Long Evaluations Poems
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~~Move the Clouds~
(A Reason for Rainbows)
When you left, you took my heart!
It was midnight.
You darted out of the house into
that midnight Spring moonlight,
with but two sentences.
I stood there weeping, with my tears
falling on my starlit engagement ring.
Like a fool, I believed what you said.
You bag of arrogant wind!
I seriously thought of suicide
each day for months.
I went into therapy, too
But God had much bigger plans
for me.
He placed a beautiful man in my life,
who never hurt me or caused strife.
I became the Mother of a
beautiful girl, an outstanding
grandson and a totally transformed life.
I don't let people's outrageous
evaluations of me cause me
pain.
Others judgements are what
they are, their judgements!
They are not me.
I learned to soar like the white
sea gulls above the Pacific.
So astonishingly high above
San Francisco Bay!
Whenever, I chose~night or day.
And be totally me, me, me.
Now and forever.
Free ,free, free!
Of others' arrogance and
grandiose superiority.
~~~~~
June 2, 2019
3am PST
OF HIS FOE HE SAID
" HIS DESTINY IS DETERMINED
BY THE EVALUATIONS OF HIS TASK'S!"
THE ANALYSIS OF BEING BEST, TO MANUVER
AND OUTWREST THE OPONNET!
THE DIMENSION GUAGED TO MEASURE
INHERENT IN CALULATING
THE REALIGMENTING ENDEAVOR!
THIS IS A POEM FOR THE LOVES OF MY LIFE. WITH LOVE YOUR DARLING FREIND! TO.....
GUS " RUMPALL STYLLSKIN" KALLIO: BOREK" BOSSY" SIMIT:" BIGHAND" "BIGHAND" OVA ESTRUS
REVANI CACIK KUMPIR:
: CANIS "LUPUS" FAMILARIS. "BE GOOD, AND DEVIL WILL CURSE YOU !"
ENTISAPATING WHAT HE'D SAY, DONE TO MAKE HIM LESSER, AND BORING ! BLA, BLA, BLA ! "BASSOON" MOONSONG, AND "SAME STRAP" NANNY, WISH YA'LL A HAPPY BIRTHDAY !
Trump or Hillary - A crucial choice for America
.
Madam Hillary may be moving
On the road of American election
With a greater speed than Trump
On the cushions of wealthy donations
Provided to her by her rich and wealthy friends
.
But I wondered and anticipated
What would be?
The likely reactions of the people of America
Whether they would prefer a stronger America
When they would assemble
To cast their votes
For making a more dynamic and prosperous America
Safer, sturdy and an America
Which would march
On the roads of new discoveries and inventions
Not for the destruction of the world
But for the welfare of all Americans
And for the welfare of the world.
.
A thought came to my mind
That the people of America
Would not cast their votes just blindly
Without weighing
Different aspects of their vote choices
And the potentials of these two powerful candidates
In my view they would cast their votes
After making their evaluations
As per liking and intellectual taste.
.
As such, the results would be astonishing
As it would also decide
The future journey of America
Whether it would be safe in the hands of Hillary
Or it would be safer
Under the boldness of Trumph
Who wants to do many things new.
.
The factor that Madam Hillary
Is moving fast
On the cushions of donated money
Would be the deciding factor
In the coming elections of America
To determine
The future path of this powerful nation of the world.
.
As a friend of American people and poets
I shall be waiting
For the very interesting 2016 election results.
.
Ravindra K Kapoor
M.P India 03rd Nov. 2016
Thumbs Up To The Journey
At the footbridge as it bridges past from present future and perspectives your
feet might be-come and may be-go confused be-fuddled as can your mind before
the shadows rainbows feathered fancy pastel tunes and blues-bound colours
can memories anticipation taking-stock ooze pots and lots of lived experience
re-scribed re-told rewound projected narrated from emotive thoughts
stand still
At the bridge as it cradles the canyon with ladles and measures of the moment
where it spans what once was what you enrich in here and now not there and then the sweeping meadows fields of harvest schisms unions paradigms evaluations can treasures scary scars letting-go liberate scents and stents of living fragrance perceived untold configured touched upon stocked up condensed
reflected wait
The past is yet to come and not withstanding what bridge which side what size
and whence long gone remembrance spins and spans and slows and speeds the motion the sunrise dusk and dawning tapestry mosaic photographic lens sensations can truth reality attitudes and imperfections find soul and solace shared solitude re-modelled shaped anew confronted soothed harmonised
accentuated rise
The future has arrived and has been long projected and the past is living on
where they settle and sizzle on in ember’s glory and ashes to ashes and Phoenix in flight when horizons and boxes un-boxed wriggling worms preceding grave graves can joy pleasure senses and sexes passion peace human works of art in progress accepted invited challenged unchallenged channelled welcomed
gratitude prevail
At the foot-bridge at the mind-bridge where it bridges cradles sweeps your meaning brushes and jungles juggles and wonders which hand’s intuition which path to follow lie the answers to the questions asked lie the questions known and
not yet explored
24th July 2016
A HOUSE IS CERTAINLY N O T A HOME...
CHECK YOUR DOME, WHERE YOU ROME...
MIND & BODY
WORKPLACE & RETREAT TO REVIVE PLACE...
HOW'S THAT SPACE?
LET'S LOOK AT BASIC FUNDAMENTALS,
IS THIS A SAFE, {RESTORATIVE} PLACE
CAN AND SHOULD IT BE FILLED WITH ACCOUNTABLE, RESPONSIBLE, REWARDING
FILTERING IMPLEMENT, FOR "OUR"...
MINE AND YOURS BETTERMENT? AT TIMES, SOMETHING MAY NEED A RECALL, VERSUS A STALLED CHANGE-UP...AND THIS IS SUCH A REJUVENTED THING; VERSUS HOLDING ON TO AN IDEA, CONCEPT, ARTICLE, PRACTICE OR EVEN AN ASSOCIATION...
BECAUSE ALL THAT IS LINKED OR LOCKED...
"EITHER ELEVATES OR BLOCKS"
SOMETIMES
WE
JUST
NEED
TO
TAKE
STOCK...UNLOCK...START ANEW!
AN ELEMENT/S MAY NEEDED REPLACEMENT AND WAS L O N G OVERDUE!
ISN'T IT GRAND* WHEN WE UNDERSTAND THAT AT ANY POINT "WE GET TO SCOPE THE JOINT" OUR OWN JOINT, TAKE IMMEDIATE INVENTORY, TO RESURGE OURSELVES WITH A FRESH STORY...
AFTER SOME TWEAKS!
FIX SOME LEAKS!
CLEAR OUR HEAD & HEART!
REMOVE TO IMPROVE...
A RESURGENT GROOVE {GROWTH}
"THAT PART!" THAT'S WHERE IT STARTS...
THIS HAS BEEN BROUGHT TO YOU FROM
THE "IN VIRAL MENTAL" *WORD ALERT*
RE: CHECK YOUR MENTAL HEALTH & WEALTH
OF BEING AND BETTER RECEIVING...
AS WELL, DAILY SEEING AND DOINGS?
DOES ANYTHING NEED REMOVING?
DOES SOMETHING NEEDS SOOTHING,
BRINGING A SENSE OF SOLACE...
TO YOUR PALACE???"
YOUR MIND IS A GOLD MINE...
ANY GRIME OR COAL OF ANY KIND,
"REMOVE TO IMPROVE YOUR GROOVE"
MAY THAT EXACT IMPACT SOOTHE...
"CRYSTAL THINKING!"
"RUBY HEART!"
"AMETHYST EVALUATIONS!"
"PEARL AND OPAL REJUVENTION!"
GEMS THAT ARE "STEMMED" FROM OUR
{SOURCE AND COURSE} DIAMOND~CLAD,
NO BLEMISHES...
SPARKLING NEW, {FROM REVIEW}
SO CLEAR! {SO NECESSARY} TIME & DUE...
SO TRUE!!! SO TRUE!!!
RE-SET TO OPULENCE ...
"OH HOW MAJESTICALLY BEAUTIFUL! ! !"
A MUCH PREFERRED *HUE*
Renee D. Gross {GHPPR} July 27, 2023#
I am, who I am, and whose I am.
We are people of and who we are.
They are, who they are and whose they are.
From the beginning, of the World’s Destiny.
Yet, God assisted, God directed and God revealed.
Evaluations are in the unseen and seen.
All this was meant to be.
From the beginning, of the World’s Destiny.
First, have your way and will with me Lord.
"Love," you said, "is the perfect Key,"
unlocking the hearts of those who would believe.
This, from the foundation, of the World’s Destiny.
A new creation we are called to be.
Good deeds and works are laid out for we.
Only grace and a willing heart to achieve.
From the already written Book of life; from all eternity.
Reputation
I marveled the emeritus recognition
I felt compelled to sniff the reputations
Somewhat louder than the tradition
I crave the silent, staple self-respect
My tribute, I could not awaken
I crave the conventional, Confucians credo
A notorious celebrity - that notorious celebrity
Somewhat louder than the libido
I crave the ancestry, acclaimed aphrodisiac
Mine reputation
Spans beyond information
Forth wit my education
Sanctions my situation
Covering my operations communication
Be it far from the nation
Generation’s evaluations interpretation
Amidst generational interpretation
4/14/22
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr. 2022©
That ADHD got me judged unfavourably,
impulsive interactions, easily distracted,
attention bouncing behaviour unique to me,
the odd one out and always told
different people, same old...
self conscious suffering from a lack of control,
humiliation on the regular, bad feedback on the whole.
Every decision of mine made aware of,
self worth in decline,
others know the way I’m stood spare lost,
inferior by design
Following leaders who decide what they like,
submissive through need not judged wrong or right,
Go with the flow and fall into line ignoring my life
Accustomed to others wants more important than mine
Meeting demands would please and get thanks,
the responsibility wasn’t on me and not my plan,
Hiding in the herd safe unnoticed, my blanket,
thinking for me, nope that idea vanished
With age people see stature and status,
competitiveness shows us our places
And I follow the leader not to be hated,
But I must play now or be manipulated
Avoiding confrontation unless necessary
Some act aggressive never stressing me,
be submissive like a b**** is just let it be,
but I’m impulsive so I react aggressively
I will follow subtle leaders for praise
acceptance is what motivates
but be expecting of me and see rage,
My position is one that I dictate
Life is easy if I please, horrid if I lead,
Judgement worn weak, nothing to me,
put downs received, not bothered really
fake approval as a slave, all of it weak
The impact good or bad is just an opinion,
win people over behave for their pleasing,
others go against, upstage, ego feeding,
Both approaches give nothing I’m needing
I don’t rebel or adapt to play the game
The comparison of people for selfish gain
I won’t follow leaders pulling the chain
These mind game evaluations are so lame
My value is my happiness win or lose,
why you value approval leaves me confused
why you control others think it’s skill not abuse
Importance of social acceptance,
I simply refuse!
Ego Vs. Soul Thing
Let's Take A
Crack At It.
(No Peaking.)
Ego, Well There You Go,
Right Away, That's Not
Just One Word...
Even If I
Narrow It Down
To A Trillion.
*
Psychology Paints It
Several Times As A
'Scientific' Term...
But That Science
Is Made With Babies
Having Tantrums
With Their Toys.
Very Specific Maybe -
Depending On A Dream.
Dragons And Butterflies,
Shock With ROAR-Shock!
Miss-Spelling Well Intended.
*
Let's See - Give It A Whack:
A Conscious Sense Of Self.
*
Whatever, That Wasn't Hard,
I Tried To Scrub All
The Pride And Vanity Off,
A Sense Of Purpose
Got A Little Rub Too.
Oh, You Mean THAT Kind of Ego.
How You Define Yourself?
There Sure Are A Lot Of
Various Forms Of Insult
Hidden Behind All Those
Walls, Judgements And
Justifications And Evaluations...
*
Here's A Good One:
No Excuse Is Good Enough.
*
So, Narrow Narrow Narrow Down...
Ego=Self.
That Isn't Much Progress.
It Just Became Another Word
That's Way
Over
My Head.
Start Over - Dead.
***
The Competitor Is Out Of The Game.
I Mean, The Other Word Is Not
Even In The Same Arena...
Not Even The Same Sport,
Not Even The Same Consideration
Of Aspecting, Of Sportingness...
Of Consciousness...
Proudly Vague And Strong
With Pressured Flow
On Floods And Calm...
Not Even A Rain-Drop
Can Be Explained.
Not Even A Color.
-Gray Squirrel
06-06-2025
Meandering Rhythmic Transformations
Imbued by ink attuned to think before my ships about to sink
Reviewed hues of too much to soon leave room for Fred Astaire to croon
Previews of life lived without strife illuminated throughout the night
Subdued reflections of abject detections of realistic injections of true insight
Humility among the labrynths of disguise and misdirection
Tranquility to light the incense of revised prophetic intention
Sensibility to tread lightly in the pretense of denied phrenetic invention
Flexibility to endure the fight among the immense defiant heretical condescension
Correlations of the logical rational minds forming a position to enunciate from
Calculations of the mathematical refines that perform and elucidate their equations upon
Evaluations on the chronological history of mankind to repudiate their names among
Illuminations of an unkempt mind in cosmological separation
Contradictions of emotion pouring through the construct of a screen
Writing fiction as a proponent of the writers written dream
Benedictions of the monks who disown it all while inside they scream
Jurisdictions of the core components of a hideous crime scene
Firmaments of beauty streaming down from the twighlight sky
Permanent polluting brings a tear toward my eye
Determinant souls computing of a man about to die
While the Impermanence is convoluting as the Buddhist nun lets out a sigh
Conspicuous connotations from another superficial influencer
Ridiculous observations that bring official condescenders
Ambiguous abdications from a heavyweight contender
Insideous aberrations from someone trying to defend her
Monumental renditions of a classical concerto
Experimental competitions reading out loud Dante’s Inferno
Elemental inquisitions leaning toward a place where they can only say No
Transcendental acquisitions take me where the river of knowledge seems to flow
The End Elizabeth Moroz Copyright