On Thin Ice Poems | Examples


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Skating On Thin Ice

He stamps the ice beneath his feet
Fallen leaves, gifted from the trees clinging to his soles
Softening the thud of clumping boots
Patterns shimmer in the fading light
As he trudges up the path
A reveller hoots
Somebody laughs
A drunk is haloed in the street lamp’s torpid glow
Echoes of himself; of seasons long ago
Surely the decorations were much brighter
Surely the streets were full of singing
Red robins; church bells gaily ringing
Fragrant pine and holly
Those were the seasons to be jolly
Couples kissing ‘neath the mistletoe
Santa bellowing: “Yo ho ho,”
Of course there was proper snow
Not damp and mist
And rain
It’s plain
They’d got Christmas all wrong 
Again!
His feet begin to glide
On frost mimicking snow
On his face a grin 
He sails through his gate
Never too late to recapture
The rapture......
Of an illicit skate

Premium Member Fishin' On Thin Ice

Cletus considered himself an expert angler, handy with reel and rod.
He'd landed ever'thing from wily rainbow trout to North Atlantic cod.
He'd fished the streams, rivers and lakes from sea to shinin' sea,
But he met his Waterloo on an ice fishin' expedition as we shall see!

He bought a tidy little fishin' shack that was really very nifty,
That he could haul aboard his pickup, a beat-up old Ford One-fifty.
He purchased a parka, gloves and boots to weather the fiercest storm,
And took his pals Jim Beam and Jack Daniels along to help keep him warm!

He drove upon the ice and set up his shack on a North Dakota reservoir,
Settled back anticipatin' a nibble on his line and then he lit a fine cigar.
He took a snooze but was awakened by a growin' rumblin' sound.
At that he pulled on his boots and got up to take a look around.

Alas, a huge crack in the ice was creepin' inexorably t'ward his Ford!
He espied a beckonin' floe passin' by and quickly jumped aboard!
Cletus shivered as he saw his truck and the shack sink in a trice!
"Damn", he mused, "I reckon I misjudged the thickness of the ice!"

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired

Dancing On Thin Ice

Days and nights 
  spinning out like a checkerboard quilt 
Dancers on thin ice 
  We move through the veils of time 
We move in the dark night 
like moths around a light 
Days where the sun shines so bright 
Leave us to contemplate our plight 
Dancers on thin ice 
we are fragile and alone 
   in the depths of the Milky Way 
The night sky is filled with pinpoints of light 
Our dreams are the blanket 
we use to cover ourselves
keep us safe and warm  
  The cold winds will inevitably come 
Dancers on thin ice 
We survive as best we can 
Knowing all the time 
   that "love is the answer"


Premium Member - On Thin Ice -

Aware .....
Did someone see
My butt is sore
Did someone see
Now I'm sure both yellow and blue
Did someone see
I look around quickly
Did someone see
I wish I could shout loud
Did someone see
I get up in a hurry
Did someone see
I wet my butt
Did someone see




18.01.2013
A-L  Andresen :)

Dancing On Thin Ice

Scratch the surface
like a skaters blade
dancing and gliding
graceful in the movement
of which
alters
the perfection
of smooth untouched coldness
to find 
icy particles
crushed together.
Allow it to melt once again.

Dancing On Thin Ice

Let the motions
of the moon
     guide you through
the bitter years
     There's no escaping 
the scythe of the Grim 
Reaper
     but before you learn 
the truth about the end
   Dance your dance!
I know, I know
             that you are 
            dancing on thin ice
  but even while lights
you can move gracefully on the floor
or in a garden (if you are lucky enough 
    to be in one)
      Defy time and 
dance to the music 
            of the celestial 
orchestra
       only you
     can carve 
your initials into stone
     Fleeting rhythms 
              and fleeting years
but you see through the haze
     you'll see the truth 
when it comes upon you
     and as it approaches
               be ready 
for it enters softly
like a kitten walking 
   behind its mother


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