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Premium Member First Love

Fresh in mind
A lightening bolt in me
But safer, kinder
We slipped off conformity
In triggers of encrypted chemicals
No slap-on labels
No pull to sticky corrections
No show of egos unveiling
Our mismatched skills did not get in the way
We wooed like outfielders catching
Off balance when separated
Ignoring sweet word stumbles
Joyful together,
             sharing each other's detours
Our shadows weaved to one another
              leaning, like twin towers
              till issues snapped at our heels
              a re-evaluation
              unfortunate contusion
              apply another bandaid

              de-stabilizing  

              pressure points

              a catered
                            drift 
                                  to others.
Brazen memories -
              for the love that precedes the end of love
              still stirs.









Poem revised: September 15th. 2020

When Frustration Creeps In

What do you do when frustration threatens to destabilise?
I tend to look for a chocolate bar of a decent size,
And wait for a new strategy to materialise.

My recent bout of frustration,
Is due to my failure to convince others there is a situation,
That requires them to do a re-evaluation.

It is time to stop saying wow,
And that time is now,
For priorities to become the mainstay of any show.

Am I the only one with my feet planted on the ground,
When it comes to spending millions on a children's playground,
If there is no money for housing the homeless to be found.

Can nobody else feel the winds of change,
Or hear the waves that now come in a larger range,
Likely to come ashore at any moment and our lives re-arrange.

What do you do when there is no chocolate bar close at hand?
And a new strategy in your lap does not land,
That is when Faith may be the only thing left on which to stand.


Press Rewind

IF ONLY I COULD GO BACK AND TAKE A SECOND LOOK AT THE CHOICES I MADE.

FIGHTING, SCREAMING WANTING MY WAY DIDN'T CARE WHO I HURT OR WHAT IT MIGHT DO 
TO ME.

I WAS SELFISH AND I DIDN'T CARE ABOUT NOTHING OR NOBODY I HAD A NASTY ATTITIUDE.

MY MOUTH WAS ON A RAMPAGE I WAS USING IT TO ALL THE ADVANTAGES I COULD.

NO MATTER WHAT I THOUGHT OF ONLY MYSELF AND MY OWN FEELINGS THE WAY I TREATED 
MY FAMILY, MY FRIENDS.

I HAVE PUSHED THEM AWAY I HAVE DESERTED THEM I HAVE GONE TO THE EXTREME IF ONLY I 
COULD HAVE THEM BACK.

I TOOK THEM FOR GRANTED I TURN THE ICE COLD SHOULDER ON THEM BUT NOW I AM 
EXPERIENCING THEIR PAIN.

FROM PEOPLE WHO COULD CARE LESS ABOUT MY WELL BEING WHO WOULDN'T CARE IF I 
DIED TOMORROW.

I SEE WHERE I HAVE MESSED UP THE SUN IS SETTING ON MY SKY AND IT IS DARK AND 
GLOOMY.

THE CLOUDS ARE GATHERING TO CREATE A SHOWER FROM THE SKY.

THE TEARS ARE STREAMING DOWN MY FACE I CANNOT GO ON THIS WAY.

I NEED RESTORATION I NEED RE-EVALUATION.

TO RESTORE WHAT HAS BEEN TAKEN AWAY FROM ME.

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