Unrequited

Unrequited

The things i think about,
never settle below
they float instead
and fester inside
as I pluck your name in the air
a sacred memory folds over
foaming layers, floating vapors
Creating a chill and then a stupor
the last draw of my breath
I slipped again, I stripped
you tripped in the end
Even if you stay in your lane
But you’re driving insane
so much distance between two cars
its impossible to hear
Muffled by the wind, carried away the fear
I tried to speak, but the sound
Never carried over
It rises an ache in my throat
nerves are calmed, noise is stifled
legs are stiffened, feet planted
hands firmly gripped
elbows abutted
in a world prone to forget
my memory stays etched
in your fractured mind
my taste stayed on the lips
of the one I've left behind
a fleeting moment
Betrayed by lust unveiled the trust
between the blinks of my eye
You remain a distant memory
The pain has abated
the speed is indeed fleeting
Forgotten with the past
in the throes between two fires
the faded lines, the dying embers
Looms over like the sun
So I say, you cannot stay
Isn’t that off-putting?
A broken soul
With a spirit so agile
My body so fragile,
with just one touch,
you peel my layers
like the sprouting weeds
between the pavement
the truth wants to be known
My touch so brief,
and yet it lingered
Overstayed its welcome
And in the horizon
It stretched, it lagged on
And with your imagination
My skin rubbed raw,
My voice cracked, I cringed
I become unhinged
My heart will always be disquieted
Your love forever unrequited

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Date: 4/10/2024 9:29:00 AM
Rowe, I enjoyed reading this. There's so much evocative language, like an "emotional roller-coaster", but expressed originally and personally.
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Rowe Weiss
Date: 4/10/2024 12:12:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by David. I am glad you enjoyed the ride.
Date: 1/29/2024 6:57:00 PM
Not only POTD but you made it into the 100 Best New Poems listing! Well done :) I love the imagery too in your line "like the sprouting weeds between the pavement the truth wants to be known". Evocative writing.
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Date: 1/28/2024 5:49:00 PM
Dear Rowe, I'm so happy to return with my heartiest congratulations for your potent and pulsing poem being chosen for POTD honors. A worthy and wonderful choice! Warmest wishes, dear poetess.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/29/2024 8:13:00 AM
Thank you Ms. Susan. You have no idea how this comment makes me so happy! The command of the English language is quite challenging especially if your first language is different. To be able to write eloquently express my thoughts using a language that is not my tongue, let alone being commended for it is very rewarding. I would love to learn from you and all the poets here. I did not have formal education and training in poetry, I just write from my heart!
Date: 1/28/2024 10:40:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 1/28/2024 6:06:00 AM
Dear Rowe, this is such a poignant and emotive poem about unrequited love & its soul-stirring dynamics.. So achingly yet quite wonderfully you've described about that essence and how the aching feelings never fade yet wander in realms of anxious thoughts and a perpetual yearning.. "Forgotten with the past in the throes between two fires the faded lines, the dying embers" Ahh, these painstaking emotions can be felt deep within the heart. Heartiest congratulations on the splendid honour of POTD.
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 1/28/2024 6:07:00 AM
Sending many best wishes and light your way, welcome to PoetrySoup ~
Date: 1/27/2024 4:29:00 PM
Love is a ' one way street ' You may move toward the middle of the road, and then to the edge for a moment. However, you both stay on the same highway, together. " Unrequited Love " is the worst feeling. Knowing that, while you're beside the one you love, they don't feel the same way. You've expressed this emotion with so many vivid images. Congratulations Rowe, on Poem of the Day. Welcome to Poetry Soup, as well. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Rowe Weiss
Date: 1/27/2024 11:24:00 PM
I am glad you could relate to this piece. Thankfully, I haven't been in that place for a long time. It is interesting to write from that perspective though.
Date: 1/27/2024 4:08:00 PM
Rowe, wonderful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, Constance
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Rowe Weiss
Date: 1/27/2024 11:18:00 PM
Thank you for reading it.
Date: 1/27/2024 11:38:00 AM
Congratulation on POTD, a great honour for a new poet.. Your poem is s a poignant exploration of love, loss, and the enduring echoes of emotional turmoil. Through its evocative imagery and introspective tone, it invites readers to contemplate the complexities of human relationships and the resilience of the human spirit in the face of adversity...
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Date: 1/27/2024 11:25:00 PM
Thank you for appreciating it for all its worth. I totally did not expect it would be chosen as I wrote it on a whim.
Date: 1/27/2024 11:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. Have a blessed day writing away..................
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Date: 1/27/2024 11:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD Rowe Weiss! You are a romance writer, as I got a familiar vibe, but in so many ways unique, do tell of the unrequited love that we know so well. "my taste stayed on the lips of the one I've left behind a fleeting moment" simply brilliant, "Sabor A Mi." Welcome! The New year brought you to us. :D I Am Anaya
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Rowe Weiss
Date: 1/27/2024 11:21:00 PM
Thank you for the warm welcome. As much as I do not to be, I probably am...a romance writer. haha! I finally had the courage to post my poems. The new year brought me a lot of courage and now support from people like you.
Date: 1/27/2024 10:46:00 AM
Delightful read, Rowe. Excellent poetry! It is very engaging, a touch of suspense swirled into the memories and pain. Congratulations on your POTD! Enjoy your special day of recognition. Welcome to Poetry Soup! A poet in Texas, Bill
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Rowe Weiss
Date: 1/27/2024 11:26:00 PM
Thank you for the warm welcome. I am glad I was able to share this piece as it resonates with a lot of people.
Date: 1/27/2024 10:08:00 AM
Creative and lovely write, Rowe. Congratulations on POTD! Charlie
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Rowe Weiss
Date: 1/27/2024 11:27:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 1/27/2024 8:54:00 AM
Rowe, congrats on POTD for it is well deserved. Your poem floored me. The raw vulnerability in entwining memory and longing is breathtaking. The floating names, the windswept whispers, it's all so achingly real. I truly admire your strength amidst the ache, the "agile spirit" refusing to be defined by what wasn't. The fading embers, the unsaid words - they linger, leaving an undeniable mark. Powerful! It's a testament to your talent and the enduring power of love, unrequited. Blessings, Daniel
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Rowe Weiss
Date: 1/27/2024 11:28:00 PM
Thank you for digesting it. Quoting some of the lines made me feel that you really took the time to understand and appreciate this poem. This is such huge compliment!
Date: 1/27/2024 8:30:00 AM
Dear Rowe, Congratulations on this very passionate poem which is most deserving of recognition as the POTD. It truly is an exquisite piece.
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Rowe Weiss
Date: 1/27/2024 11:29:00 PM
Thank you for the kinds words. It gave me more motivation to write.
Date: 1/27/2024 8:25:00 AM
Just lovely Rowe. Congratulations on the honor of POTD! :)
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Rowe Weiss
Date: 1/27/2024 11:29:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 1/27/2024 7:33:00 AM
Congratulations Rowe on POTD for such a lovely poem! Debx
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Rowe Weiss
Date: 1/27/2024 11:29:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 1/27/2024 6:41:00 AM
This is truly a gem from your talented pen, Rowe, poignant and filled with emotion. Congrats on having it selected POTD on your first day here. I look forward to reading more of your work. John
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Rowe Weiss
Date: 1/27/2024 11:30:00 PM
Thank you for reading this and my other poems. It gave me more courage to post my poems.
Date: 1/27/2024 5:39:00 AM
My initial comments to you on your first posted poems are being backed up by the recognition of other poets. I congratulate you for this one being poem of the day.
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Rowe Weiss
Date: 1/27/2024 11:30:00 PM
Thank you, greatly appreciate your encouragment.
Date: 1/27/2024 5:22:00 AM
Hey Rowe good to see this free verse gem get some recognition. Welcome to PS!
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Date: 1/27/2024 5:09:00 AM
A beautiful poem depicting pain in unrequited love! Enjoyed reading many times - the lines flow effortlessly as a murmuring brook, expressing poignant emotions! Impressive diction of your poem leaves readers in awe! Congratulations on honour of POTD.
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Date: 1/27/2024 4:46:00 AM
An emotional write, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 1/27/2024 4:09:00 AM
Wow, I read this through twice it is such an emotional piece Rowe, so well penned, many congrats on POTD and welcome to Poetry soup:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/27/2024 3:41:00 AM
Rowe, welcome to PS, congratulations on POTD with your well penned emotive poem.
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Date: 1/27/2024 1:35:00 AM
Such a moving emotional write Rowe, the pain of unrequited love never fades it remains in one’s heart always. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day. Beryl
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Date: 1/27/2024 1:03:00 AM
Dear Rowe, this is such a poignant and sincerely woven poem that depicts the depth of emotions related to unrequited love. And it has an evocative touch to it. I love the flow of your lines and how youv expressed in a very poetic manner. Especially “ as I pluck your name in the aira sacred memory folds over foaming layers, floating vapors” so descriptive and detailed, in how your phrase thoughts and emotions, felt this one, and brilliant diction throughout! congratulations on POTD.Well deserved
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Rowe Weiss
Date: 5/18/2024 12:02:00 AM
Thank you. I appreaciate that you took time to appreciate each line for all its worth! I am humbled.
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