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A Wonderful Happening In the Card Section

the instant my left eye caught a glimpse of you in the card section
my right eye immediately followed suit like it was finally viewing its favorite candy
nervous and underconfident, i decide to try my luck and test the waters
to my surprise, i chose a time when you seemed to be in a welcoming mood and in a good place
unbeknownst to us, forgotten was a world with time, routine, a place to be
someway and somehow, we end up in line at the same register talking about something or another
suddenly, we both realize that we are at your SUV putting your bags in the back
after a few moments of laughter, through some miracle you put my cell phone number in your contacts
taking a big risk, i decide not to ask for your number and let God decide the rest
feeling that i overstayed my welcome, i bade you farewell and safety and head on to my sedan
after a few moments of staring into space with a silly smile on my face, i see that the moon was coming upm and i headed home humming a particularly upbeat rare song by billy stewart....wondering....and hoping....
© Marty King  Create an image from this poem.


Premium Member Red-Dress-Fabulous Goodbye


Oh no!  What are YOU doing here?
I haven’t seen you in a year!   
But I’m sure it’s perfectly clear,
I’m still red-dress fabulous, Dear!

You thought you could steal my spotlight?
You sauntered in like it’s your right.
But now you know, it's no fair fight—
I’m red-dress fabulous, tonight! 

Surely you see, it’s my parade!
You’ve been upstaged.  You’ve been out played!
And now your welcome’s been overstayed,
there in my red-dress-fabulous shade!

It's getting late and you should fly-
I bid you, red-dress-fabulous Good-bye!


January 15, 2019

Poem of the Day ~ January 17, 2019
© P.S. Awtry  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Rhyme

When Joy Waltzes In

Joy dances in even to the bereft
She cracks my frown with a tango
Then she leaves my house swept

Joy is a hummingbird trapped indoors
Her iridescence lights up all my grime
Usher her out before I’m enamored

But, happiness is like fish overstayed
His cloying perfume overpowered
He is a rhino to her phoenix raised

Sometimes joy is an elephant
Hiding under a tablecloth snickering
She exits invisibly like an ant 

Sometimes she’s Mary Poppins waltzing
Scrubbing a spot that I cannot dirty
Sprinkling a spoon full of sugar on salt

A lifetime of joy waltzing in wears me out
Then happiness retires to a piece of furniture
I’ll give her a ticket to dance and not pout

Someday when I am old and feeble
Too tired of laying ashes down
I’ll let joy lift my frown with needles

I’ll let her cat sit on my lap untamed
When I’m too demented to sully joy
I’ll let joy feast upon my remains

Till then I’ll leave the door ajar


** Luke 12:36
"Be like men who are waiting for their master when he returns from the wedding feast, so that they may immediately open the door to him when he comes and knocks."

Wimpole Street, Part 6 of 7

(In 1964, Paul McCartney was staying at 
57, Wimpole Street, the home of Jane Asher.  
McCartney was allowed to use the basement 
for writing (Margaret Asher, mother of Jane,
was a professor of music, and the room was 
set up for rehearsal).  He announced his 
engagement to Jane on Christmas Day 1967, 
but by then he had already been seeing Linda 
Eastman for nine months. When Jane left for a 
vacation in the summer of 1968, Paul invited 
yet another woman to move into his home.
When Asher returned unexpectedly and found 
McCartney and the woman in bed, the relationship 
came to an abrupt end.  Perhaps McCartney did it
to extricate himself from the Asher engagement.)



Yesterday

When I was younger,
so much younger than today,
I once had a girl
(it was the year before Shea).

She showed me her room:
“Isn’t it good?
Norwegian wood.”
She asked me to stay
and said I could sit anywhere,
so I went to the basement –
the piano was down there.

“I’ll tell you something
I think you’ll understand,”
said my best friend John:
“You’re gonna lose that girl.
It won’t be long.”

I’ve lost her now for sure.
I won’t see her no more.
But I couldn’t use a Sloane,
so why on earth should I moan?

I crawled off to sleep in the bath.
I went into a dream
of people and things 
that went before …
I think I overstayed,
but that was yesterday.

I’ll buy you a diamond ring, my friend,
If it makes you feel alright
But I can’t help but think, my friend,
it’s been a hard day’s night.

The girl that’s driving me mad
is going away:
I’ll get my claws on Clancy
without the least delay.

You call it treason
when you come poking about,
but I’ve got a good reason
for taking the easy way out.
Form: Rhyme

Ode To the Man Above: a Psalm and a Prayer

September ambience descends
Hear the symphony of birds
Someone authored their choruses
And rearranged their notes.

Clumsy crimson clouds
Forming faces like crazy clowns
Faces of you ,the unknown and I
That cry a thousand tears when sad

River ripples rich rhythms
Visitors from below seen at the banks
A salmon overstayed its welcome
Now a happy meal for the eagle.

Blossoms brightly bringing blessings
Sun leaves no trail but the moon
Perfectly swirled in a billion stars
Of vibrant colours that enchants

Sky serenade simply sensual
Yes ! The owl even feels it
Hoots as it flies below the busy grounds
Squirrels run for cover.

I wish on a shooting star as it fades
Streaking across the skies tonight
I'm awed by its sheer beauty
Ah Onyame! Thy works marvels
Thine eyes hast seen it all

Thou O Lord the greatest artist of all
From thy works I draweth inspiration
I pray thee you hear me once more
The most high!
The one who controls this all

I pray to thee for hope
To fuel our burning desire .
I pray thee the land below the dunes
Stay strong thru the wearying times
No more wars no more bloodshed.

I pray thou let we lead again
Thy wish is we develop in freedom!
Let the ignorance blind tumble down in defeat
And the oppressors run in despair
I pray we live in unity nativity and comfort

I pray thee of the highest heavens
Let thy peace reign
And bless the rains in Africa
To thee i solemnly pray
Hear thy Ode Hear thine prayer
© Kofi Amed   Create an image from this poem.


Each Cherished Memory of Mine Cause Iz Woe

Each cherished memory of mine...cause iz woe

Analogous to unique ventifact for shore
and seven years ago,
where time and tide faintly roar
within noggin o'this common Joe
reviewing silent film unreleased,

unpopular, unimpressive tour
de force if technology existed
to broadcast and show
projected on big screen only
to elicit chore

tills whereby rotten tomatoes
lobbed accompanied by dough
less bro (i.e. an alter ego equally hoar
rubble at lifelong accomplishments), though
woke to awareness, whence

twilight years sped more
bajillion times faster than greased
lightning, when final adieu
will tide dully be high water mark
luke king point blank at poor

etch heave mints mostly
abysmally, equally,
pathetically barely drew
stick figures upon tabula rasa
mostly feeble scratches galore

looking at you
unknown reader, now
doddering, hobbling, loafing... ignore
rant of untold opportunities
(long fostered barnacle clad) view

wing gamut of healthy risk taking
avoidance in name of war
re: ness against challenging,
testing, upending... true
and tried loathsome

overstayed welcome, a deplore
hubble basket case squirreled
within bedroom, who
suffered rabid exhortations, objections,
ultimatums... told to shovel ordure

lack of gainful employment
beset courtesy a slew
of psychological mailer daemons
case closed by parental cloture
countless decades ague

reduced present fulfillment score
indelible bitterness toward
self confident self I never knew
afraid of doppelganger to
central processing unit silly con wayfair core.

I Am the Hurdle

I am the hurdle that needs to be cleared,
The stumbling block in the way.
All would be perfect if I disappeared;
A rainbow would rise every day.

I am the glitch and the knot in the chain,
The obstacle smack in the path.
Shutting me up would be everyone’s gain;
My words seem to whet people’s wrath.

I’m the impediment here to prevent
What progress there is to be made.
My purpose appears to provoke discontent,
Like a welcome that’s been overstayed.

Waking me up like a slap in the face
Is the knowledge of how I’m perceived – 
As a hurdle to leap with no thought to embrace
Any truth in the thoughts I’ve believed.
Form: Rhyme

Colorblind Dreamscape

White chalks.. on the glossy blackboard. 
Black and White. .all matte and bored. 
Technicolour scribbles. ..the world explored.
Vivacious markers...splashes the white board. 

The aura of colors..the magical power. 
Light mesmerising...the dull in cower.
Crayons and lipsticks..palettes of brush. 
Vintage memories..in bookshelves flush. 

Color of sun..darkens in shade. 
Color of leaves..wither and fade. 
Color of spring...never overstayed. 
Color of life. .greys. .betrayed. 

Reflections shimmer... the glass of solitude. 
A kaleidoscope heart... colors in multitude. 

Chameleon thoughts...in silence argues. 
A 'Colorblind Dreamscape'...
the mind imbues. 


8th September 2018.
Colored Memories Poetry Contest
sponsored by Craig Cornish
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Neptune Day Parade

Tall tale conveyed
A little like a charade
Was about a mermaid
Partook in a parade
Long golden hair in braid
Eyes brilliant of gems inlaid
Seated on a throne of jade
Draped in seaworthy brocade
She was beautifully portrayed
While her graceful horses neighed

They passed by a colourful arcade
Enchanted was she by a serenade
Suddenly craved a wild exotic escapade
Ran off with an attractive mate in mascarade
Thought he’d treasure her heart soft as suede
But quickly the wondrous fantasy decayed
Realizing she’d been misplayed 
Heartbroken and betrayed 
She’d been remiss and overstayed
With much reason to be afraid
Perilously parched if further delayed
She urgently made her way through the glade
To the closest waterfall cascade

Moral of the story aptly made
When you’re a mermaid
Guest in a parade 
Whether paid or unpaid
Do not cross the barricade 



AP: 2nd place 2025

Submitted on October 3, 2020 for contest SECOND CHANCES NA POEMS of 2020 sponsored by CHANTELLE ANNE COOKE  -  RANKED 6TH
Form: Monorhyme

I Awkwardly, Ineptly, and Submissively Fumbled Thru Life

I awkwardly, ineptly, and submissively fumbled thru life...,
whereat purposefulness rarely gained traction

Fatherhood (half my life time ago)
bolstered reasonable rhyme
manifesting itself before
these myopic bespectacled eyes.

Infancy, babyhood, and Childhood
evidenced, noticed, and witnessed
adequate basic provisions,
and no shortage of food
engendered dynamic cohesion
allowed, enabled, and provided
"mama's boy" imbued,
and attempted to compensate
being socially withdrawn
posting and answering

personal classified advertisements,
(while marital vows
long since pledged),
now in hindsight such risqué
communiqués juvenile and lewd
sense and sensibility
of healthy emotional, mental
and physical natural maturation
social withdrawal did occlude
invariably classmates found
lack of responsiveness rude.

Additionally, yours truly
never field tested
self reliance skill sets,
but rather overstayed his welcome
livingsocial with parents
at 324 Level Road,
whose patience he sorely tested

ofttimes giving rise
since hashtagged as
dad's infamous midnight lectures
heavily referencing expletives
which vituperative ultimatums
extemporaneously delivered courtesy
paternal linkedin progenitor of mine

when the doomsday clock struck twelve
allowing, enabling, providing
standing room only
promising colorful denunciatory epithets
assaulting, cannonading, firing...
exploding character assassination
verbal thermonuclear bombs squarely
lobbed at unemployed sole son,
his/him offspring afflicted then (three
plus decades ago and now)
with debilitating anxiety/
social panic, palmar hyperhidrosis,
body dysmorphia, and 
irritable bowel for starters.

I (a rather meek individual)
stood still as a statue
silently weathering such
blistering, calumniating, excoriating,
fulminating, haranguing brickbats
upon a rather docile doodler with words,
who essentially internalized
torturous barrage vacuous warnings

to shape up or ship out,
which mother and father dearest
doled out their version
of abusive traumatic boot camp
survival mode qualified
as invisible contusions, fractures,
infarctions, lesions, obstructions 
and ruinations upon psyche.

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