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Steam Room View

Sweetening is the morning due sheets of mist enveloping two Shower curtain our naked view balmy gazes, we see right through Sight to behold, her beauty true saturated, midst honey dew

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Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 6/27/2023 6:37:00 AM

So steamy, such sultry ink! Meow. xomo

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/27/2023 8:19:00 AM

Easy there puddycat, oh what the hell get those retractable claws out just a little lol, cheers David

Jan Allison

Date: 6/25/2023 2:17:00 AM

ooh err this is dripping with sensuality - perhaps a cold shower is the answer David lol! hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 6/25/2023 9:35:00 AM

Lol Jan and David. Suddenly, I feel like a voyeur.

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/25/2023 3:48:00 AM

Yeah Jan, hush!! these moments need no interruptions, thank you Lin,

Jan Allison
Date: 6/25/2023 3:45:00 AM

hahaha Lin x

Lin Lane
Date: 6/25/2023 3:39:00 AM

Shh Jan. Let the imagination have a moment. Carry on, David.

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/25/2023 3:36:00 AM

No cold showers Jan, at least not til the job is done, I reckon it’s best we let them work through this one lol, cheers David

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 6/24/2023 11:07:00 PM

David, a lovely poem. Written with taste.

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/25/2023 3:34:00 AM

Thank you Victor, tasteful is good for the senses, cheers David

Lin Lane

Date: 6/24/2023 5:25:00 PM

Sensual innuendos, David. I could picture the scene from the viewpoint of either gender.

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/25/2023 3:32:00 AM

Heya Lin, yes I was hoping for plenty of two way innuendo for all the readers, cheers David

John Loving Iii

Date: 6/24/2023 4:11:00 PM

Rated R. Well you asked for it.

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/25/2023 3:30:00 AM

Indeed I did John, I’ll take R rating any day, cheers David