No Comment Poems

Comment!
No Comment!
What to Do?     
Is There a Rule?
Some poets never comment
back to you.
So why comment to them?
Advice needed.
Poet lost in comment land.


* with a special thank you, to
all of you, who have done so,
with grace and friendship.


July 30, 2019
11:3pm...Read More

Who slander's a poem? Can count just to 'One'
With no rhyme or no reason, at best is not kind, 
And if not this, a rapist, who'd fain waste my time, 
Am I fool who's seduced by dark thoughts from a...Read More

i
plead
the fifth...Read More

The Comment Witholders

Read others poetry but will not say boo?
Perhaps their gang here at The Soup,
  may not approve of you?
But the poets with big hearts in
  comments names you will find,
Their torches there to encourage you
  all of the...Read More

When Donald Trump rants
or a drunk pulls down his wet pants

Mike Pompeo runs his detention camps
in Gods name of course

When the Fox
Is wiser than the hen

One day Freddie
will boil in mercury

never to come back
from the dead

Queens will have their say
Pushing...Read More

Waiter waiter!
look!

	but monsieur
	you ordered a minnow soup, n'est pas?

Waiter waiter
Not one swimming 
around in my soup
a brown minnow full of brown poop


I don't want minnow poop
in the soup

why look, its a bald beady eyed minnow
waiter! I swear this minnow is...Read More

To get to this  degree
I worked harder don’t you agree 
Young enthusiastic and free
Ill surely blossom on the family tree
The motto is keep moving forward 
So don’t surround yourself with a coward 
At the moment I have no comment...Read More

On Stopping Big Ben

Our bell is silent now;
Silence marks the passing of each hour.
The tower has no comment, makes no sound
Despite thirteen tons of primeval power.

Our bell is silent now;
The sun dimmed in mute protestation
The day it stopped, the day...Read More

I read your glowing comment
My work was ‘the best poem you’d ever read’!
I had a huge grin upon my face and a swelling in my head

I proudly told my hubby and then he said to me
“Jan, I’ve read that comment...Read More

I tried to cook my husband’s string beans
But they came out wrong.
My kitchen skills are rather weak
While his, of course, are strong.

I used the pan he favors
And the oil was sesame.
I added almonds, just to
Jazz it up by a degree.

My...Read More

This poem is only meant in humour and is to be taken light heartly . . . 
No real offence is intended here - forever hold the peace . . . ; )

The POTD Blues

Woke up this morning not a...Read More

Further observations in the THIRUK-KURAL on those* who would be King: K389 and K390 WITHOUT COMMENT

[* such as short-term presidents, chief and prime ministers, governors, dictators and the like]

K389: chevikaippach chotporukkum panpudai veenthan
       ...Read More

I stand for you, you vote for me,	
I win, my title now M.P.	
I have the traits that you thought key,	
respect, work hard and honesty.
	
My first day here in Parliament,	
to aid all my constituents.		
The ayes, the neighs, it makes no sense,		
the...Read More

Here comes a word,
A word that cuts as a sword,
You could have heard it’s foreword,
From a songbird or a ladybird,
But I renew your memory,
Of the rocks in our eyes.

I will whisper, mime or even shout,
If this will bring attention,
Prevention and...Read More

Same inflection in his voice
both when he said
"no comment, please" 
and
"have a nice day."

So I won't comment 
on good or bad.

But, I must ask. 

For some there exists
No home in the light
And 
No home in the shadows.

Where should they reside?
The...Read More

 >Why did that writing bug, choose me?
Why is it when I lay down at night?
That is the time I have to write.
Otherwise when I rest my head.
Words float around inside instead.
When I should be, fast asleep in bed.

As I...Read More

A never-ending story
The untold is about to reveal
Now it turns out to saga
Everything seems to be unclear

Though truth does unfold
Many tend to disagree
They keep on telling you
To believe what’s not meant to be

To trust injustice
To disapprove the truth
But don’t fool...Read More

Those Successful


No comment upon the richness of science
It glamoured lives offering meagre chance
A class of successful notes 
Further tyranny from unwanted games.


May be in the form of war or peace 
A nudity of success hitting the target
May be it would...Read More

Words I write...erased
Words I speak comes out one ear
Love I send...hated

Your words left unsaid
But, instead, tucked in my head
Wondrin' when it's said...

I dread the silence 
I need you, I want you now 
Patience...self-control 

Singing and dancing
Playing piano in mere bliss
Thought...Read More

Blink the eye once,
And many will have died,
with every inhaling and exhaling,

Issues arise daily,
comprising danger than peace,
If only we knew,
'How do real men die?'

is the question at hand,

 

Privacy is paramount in our day to day life,

but, Spikes be tyrants?

Hell...Read More

I remember this nothing was ever said I have a clear conscience...Read More

                    Writer's Block

I've been suffering from writer's block lately...more into drawing, and playing the strings has been keeping me locked in...Read More

(a response to a provocative post)

Your voyeuristic anal post
Has got me choking on my toast
I should have better things to do
Than commenting on sex and poo
Whilst everybody likes a joke
‘Tis somewhat niche, the anal poke
Night up the alley, hard to...Read More

                     ....My Poem....            
  I dare you not...Read More

                                My Sullivano photographed bad 
   ...Read More