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A Rich Rhyme

Louis Watson loved well made, toy ships, and had a fine collection, Since father was a sailor himself. Like aged wind's novel directions. Louis loved sailing toy ships on Crystal Pond, like gaiety filled youth. He'd pretend they sailed on open seas, laden with candies and fruit! His family lived on the edge of town, beneath pink-beige starlight, Looming as evening warblers began singing, to scarlet Mars' delight. Louis had fun with best friend, Fred. They had boat races, ofttimes. Ships flew to the pond's far side and back, overseen by green pines. Rain's tinkling footsteps had faded, into gold sunset's famed flames; When family, of heart's familiarity came, like blossoms uncontained! Louis lived in the house of endless motion, like eternal, teal waves, Full of plans, murmurs, creeping and dashes, in butterscotch days. Scandalous thunder left scarlet skies appalled, amidst fragrant dusk; Over their street of songbird sonatas, and of lemon breezes, brusque. Nights nuanced by northern lights, had neighbors arriving for visits; Bypassing bittersweet nightshade, or scents riding gusts, like spirits! 'Silver vases' held their own flowers. The thirsty poured 'snake gourds.' 'Elephant apples' fed large appetites, as 'cannonball' blooms, warred. 'Zinderella' lilac got dressed for the ball, but 'Billy Button' was ready; When 'starflowers lit up nights, and 'voyage champange,' felt heady. Louis dreamt of owning a unique ship, for his birthday was coming; Like colorful birds dream of nectar, when they are sweetly humming. As his birthday dawned, pink and golden, his hopes were surpassed, When he saw his dream ship, and its rhyme written by Father, at last! Father had entered a toy shop, after seeing a rare ship in a faux pond; And soon bought that pretty ship, like many marvels, du vaste monde! I saw a ship a-sailing, A-sailing on the sea. And, oh, but it was laden With pretty things for thee! There were comfits in the cabin, And apples in the hold, The sails were made of silk, And the masts were all of gold. The four-and-twenty sailors, That stood between the decks, Were four-and-twenty white mice, With chains about their necks. The captain was a duck, With a packet on his back, And when the ship began to move, The captain said, "Quack! Quack!"
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Rodrigues Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 7:37 AM
Mmm delicious like this butterscotch days! Fave for me.
Buehler Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 11:11 AM
I appreciate your remarks and your kind fave more than words can say, Kim. Have a blessed day. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
August 18, 2025 at 2:01 AM
Evelyn, you're a wonder. I always look forwards for your Saturday couplets and now short poems too. Great poetry.
Buehler Avatar
August 18, 2025 at 11:11 PM
Your words bring happiness, dear Victor. Thank you for your gracious comments. :)
Poet Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 1:52 PM
In mirthful echoes, a prank unfolds, Evelyn. I cherished this fanciful verse, adorned with a captivating starting point.
Buehler Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 4:49 PM
Thank you for the genuine joy elicited by your kind remarks, Sotto. It was a pleasure to read this. Blessings.
Greenhough Avatar
August 16, 2025 at 3:14 PM
Laughing, so funny. I loved this whimsical poem with an intriguing introducktion. Lol.
Buehler Avatar
August 16, 2025 at 6:18 PM
I'm so happy that you got a laugh from this story, Hilda. Thank you very much for your words of appreciation. :D
Goldsmith Avatar
August 16, 2025 at 12:18 PM
WOW!!! What a creative/fun ~ write/story you have here with a Cute Picture. Love It... You should be writing books. Have a fun day/weekend writing away..........
Buehler Avatar
August 16, 2025 at 6:15 PM
Paula, thank you so much for your gracious remarks. I'm happy that you enjoyed my story, and it thrills me that you could see me writing books. You have a joy filled day and weekend, too. :)
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