale anymore
a kind of beneficial oblivion 
capable of sweetening the sourness of mistakes

maybe I found the right way 
to lovingly tamper with disappointment
decreasing the violence of his damage 
and bringing it to a comfortable size
so that it fits in my jeans pocket 
and allows me to parade one more time like this:
the washed face of one 
who blindly trusts the very lie of his redemption

Vomit Poison

forget.
I looked there from the other side and there is nothing.

(as if the world's green carpet wasn't enough,
the golden grain of the beaches,
the mathematical accuracy of every stone that hurts our feet).

I'm tired of sweetening what has no taste:
the porch of the house that faces a dark dead-end street,
the confused dreams that crumble in the sunlight,
the poisonous illusion that something will change.

forget.
I looked there from the other side and there is nothing,
only the air tainted in pain,
just infinite cold space,
just the feeling of nausea caused by emptiness
wherever you go
but don't be sad, please.
save your tears for the worst.
that will still come

Premium Member A Light - 1

There is a light
Surrounding the soul
Like laughter and love
Calming and joyful
Sweetening thoughts
With inspiring
Smiles

There is a light
Caressing and clean
Falling all around us
Like grace so gentle
Coloring the air
In whispery
Praise

There is a light
Delighting with insight
Rhythms and rhymes
Poetry on the wind
Dancing with dreams
Piercing the dark
Embracing

There is light
Wonders of hope
Pouring from the heavens
Like rain, so soothing
Dews of exhilaration 
Flooded imagination
Serenity

There is light
Flooding the night
With stardust thoughts
Images of moonbeams
Awakening prayers
To assurance 
Belief

There is light
Singing in the sky
Glorifying His Son
The One who knows us
Loves without conditions
Gives the gift of
Freedom

I know Him
I praise Him
I love Him

Honey

Pay attention to the sufficient sugar,
the sufficient sugar is the most Sweet sweetening of all.
Simple, soft, sufficient sugar.
Never forget the syrupy and lovable sufficient sugar.

One afternoon I said to myself,
"Why isn't the crisp coleslaw more net?"
Never forget the total and everlasting crisp coleslaw.

The cunning, lost love sings like a pure love
Never forget the sly and dodgy lost love.

When I think of the sure sweetheart, I see sure eyes.
Down, down, down into the darkness of the sure sweetheart,
Gently it goes - the soft, the woolly, the wooly-minded.

I cannot help but stop and look at the Sweetness, saccharine sweetness.
Does the saccharine sweetness make you shiver?
does it?

Premium Member The Book of Numbers

I feel like Archimedes building calculus from scratch;
Got a lever I can lean on, but the fulcrum doesn’t match.

You’ll find them on the scoreboard 
And every roulette wheel.
They help you cheat at blackjack
By sweetening the deal.

I feel like Isaac Newton making gravity a game,
Setting poetry in motion, riding Kepler’s horse to fame.

They figure into interest rates
to calculate the yield,
And help the fans identify 
The players on the field.  

I feel like Alan Turing cracking codes at Bletchley Park,
Decrypting the enigma of injustice in the dark.

They calculate the census,
And quantify amounts.
They’re handy for those vultures
Who tally body counts.

I feel like when Bob Seeger sang of bad arithmetic,
And rocked his Silver Bullet Band in Hindu Arabic.

They give a helpful estimate 
Of what we’ll have to pay.
Just amortize your mortgage rate
And wait for Judgement Day.

Premium Member My Refuge

The kitchen is my refuge
When a respite’s what I need!
From the never-ending deluge
Of daily wants I’m freed.

I mix the oil and sweetening,
The nutmeg, flour and salt.
Add oats or chips or nuts in
With milk, and beat it all!

The warm and spicy smell
Is wonderful to savor,
But then we have, as well,
That so-delicious flavor.

Perhaps I’ll mix some bread up 
And set it out to rise
Until it fills the bowl up -
That yeast smell gets the prize!

I love to cook for company
A special dinner treat.
Perhaps a gourmet recipe –
Souffle or trifle sweet.

I really need to clean out
The cellar and the shed,
But I think I’ll turn about
And bake a cake instead!

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