Why do we write negative poems? 09-08-25
It’s raining outside-
no, more than that.
The rain falls in blocks,
thick curtains that turn the world to ash and silver,
smothering it in the hiss of splattering drops.
Outside my old home
stood a bamboo tree, four meters tall.
On days like this
(when I wasn’t welded to the TV)
I’d watch its branches bow and sway,
like a fishing rod straining
against some
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Categories:
negative, 12th grade, poetry,
Form: Free verse
When it comes to anything with me
... NO seems to be the word that pops to mind
AP: Honorable Mention 2025
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Categories:
negative, relationship, together, words,
Form: Free verse
No need indeed
Essence Poem.
No need, indeed, chaff and chatter,
Positive hocus focus, doesn't matter.
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Categories:
negative, appreciation, encouraging, prejudice,
Form: Rhyme
Size Matters
When I think of food and drink,
it's no surprise
the question does arise,
with booze some choose to let it breathe
and defer their bottle of wine,
I prefer to savour the flavour
and give mouth to mouth to mine.
(Que Syrah, Syrah!)
Some say, “The glass is half full,”
with accent on the positive,
some see the glass half empty,
and focus on the
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Categories:
negative, drink, humor, humorous, wine,
Form: Rhyme
Negative Thoughts
Why do I have these everyday?
Where do they come from anyway?
Once I awaken the voice begins.
And doesn't stop until days end.
Who is that voice inside of me?
That daily thrives on negativity.
It never has good things to say.
Complains continually throughout my day.
"What's with that person walking by?"
"They didn't even bother saying hi!"
"Why did he or she
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Categories:
negative, 12th grade, 7th grade,
Form: Rhyme
Travel Slow
Originally published in Affairs of the Heart, Vol. 2 August 2017
If and when you pass through this world,
Make it mighty slow.
If you pay attention to everything
People say as you go,
You will always be tired,
And kept in a stew,
Because a negative tongue
Will always have something to do.
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Categories:
negative, travel,
Form: Rhyme
Positive Not Negative
Appreciated flame in icy winter night
Jealousy is a true deep sign of love
Positive jealousy is a wise dear light
Much jelly ices cooking slip slide
Like crazy negativity damage sight
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Categories:
negative, life, love,
Form: Free verse
Positive attitude towards Life
Guys, why only a few persons out of thousands triumph?,
Answer for this simple question is positive attitude only,
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Categories:
negative, 10th grade, 11th grade,
Form: Sonnet
Rehearsal
They forbid my travels, and money transfers
A hostage of criminal times
To all that is negative I am immersed
Expectedly drowning in wine
You are lucky to stay at the positive side
It’s an obvious thing to admit
A sort of dialectical suiside
Which I often forget to commit
Exhausted, I’m lying in bed the whole day
Eyes closed, but I’m not
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Categories:
negative, deep, irony, philosophy,
Form: Rhyme
Follow your Dream
Sometimes you are good, but you just don't believe,
You have negative thoughts, you let your talent blow away on the breeze.
Do what you want, you could write even draw,
It doesn't matter what you do, if your happy its never a chore.
Put it out there for others to see,
Some will like it and some just
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Categories:
negative, appreciation, dream, encouraging, future,
Form: Rhyme
Delusion
Delusion must be a comforting thing;
To see the world just how you like.
To give you purpose every day
And let reality take a hike.
But don't be troubled
When I say that;
Delusion
Is just
fine
For the psychopaths and the egg shell brained, swimming in life's brine
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Categories:
negative, confusion, dark, imagery, mental
Form: Rhyme
A Fly In My Poetry Soup
There’s a fly in my poetry soup
It turquoise tries to throw me for loop
With negative Nancy words of discontent
Or fuschia fancy lines littered dissent
Poetry Soup is for friends for fun
Lighten up you’re under gold sun
Be green seed no need to be a gun
Firing off rudely red notes to anyone
I learned my lesson in faith
Let the
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Categories:
negative, anti bullying,
Form: Couplet
final account
before life begins
we accrue fictional sins
so guilt always wins
lest any deem themselves free
to alter reality
dollars and distance
do not measure existence
despite persistence
constant debt all but assured
within this credit card world
is living better
starting off as a debtor
shame's main abettor
always in the negative
when all else is relative
to death all succumb
becoming what we become
in part and in sum
being soon
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Categories:
negative, culture, death, judgement, life,
Form: Tanka
Negative Thoughts
Negative Thoughts
Miracle Man
1/26/2024
My advanced years is teaching me,
about looking back & questioning why?
I made some rational decision one day,
that now, years later, has no retry.
But delving into some past decision,
is powerless to correct any perceived wrong.
So I’ve gorged on what life has plated,
at a cafe where I’ve felt I didn’t belong.
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Categories:
negative, life, love,
Form: Quatrain
In the negative infinity between us
In the negative infinity between us,
In the desolate field of wounded hearts,
Where echoes of sorrow roll at night,
We remained, separated from our slumbering dreams.
Like two comets lost in the dark,
With different trajectories and pale lights,
We collide in silence, sparking lost hopes,
In the empty void between us, without our sacred ten gathering.
Clad in tumultuous and desired
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Categories:
negative, lost love,
Form: Free verse
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