An Ancient Wondrous Being

There’s an ancient thing of wisdom in a cavern in the sea; deep down in murky waters lying, sleeping peacefully. At times it will awaken take a travel-contemplation or perhaps a short vacation to collect new wisdom-seeds. Sometimes it peeks out from beneath those liquid silvery waves; then it dives and waters quiver; just like diamonds on a river. Then the diamond dancers fold their crystal wings above its’ head. Throughout umbral brine it searches for others of its’ kind; often stops to ponder if it’s all that has survived. We may thrill to glimpse it as it bobs amid the waves of the Okanagan, Loch Ness or some other distant place. Perhaps its’ mind’s about to burst with the knowledge of the past; after centuries of living in the dark abysmal mass. We humans must not harm it or let anyone alarm it; for it could be that this dragon is a wise and gentle thing. Perhaps within its’ heart lie the notes that will make this planet sing.
1-3-2022 A STRAND (1045) Poetry Contest Brian Strand

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Date: 1/4/2022 11:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely write. Loved your ending. Have a blessed day and New Year..................
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Date: 11/30/2021 3:22:00 AM
Truly exceptional, creative and inspiring poetry my friend. Every verse a golden delight. Yes, once I too had glimpses of this wondrous being, before my eyes closed to enter this dark world of man and its divisive and wicked ways. A fav.. a gem ... God bless..
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Date: 11/8/2021 6:36:00 AM
Just beautiful M.L….. I am faving it . I want to read it and journey along with you all over again. I love perhaps within its’ heart lie the notes that will make this planet sing . That would sure be a joyous gift for us all . Susan :)
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/11/2022 2:18:00 PM
Thank you Susan.
Date: 11/4/2021 7:55:00 AM
Straight to my faves list; too many ways I love it to mention
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/7/2021 1:30:00 PM
Oh good, so you are a Nessie fan? Thanks.
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