Speculation

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My cousin died several years ago, now. 

Close together, we chat.
Relatives, cousins - our mothers: the twins.

In the wind, ghosts;
we speculate.

We wonder while we
chitchat and munch.

Distant memories
of practical jokes, tokes;
days before she ran away;
& not questioning her
upon her return.

Sitting on my lavender bedspread;
laughing, listening; forlorn-ing.

Her i.d. tags, army surplus look,
blonde hair; my long locks, dark brunette.

In the Summer week,
we speculate on ghosts;
something we know nothing about.

We stood, took turns
standing over his coffin -
her brother joked
to relieve the tense.

All together, our gang;
our mother’s brother was twenty-five…

My cousin was fifty-two;
in the wind, ghosts,
I’ve surpassed

speculation, leans differently today,
knowing one day,
this world will fade,
as another comes into view.

Close together, we’ll chat,
as relatives speculate.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 8/11/2025 4:20:00 AM
It is so hard on us when we lose a close family member but remembering them in tales of their life helps the healing process. Thanks for sharing this one about her/him and your feelings toward her/him. Sara K
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/11/2025 7:15:00 AM
Thank you, Sara!
Date: 8/10/2025 8:16:00 PM
Kim, this really touched me. It feels like sitting down with you and hearing family stories—full of little details, memories, and that mix of laughter and loss. “In the wind, ghosts” really sticks with me. Beautifully written.
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Date: 8/10/2025 8:43:00 PM
Thank you kindly, dear Rowena! I appreciate your comments!
Date: 8/10/2025 4:16:00 PM
Interesting, truly - the end doesn't seem so different than the beginning...maybe it's that way for those in the light, we'll always share light <3 love the emotion in this
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Date: 8/10/2025 4:48:00 PM
it will be the left behind generation who will wonder about us. Thank you, Paige! I always look forward to your comments, leaning in and listening to what you think. <3
Date: 8/10/2025 3:54:00 PM
the 'coming' will definitely change our scope and 'speculation.' well said, Kim...enjoy your week, Sara
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Date: 8/10/2025 4:49:00 PM
Thank youkindly, dear Sara! Hope you’ve had a wonderful weekend!
Date: 8/10/2025 12:24:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful yet sad "Speculation" write. Yes, this world will fade. Have a blessed day writing away.............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/10/2025 4:51:00 PM
I find it so interesting, the way Pam and I would talk about eternity, then she left too soon (for me). Now, we know time draws closer to many of us going too. (not too soon) Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 8/10/2025 11:41:00 AM
- We thought it was fun to scare each other into believing in ghosts during sleepovers in our childhood/teenage years, but did we really believe it, or were we just living into an exciting story... - I think there is "something"... I've seen and heard... but what is it? - hugs
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Date: 8/10/2025 4:53:00 PM
I like to think my family is enjoying their afterlife and not lingering in our sphere, at the same time it seems that we experience something of them occasionally. Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 8/10/2025 9:35:00 AM
We may not have the answers, we can speculate a real part of life. Bless the family that stays together, prays together and for hope to see them again in the new world. Just beautiful, Kim __xhugs
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Date: 8/10/2025 4:53:00 PM
Yes and Amen! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 8/10/2025 9:21:00 AM
I think the dead like cheering up, and a bit of conspiracy adds to the debate. Must be where that saying comes from. ''If only the dead could speak.''
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/10/2025 4:54:00 PM
Interesting thoughts, Paul! :)
Date: 8/10/2025 2:44:00 AM
Seems your ghosts are having a lark when they get together. And why should we not share our memories? Lovely poem.
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Date: 8/10/2025 4:54:00 PM
Truly :) Hugs and thank you, dear one!
Date: 8/10/2025 12:39:00 AM
Beautiful poem my dear poet friend Kim. Reminds me when relatives/family see each other again, so many speculations, sharing memories etc. I enjoyed reading your amazing free verse write today. Thanks a lot for sharing. Thanks also for your visit on my poem. God bless you and the whole family. Happy wkend/new wk ahead! Hugs
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Date: 8/10/2025 4:55:00 PM
How interesting life must be on the other side! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 8/9/2025 11:38:00 PM
I like how the poem comes full circle back to speculation. It's full of nostalgia and some painful memories... all part of this life. There's a better life to come. Thank you for your visit to my page and the hug. Blessings :)
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Date: 8/10/2025 4:57:00 PM
I am drawing in a breath as I read your comment. Yes, nostalgia and some painful memories. Most difficult was when my mom died 4 years ago…can’t get more real than that. Hugs and blessings, dear one!
Date: 8/9/2025 9:36:00 PM
Evocative however delicately so, snapshots or glimpses stirring memories, the conversations, indeed speculations. You have captured this so well. xomo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/10/2025 4:58:00 PM
Thank you, Maureen! You always see the sharper points of our poems. You are much appreciated xx
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