Dancing On Thin Ice

Scratch the surface
like a skaters blade
dancing and gliding
graceful in the movement
of which
alters
the perfection
of smooth untouched coldness
to find 
icy particles
crushed together.
Allow it to melt once again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 16, 2010 at 11:21 AM
I am so pleased to have been able to read your poetry this morning Liz. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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