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Premium Member Overly Particular Judges

Those overly particular judges
Give me a halt when I see their contests
Asking to write what I feel
In hard form plus a kyrielle
I better go and take my long bed rests.

At first, I did once, spending my whole night
Started from the topic I needed to write
Half of pantoum, I dozed off
Felt like floated with the roof
My poem was posted after a week, fight!

All entries were judged after some few months
My poem moved to next page, new poems in front  
Mine wasn’t found on the list
After passing judges’ wrist
Whose strictness lied on perfect rhymes and fonts. 

Those overly particular judges
Give me a halt when I see their contests
Asking to write what I feel
In hard form plus a kyrielle
I better go and take my long bed rests.
Form: Limerick

Lip Bent Overly Yours


Most dastardly
Executive Majesty,
we serve at your pique pleasure
obsequiously so 

Yea, Darth Lord,
we be the surreptitious, servile ones:
Leper skin publicans, publicly hiss reviled

Tonsil rear ends torqued low 
is our mealy-mouth status quo

We’re liquored up lap dogs

Always lip bent overly yours

Tongue rolls of surfeit flattery,
buttery tones of praise gluttony piled on

Nay, Imperial Vader,
we echo only your strident, bellyaching growls
from our sphincter pie holes

Boast bastardly
King El Presidente,
and we cower at your cheek displeasure
ingratiatingly so

Our speech undignified, 
flesh market wench pride
was thirty silver pieces sold 
minus six-feet degrees below

Aye, Commander-in-Chief Bellow Nero ...
Imp patient Sanballast ground zero,
your every atomic jinn wish gets grovel granted

We bow mice-men be the fawn minion pagan pawn devotees,
submissively submitting to such spittle humiliation willingly 

Ever always lip bent overly yours
Form: Burlesque


Overly Attentive

There’s a difference in a restaurant,
Which I’ve lately been discovering,
Between attentive service
And what I think’s more like hovering.

If your beer or wine glass empties,
Yes, it’s nice if they inquire
If you’d like to have another
Or there’s more that you desire.

Yet if posed by different servers
Once or twice or even more,
It’s like folding up your napkin
As you seek the restroom door.

I like waiters who will notice
What you eat and when you’re done
But you’re left to your devices
Once the main course has begun.

It’s a fine line to distinguish
Who will let you eat in peace
Or which waitstaff is in need of
Certain culinary police!
Form: Rhyme

Overly Dependent

Don't stop loving me
I'll just crumble
Don't stop breathing 
I will follow
Don't stop trying
My dreams will tumble
Don't stop being true
because i love you

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