David Kavanagh Poet Monorhyme

Steam Room View

Sweetening is the morning due
      sheets of mist enveloping two 
     Shower curtain our naked view
   balmy gazes, we see right through 
     Sight to behold, her beauty true 
        saturated, midst honey dew

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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 27, 2023 at 6:37 AM So steamy, such sultry ink! Meow. xomo David Kavanagh June 27, 2023 at 8:19 AM Easy there puddycat, oh what the hell get those retractable claws out just a little lol, cheers David

Jan Allison June 25, 2023 at 2:17 AM ooh err this is dripping with sensuality - perhaps a cold shower is the answer David lol! hugs jan xx Lin Lane June 25, 2023 at 9:35 AM Lol Jan and David. Suddenly, I feel like a voyeur. David Kavanagh June 25, 2023 at 3:48 AM Yeah Jan, hush!! these moments need no interruptions, thank you Lin, Jan Allison June 25, 2023 at 3:45 AM hahaha Lin x Lin Lane June 25, 2023 at 3:39 AM Shh Jan. Let the imagination have a moment. Carry on, David. David Kavanagh June 25, 2023 at 3:36 AM No cold showers Jan, at least not til the job is done, I reckon it’s best we let them work through this one lol, cheers David

Victor Buhagiar June 24, 2023 at 11:07 PM David, a lovely poem. Written with taste. David Kavanagh June 25, 2023 at 3:34 AM Thank you Victor, tasteful is good for the senses, cheers David

Lin Lane June 24, 2023 at 5:25 PM Sensual innuendos, David. I could picture the scene from the viewpoint of either gender. David Kavanagh June 25, 2023 at 3:32 AM Heya Lin, yes I was hoping for plenty of two way innuendo for all the readers, cheers David

John Loving Iii June 24, 2023 at 4:11 PM Rated R. Well you asked for it. David Kavanagh June 25, 2023 at 3:30 AM Indeed I did John, I’ll take R rating any day, cheers David