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The Receipt

Saw a friend for lunch; we meet
To talk of health and aging.
A cozy booth; we schmooze and eat,
Our changes up for gauging.

The negatives of age contrast
With pics of a vacation
So beautiful that they surpassed
Our senior state fixation.

Until at last, we split the bill,
The credit cards extended.
We signed our names and knew the drill;
Our lovely meal had ended.

I folded my receipt in two
And in the bag I carry,
I stuffed it, like I always do,
So very ordinary.

We said goodbye and headed out,
Where home for us both beckoned.
About the check, I had a doubt;
I’ll look at home, I reckoned.

An hour later, no receipt
Appeared, despite my searching.
I sadly must admit defeat,
A getting old besmirching.

Premium Member His Story

his story surpassed
the road behind him at last
historical path
John Burroughs painted with words
the Catskills beautiful hue

Premium Member Farwell, My Poetry Soup Fun Run

Farewell Poetry Soup, to my Challenge run
I've surpassed the goal I set to pass someone
and I confess it didn't take very long to do
before becoming addicted, but now I'm through

There's no poetic achievement that I found
in blacking out words of others, round after round
Or in analyzing a poem written by another poet
I'm not a laureate and humbly admit, I know it

So, have it the challenges, you who are gung ho
It was fun for a while but I'm moving on, so...
wheels and magnetic boards for me... no more
I won't comment on poems just to up my score

It was interesting to play for a while but I'm done
Writing poetry I conceive on my own is more fun
Amusing were the known AI users who chose to play
those whose words written without AI are on display


Fear To Take A Nap, Never

Fear to take a nap, never
To wake to life again
Only surpassed by what out-stares
Morn-fresh into its pain.

Let Sit And Cry A Bit

I see my nation, they weep 
My leader rejoice now and then
Ancient issues as always be
Ignorance and joy 
When actual life weep
The fights and struggles end to this not
Mind was read but sorrow was found 
We cry and lament but hope a lot
How could renewed hope be real?
Just an agenda that never been real
My refined neighbor 
In mouth we surpassed thee 
In name our superiority shout
Real life I wish for no potholes that kill cars
For opportunities and securities 
But our failure, still failing 
Still winning in illusion
Who of what generation would be
Savior with no vague views
Truth be told and here still stand 
Potential I heard we still leads 
The unit corrupt highly fatal
Death and hatred wish to other
But all linger down from the led 
How sadly speaking minds are now?
Just let sit and cry a bit

Premium Member Sky drifts into Sea


       Sky seem to touch the distant ocean
       Vastness surpassed my limited vision.
       Sky and Sea were with me in unison,
                         as I walked on sandy- rocky beach.
       Waves, rolling, roaring, rising high
       amusing silent witness azure sky.
       Sky-blue? Ocean-green? Which thread to apply,     
                       for veil of Mother Nature to stitch?
       Petrichor of wet sand particles I smelt
       crawling crabs, corals and clams I met,
       moistened windy breeze over sea I felt,
                       pleasant pretty charms to make me rich. 
       Overwhelming beauty of sea, I visualized,
       on depth of emotion I was mesmerized,
       too small was my existence, I just  realized,
                        appealing to any one or each.
        Where the sky drifts into the sea
       Vastness, wideness, enchanted me,
       so ridiculous my quark-type identity,
                                   Eternal Divinity to reach?


Fortress

Beyond the jungle of the evergreens 
Were metal points in the sky 
that surpassed the highest peaks 

The tones of the structure
Were of grays, 
Browns, 
And creams 

Multi-layered with window frames,
Two outer concrete figures,
And a brown door with a pearl-like handle 
That was envisioned by dreams 

This mystic gingerbread-like
Fortress had no visible road to proceed 
It seemed it liked its seclusion
Not even a sight of living figurines 
But what kept it company were the critters
That hid among the trees and stream 

Trees traced of piney, woodsy, subtle with a sweet scent
Was among the light breeze 
The stream was cloud-like flowing 
With its own flow-like routine 
The water was so fresh it had an earthy aroma, 
With natural minerals in between 
After breakfast the squirrels and deer would
Watch the blue skies as they gleam 

Though you may not see the fortress
While diving as it seems 
You can try to find its hiding spot
Among the peaks between the trees

Premium Member Deixis

On the occasion of Shakespeare's passing

At this remove, two score and one hence
What have I to show for recompense

For the gifts with the world you gladly shared
The likes of which none have compared

So I'll tip my hat to the one on the throne 
Whose works surpassed all since we've known

And I'll gather what flowers are strewn my way 
And stand up straight on these feet of clay

Knowing what thought might cross my mind
Will still leave me so far behind

To strive and stumble and wrestle my way
In pursuit of what little I have to say

Premium Member Stephen Hawking

25th on “100 Greatest Britons,” Stephen Hawking
used ground-breaking "text-to-speech” talking.
Given few years to live with Lou Gherigs’ Disease,
he surpassed expectations when life he did seize!

Premium Member HEART THORNE

Bitterness within
Agony and Pain
Coldness outward
Hate arises
Settling pause
Trust no more
Peculiar sure
Torture high
Fulfilling why
Love doesn’t live here
Forbidden enter
Thorns cut
Deep down wounds
Surpassed in no return
Broken unspoken words
Outdone
Withered and disguise
Hardened agony
Tightened grip
Emotions destined
Thorne of never heal.

Slippery Silence


Time; how so soon it comes to be this fast. 
Regards to her- gives the best with no rest... 
Time at service, expectation surpassed, 
Looking forward to mate to pass such test. 

Invisible cat's eyes can't be denied. 
Lovely tongue: many precautions to tame... 
Beast with jokes, laughter rarely roam aside
The smiling face of genuine joy; truth's aim. 

Bold enough to be a nice daring dove. 
Moreover, good a simple gentle beast. 
Patience gives edge to discover such trove-
To beat the false image, ego set least. 

Thanks for the good-bad days of every week. 
Thanks for pushing through while your mind seems weak.

Premium Member Ambition


A young man with dreams down his head,
To soar to the sky he was led;
He climbed the hill so fast,
His own self he surpassed,
Then thought his freedom may be dead.

Premium Member STREET CARNIVAL

On our first date we had a fabulous fun
                                     joining in procession of a street Carnival .
                                    We were prepared to meet unfamiliar guys
                                          from various different organisations.
                                       Bugle, Saxophone, Tuba, Clarinet, flute
                                    Mostly in high pitch, few were low ! Trying 
                                 to synchronise with beats of Drum and Trumpet,
                              in chorus !  Gorgeous,  though not  in desired symphony
                                   Enthusiasm surpassed lack of perfect tune.
                            We enjoyed horse riding with some unknown people
                               flying coloured flares shining on silvery spangles.
                                 Memorable night !  Fantastic fun in street festival.

If Spread Or Contained

On how many levels
does true genius spawn
Is its gift comprehensive
or surgically drawn

Does it drive our emotions
like intellect swayed
Or stay pointed and focused
in only one way

Is it able to migrate
to conscience from mind
Can it cross a new border
or hill to be climbed

Will it outgrow the limits
indentured by class
Enhancing our psyches 
— all borders surpassed 

(Dreamsleep: January, 2026)

Fall in a nutshell

Have I ever told you, 
How Autumn gained his second name?
Now I will,
May the story stick to you like a stain.
Long ago, Autumn was a respected man, 
Better, he was a king,
stronger than three elephants,
smarter than a fox,
scary as an ox.
Until a fair maiden named Summer ask to wed,
they shared the city, hand in hand,
"Through life and death" she said.
But Summer had malicious purposes,
She gambled, made bogus deals,
Autumn, was astonished, he realized she wasn't to his appeal,
they had a divorce, his family, the city, was oh so sad.
Later, people stroke back, and Autumn lost everything, everything he had.
The family had fallen, Autumn became ill and passed,
In the afterlife, he was a god. He made sure anyone who stomped on him, he surpassed.
He was cold, he was bright. He would never fall again,
it was a cruel nickname; he hated the stupid nickname.
That's how fall got his other name.

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