- On Thin Ice -

lol, I've been in this position before, good poem about ice Anne Lise!

Hi Anne Lise - I can relate to this, and can sense the embarrassment you felt and self-control you displayed when this happened to you. I joined the falling down club a long time ago. Once again, you have written an emotionally honest poem. - Much love, Gail

Lovely imagination penned quite nice. Loved always, my sweet friend, bl

hahahaha..I picture myself before in your poem my dear friend Ann Lise (^__^). first time to do the ice skating and Its really hurt my butt for days..great poem from a great poet like you :) Hugs, Maria

nice write Anne...were you skating at the time?

This is an excellent poem with an excellent image, too my dear friend Anne-Lise. Reading it gives me a great and wonderful vicarious experience on ice. Hope I can have a first hand experience someday. It's so fun I'm sure. Thank you so much for sharing and your wonderful comments on my latest poem! Have a blessed day to you and your family always! love and hugs, Leonora

Ut oh..you fell down? Thanks so much for stopping by my writes. Light & Love

So nice to return and grab a smile from your work as always... Be patient with me it will take some time to catch up... hugs n luv Michael

The worries that women have.

Had me chuckling because once I took a fall on a busy street and the contents of my purse flew all over. Many people stopped and I quickly got us as fast as I could and wondered if my butt was wet from the snow. It is natural to get up right away so thank goodness nothing was broken. Nicely done. love phyl

Absolutely charming! For the first 10 or 12 years of my life, I practically lived on skates... I miss those carefree days! Loved your poem... hugs and much love! xox

Really liked this, it's so funny and creative. And it really captures the essence of winter time:) xxxxx

Love the repetition of those lines....really shows the depth of concern for being seen at your worst by others! You made me smile! Great before I go to bed! Hugs! :)

Dear Anne Lise...what a lovely poem...thank you my sweet poetess for your great sharing... enjoyed so much <3 <3 <3 luv and big hugs ..:)

Dear Anne, Thank You very much for your kind compliment! And yes I love P soup! I think your poems are lovely and you're A great poet! Husna

wow. how unfortunate yet it's a good poem - PJ

Haha, too funny, Anne-Lise! I did see. Just kidding. Glad you didn't hurt yourself. It's the winter over there but it is sunny and in the 60's here. Great write!

Oh yes this brings back memories,, just love this!!!!!!!

I hope that not you but based on what happens when one gets on thin ice..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara

I like this Anne Lise. No I did not see. You are safe with me. thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Dear Anne, You ask the question : Did someone see? My answer is... I wish I were able to see…ha-ha. Love it! Have a nice weekend. Thank you

Anne-Lise hope it's not true, we have lots of snow at the moment and I HATE SNOW...how is Arild?...have a peaceful weekend ...David

hahaha, I know this feeling from when I was a young'un!!

This is cute, Anne Lise! I can picture you looking around to see if anyone had seen you fall. Thank you for your sweet comments on my poems. I appreciate you taking your time to read them. Love, Kim

I see! I see! gotcha! Hehehe, hilarious penned Anne, I just remember my old memory, i think worse than you are, I got slipped in the crowd and fell right on the wet mud, can you imagine how dirty was my jeans at that time and the shame that I've got? :p hehehe, i really enjoyed the freshness of your poetry today, have a wonderful weekend Anne - hug, yanny