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Premium Member An Ancient Wondrous Being

There’s an ancient
thing of wisdom
in a cavern
in the sea;
deep down in murky waters
lying, sleeping peacefully.

At times it will awaken
take a travel-contemplation
or perhaps a short vacation
to collect new wisdom-seeds.

Sometimes it peeks
out from beneath
those liquid silvery waves;
then it dives and waters quiver;
just like diamonds on a river.
Then the diamond dancers fold their
crystal wings above its’ head.

Throughout umbral brine it searches
for others of its’ kind;
often stops to ponder
if it’s all that has survived.

We may thrill to glimpse it
as it bobs amid the waves
of the Okanagan, Loch Ness
or some other distant place.

Perhaps its’ mind’s about to burst
with the knowledge of the past;
after centuries of living
in the dark abysmal mass.

We humans must not harm it
or let anyone alarm it;
for it could be that this dragon
is a wise and gentle thing.
Perhaps within its’ heart lie the notes
that will make this planet sing.


1-3-2022
A STRAND (1045) Poetry Contest
Brian Strand

Kraken

In sunny days of joy we climbed aboard, 
Wide eyed, Wellingtons and Duffels.
Sat on salty varnished benches,
handed weighted feathers and orange string.

Kraken was the one to know,
Six fish on a line would show you so.
We honed our skills in Girl Pats arms,
Whilst humble feasts defined us. 

Okanagan knew the score!
With turbo knives and plunging boom,
we danced with butterflies and doom.
In summers ever after.

Under Krakens watchful eye 
We kissed and tryst and laughed and lost,
Daring feats with exploration,
the ties we bound would save us. 

Kraken whisked us in a party
Juggling fiery wit, and poison.
I pranced and posed and shivered fools, 
Okanagan then was dead. 

Days defined by those that tread upon them,
this day was one of those.
Mourning, heavy, thick and slow.
Crowds, a blurring backdrop.

Of course Kraken came to sooth us, 
we floated in her arms.
With petals and dust, my heroes troubled soul alighted, 
Returning to the sea.

A smile, a knowing nudge and nod, it brightened.
There’s much more than this, you’ll see.

Wildfire

Thunder and lightning 
Without any rain
Spells big trouble 
Here we go again

Our spring flooding season 
Has barely came to an end
Wildfire season is now here
So hard to comprehend 

The firefighters scramble
The helicopters are in flight
All are working extremely hard 
To take on this difficult fight

The inevitable knock on the door
Given the evacuation alert 
Be prepared to leave
The police men assert

Anxiety and fear
Harder to ignore
Pack up the essentials 
Keep them by the door

 All the hardworking crews
Are gaining the upper hand
My evacuation notice is lifted 
Won’t have to leave my land

My nightmare is over
But the fight is far from done
Firefighters will still be busy
They’re in it for the long run


** I’ve been pretty busy, and unable to write for a while. There are 3 wildfires within 20 kilometres of my place here in the Okanagan Valley. I’m in a safe place, but if the wind picks up, things could drastically change.  :(


Premium Member They Say That, Nessie Is Dead

They say, “Nessie is dead”, 
because there haven’t been sightings, for years.
Ogopogo still lives, as does M’okele M’bembe.
What if they are one in the same?

Oceans, caves and caverns,
are spanning the globe; 
what lies within its bowels,
remains undefined.

Perhaps, “Nessie”, tires of being ogled;
spends the summers in Lake Okanagan and 
winters in the warm, Gold Coast waters?

Perhaps, Nessie ages in a warmer, 
more private climate?
Why stop and smile for the 
underwater cameras?
Even water giants, can be…
Paparazzi-shy...

Ancient and time-worn legends,
Never really die;
perhaps fracked earth, 
has simply added another room,
to her lair; 
a secret hide away?

Wild Horses

Wild horses gallop over the fermented 

lands of the Okanagan
 
in southern

British Columbia- 

toward the mountains-

toward the Pacific ocean-

It’s a living flight of beauty-

a stampede of  hearts

that pound the land-pulsing-

And at the end of the trail

in the ocean rain-

the necks of the horses rise 

up like towers of pride

establishing(in the thunder

with their hierarchy-

the order of the wilds-California Blue

Premium Member An Ancient Wondrous Being

There’s an ancient
Thing of wisdom
In a cavern
In the sea;
Deep down in murky waters
Lying, sleeping peacefully.

At times it will awaken
Take a travel-contemplation
Or perhaps a short vacation
To collect new wisdom-seeds.

Sometimes it peeks
Out from beneath
Those liquid silvery waves;
Then it dives and waters quiver;
Just like diamonds on a river.
Then the diamond dancers fold their
Crystal wings above its’ head.

Throughout umbral brine it searches
For others of its’ kind;
Often stops to ponder
If it’s all that has survived.

We may thrill to glimpse it
As it bobs amid the waves
Of the Okanagan, Loch Ness
Or some other distant place.

Perhaps its’ mind’s about to burst
With the knowledge of the past;
After centuries of living
In the dark abysmal mass.

We humans must not harm it
Or let anyone alarm it;
For it could be that this dragon
Is a wise and gentle thing.
Perhaps within its’ heart lie notes
That make this planet sing.


Awaken Taste Buds

Awaken taste buds  



 Lovely Linda 
 Makes food tasty
 Um um good 

 Peach Chipotle BBQ Sauce 
Your taste buds won’t 
Be the same 
Chipotle is the one to blame.

Peach & Apple Salsa
Time to have a siesta 
Red Wine Antipasto 
Divine 
All you need is a glass of wine 

Olive Tapenade
Takes you over to a promenade 
Fire & Ice Wine 
When cooking it’s smelly 
That now turns into a Jelly 

Cranberry & Jalapeño Vinaigrette
One try 
 Your taste buds won’t forget 
Lemon & Dill 
Smells all the way down the hill

I have to tell you 
Go on the web 
Tasteoftheokanagan.com
Where you will find foods galore 
 The Best of the sunny Okanagan
You will ask for more.

Premium Member Crystal Clear

The window guys came to install the new glass. They took away the old glass that had become filled with moisture. The seals had failed, the result of nineteen years of Okanagan sun beating down on them. It's funny how we don't notice how things deteriorate over time, it happens so gradually, then one day you wake up and see and wonder why it took you so long to notice. I have had this happen with relationships so now I am ever vigilant when it comes to the ones I love. Unlike my windows I don't wish them to be replaced or perhaps I should worry that they may wish to replace me. The light is now shining into our home and as I look at my wife I smile and we look out the window together.  The view seems better with someone I love by my side.

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