Long Discernment Poems

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Premium Member Impressive Passions

Positive Yin knows 
bilateral awed impression
as Positive Yang grows
healthy-wealth wondrous compassion,

As Negative Yin flows risks
to pride's depression
as Negative Yang down-blows 
humility's oppression,

Winter in as Summer out
WhiteHouse down as GreenHouse up
Yin back as Yang forth,
BrightHole Alpha
as Matriarchal (0)Mega Womb

Depressed Alfalfa
as oppressive OliveOil,
in another LoseLose childhood dream.

These four faces of change
are like four-horse seasons
of worship,
liturgical summer life
through winterish death 
of ego's LeftBrain Robber Baron dominance.

Negative Yang with Negative Yin,
both self-oppression and other-depressing,
represent winter
as advent of creolizing chaotic rebirth
through grief and messianic healing weakness.

Positive Yang with Negative Yin,
self-compassion with residual depressing memories
of winter's coldly violent revolutions,
nightmares of loss,
hibernation of interdependence,
usher spring's replanting schedules,
organic developments
for environmental and interior rebirth.

NewBorns cooperatively search
and knock
and find
summer's PositiveYang-PositiveYin
co-passion with awed self-esteem
climax,
Yet late summer Musing maturity
already predicts Autumn,
early harvest stages
of WiseElder beloved community discernment.

PositiveYin with NegativeYang
speak up 
for a healthier Left with Right ego-eco balance,
a return to secular/sacred worshiping
health quantities and love qualities
of ElderRight procreator
with YoungerLeft co-awed
interior personal
exterior political compassion,
impression,
harvesting our best WinWin seeds,

Rejecting LoseLose historical supremacist experience,
Negative Yang with Negative Yin
eternal winter
predicting
both Ego and Eco-demise
rather than
PositiveYang health
with PositiveYin wealth,
wondrous FullSun compassion for myself
impressed by awe with sacred EarthTribe Other.

Regarding what we will
now more polyculturally
polypathically plant
this polyphonic WinWin 
ZeroZone renewing Spring.


Premium Member Poetic Judgment

With the discernment of a poetic judge*

Midst gratefulness to God for His granted writing acumen

I give gracious excellent rate to you, my masterpiece...

Exposing my heart's fullness; baring my faith's fervency

Showcasing my commitment, passion, and professionalism 

Against the N/A or "not acceptable" criterion I cannot fathom.

Hence, along my compliance to Poetry Soup's requirement

I assert, "Congratulations for doing your best; keep on being a blessing."

*John 7:24 Judge not according to the appearance, but judge righteous judgment.

March 7, 2019


2nd place, "You Be The Judge" Contest
Sponsored by Bobby May; judged on 4/8/2019

Premium Member Your Touch

Your touch is energized
With joy, bliss and ecstasy
Elation that fills up my spirit
Feels like a dance of pure pleasure

Your touch brings alive
Sweet dreams and fantasies
Music that lights up the heart
With a sense of laughter and hope

Your touch is filled with intimacy
That thrives and sings with intensity
Love that enlivens the very core
Creating elation that conquers doubt

Your touch is sensitive, animated
Breaking through all pain and grief
Whispering gentle peace, happy relief
From sorrows that haunt and taunt

Your touch is the reason I reach out
With the assurance, belief and faith
The light that shares a grace filled with
Quiet prayers prayed from the soul

Your touch is a breath of my heart
Sighing in hues of lavender silence
Lifting the desires with confidence
Warmth that comes from discernment

Your touch is the adventure of delight
Flavored with intimacy and insight
Covering the darkness with a vibrancy
Reminding us that God brings true ardor

Your touch is the freedom I’ve found
To be myself, completely abandoned
Willing to reach out with an open hand
Giving from the heart gifts of compassion

Your touch brings love, light and life
With you, I know fulfillment!
Thank you for your generous spirit.

Premium Member Lord God, You Are My Best Cheerer

September 9 Relationship to God Bible Meditations Based on Matthew 14-16

Key Verse – Matthew 14:27 But straightway Jesus spake unto them, saying, Be of good cheer; it is I; be not afraid.

LORD GOD, YOU ARE MY BEST CHEERER			

Lord God, You are my best Cheerer for my delight by Your might
Thank You for enabling me to obey You upon Your standards’ height…
Faithfully, I follow Your instructions of triumphant light
From my worldliness to stay in Your compassion so bright.

Lord God, You are my best Cheerer for my blessing by Your provision
Thank You for illumining me to go on with Your bidding’s vision…
Fervently, I stretch my faith through Your persuasion
From my doubts to beseech Your touch toward my heavenly commission.

Lord God, You are my best Cheerer for my sanctification by Your cleansing
Thank You for purging me against transgressions’ cursing…
Fearfully, I offer my heart to You with reverential praising
From my vanity to worship You around Your truth’s encompassing.

Lord God, You are my best Cheerer for my understanding by Your prudence
Thank You for assuring me Your love for my heavenly residence…
Festively, I let You nourish my soul with Your mercy’s confidence
From my weakness to abide in Your power’s miraculous evidence.

Lord God, You are my best Cheerer for my wholeness by Your completeness
Thank You for pulling me out against emptiness caused by pride’s foolishness…
Favourably, I submit to You in glorifying You with gratefulness
From my brokenness to have You work in my nothingness.

Lord God, You are my best Cheerer for my wisdom by Your discernment
Thank You for teaching me toward victorious ministry involvement…
Freely, I obey You joyously with willing engagement
From my reasoning to learn in Your discipleship’s enrichment.

Lord God, You are my best Cheerer for my stewardship by Your leadership
Thank You for directing me along Your warm and sweet fellowship…
Fruitfully, I savour Your blessed gifts and grants around Your partnership
From my self-denial to profit in Your rewarding love-care propped relationship.

September 9, 2023
Form: Rhyme

THE METAPHOR OF DEATH

Death—
I’m the silent noisy appellation 
I visit once and not twice,
Now load your luggage in a jiffy,
I have given you galore of time,
Continue in merry making!
For tomorrow might past thee not.
Man—
Ah! I trembled at your sight,
Death! For I have heard thy work,
I have just taken in a wife—
And soon to bore me a son!
Can you give me months or a year?
And I dare not to cross,
The demarcation of my promise,
Or confuse you with magniloquent.
Death—
You have spoken well,
But I’m the spirit that never compromise, 
I cannot come again, to reparagraph,
And again, what do I tell my master?
You came unclad and unprepared,
Dare I not for tomorrow shall not pass!
Man—
“What shall I tell my lover?”
That death has come or that my time is gone?
The most random serendipity, 
The fate of an expectant couple,
Unrealism frowns mildly in this aegis.

What should I carry along my journey?
The commotion of this overwhelmed...
The sincerity of this metaphor!
The paradox of living, and the vanity of wealth.
Should I bribe death with my mansion?
Or with my scars and flashing cars!
Death—
Why do you worry yourself?
I’m the vagrant of nature, the drift dream:
And I need nothing, so keep those mundane,
For when the hour is come,
My fingers will snatch thy bleeding heart.

I’m the unannounced visitor,
That sits comfortably in your dining chair,
And wait to spell life out of you,
Brook your imbroglio—
Man~~
Uwu! So, this just it all?
The life I have planned ends,
And in second I shall be no more,
Sweat has bathed me....
And heavy throbs have almost pulled the life 
Out of my being—

Death is wicked, and death is mean,
Why do you botch the plan of my luxury?
 I wail to leave you my love...
Life and death are not fair to me;
The peak of my discernment.
Death—
I corroborate with thy soul to end thee
I’m enigmatic, evasive for I’m death...
Visiting houses and lives at will,
So, I ask soothingly......
Are you ready for me? My venomous;
Is about to visitor a home.
Man—
Kpashi! Uma ka kwagh ga cii,
Alas! The love I promised will go in vain,
Thinking about my solitary journey, 
And the euphoria of that grain....
The rising anxiety of a quiet kidney.
Truly! My end has come suddenly...
The onomatopoeia of life,
Crashing, zooming and humming silently.


Premium Member Kundalini


In the opaque night across the space of silence, 
enfolding the languid landscape of my existence,
bereft of the beguiled essence in indolent life,
my pathway meanders in the labyrinth of torment.

Trudging at the fringe of trying forbearance,
I hear listless the whispering wind of wisdom 	
tell me, this journey has no meaningful end.
I’m entangled in the nebulous mesh of ambiguity. 

The ill-conceived venture of the errant mind 
finds gloomy dead end in the introspection path.
That’s when the serpentine force opens the innate door,
releasing the feminine energy of yogic awareness.  

My soul shines then with the ethereal radiance
in the infinite depth of the discernment space,
like the flaring brilliance of dormant tantric power,
flashing through the seven chakras of perception. 

In my self-searching spiritual odyssey 
toward the edge of the enlightened eternity,
I perceive the acuity centres configure consciousness
and turn it into living beacon, lighting my inner self.

Premium Member Fathers, Day 2003 Boundaries

Fathers, Day 2003
"Boundaries"
Written: By Tom Wright
6/16/03

For the elixir of the vine,
Dad could scarcely refrain.
Now just thoughts of his labor,
Like green persimmons, remain.

Twas like some withered old flower,
That doggedly clung to its stem.
Fleecing each morning sun, until at last,
His petals blanched and eye's grew dim.

How oft have I wondered?
As this flower's memory I retrieve.
Questioning extenuating circumstances,
Which I have yet to conceive;

But in all my discernment,
Lay a garden in arrant waste.
Its corners marked by boundaries,
That was unjust and unchaste.

Time has moved hands clockwise,
And those boundaries that were set.
Occasionally grieve my spirit,
O’er that shadow that remains yet.

At my dad's final passing,
I was left wrought up, but sad.
For despite perceived deficiencies,
One fact remained; he was my Dad.
© Tom Wright  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Lyric

Premium Member PRAISE BE TO GOD WHO BLESSES US

March 14 Praises to God Bible Meditations Based on Joshua 16-18

Key Verse– Joshua 17:14 And the children of Joseph spake unto Joshua, saying, Why hast thou given me [but] one lot and one portion to inherit, seeing I [am] a great people, forasmuch as the LORD hath blessed me hitherto?

PRAISE BE TO GOD WHO BLESSES US	

Praise be to God for blessing us as we:
Love Him with devotion
Labour for Him with diligence
Live for Him with dedication
Learn from Him with discernment
Lean on Him with determination 

Joshua 16:4 Praise be to the Lord for
His given inheritance that is:
Precious midst waters’ provisions
Priceless midst wilderness’ pests
Pure against wickedness’ perversions
Perfect by His Word’s protection
Profitable through His ways’ preservation

Joshua 18:3 Praise be to the Saviour Who is admonishing
us not to be slack in possessing our blessings by:
Remaining in our selfishness
Retiring in our self-sufficiency
Resting in our self-righteousness 
Relying on our self-improvement
Rejuvenating in our self-confidence
Retreating in our self-pity
Rejoicing in our self-esteem. Amen!

March 14, 2024

Premium Member Blessings Brightening Brilliance


Altruism accorded by amazing assurance
Brightening beauty with brilliant benevolence
Coloring creation in captivating contentment
Delighting dreams by discovering discernment
Energizing easily with endless enthusiasm
Flavoring feelings in fulfillment and friendliness
Glorifying God with glimpses of goodness
Heartening hopes by heaven’s healing hand
Inspiring intense intimacy by inducing indulgence
Jauntily justifying jubilance joining joyous jubilee
Keeping kindred kindled with a knack for kindness
Loving lanterns lighting lives with leadership
Moving mysterious minds to meet with miracles
Naivete nearing natural needs to nurture Narnia
Observing obscure objectives with open offerings
Pursuing perfection, purity and pleasure pacifiers
Quiet questions quack in quivers of quickening
Reflections of rushing reminders result in resilience
Sacrificing self for soothing sensations of satisfaction
Trusting truth and trying to teach a touch of talent
Uncovering understanding and an unbiased utopia
Verifying values for visionary views and vantages
Welcoming warm wishes for wisdom’s war of words
Xenocrates xenias with xeroxed xenodiagnosis
Zestful zealousness for a zillionaire’s zip in zone





Share Your Blessings Poetry Contest
By Beata Agustin
July 14, 2020

Premium Member Economics of PanTheism

Deifying a great teacher
is also a great way to make some money,
to establish a new commercial market
selling redemption from fear and ultimate failure.

I find Jesus of Nazareth's gospel message richly nutritious
compelling and resonant
when I have full co-empathic faith
that he taught a Way for all individual humans,
and historical-cultural tribes,
to consciously comprehend Earth-natured life
as Sun-spirited love
co-arising crown/rooted hybrid compost
for eternal health and safety
of EarthTribe's co-creation,
Trees of PolyNomial Life as Not-Not Paradoxical Death
reversing Life as Time-DeGeneration.

This view, however, is a profoundly inclusive version
of our co-operative Golden Rule,
and its DoubleReverse Corollary,
"Be not as you would not have others
co-arisingly become, intend, and operate
against you."

While this is deeply rich wisdom
about our divinely humane opportunity and risk,
this wisdom can only optimize with neurodiverse inclusive intention
and will to co-evolve our own-with-Others'
win/win redemption
within each sacred EarthTribe
panentheistic moment of love life 
as full-elational
co-empathic health.

Wealthy development of co-empathic love
grows cooperative inclusive political economics
of discernment and choice-making,
planning and development,
which cannot work effectively,
with optimal resonance and resilience,
within an overly commodified,
deductively divided,
anthroprivileged monotheistic market,
driven by bottom line fear of inhumane death
as loss of timeless EarthTribe now,
rather than loving a healthy rebirthing
neurosystemically functional
reverse-embryonic process
back into deep co-elational TransParent nest
from which Sun enlightenment
 and Earth empowerment 
co-empathically emerged
convex monotheistic light
and concave panentheistic dark.

Jesus as God.
Perhaps only possible
when HolySpirit
is panentheistically co-present
at hand,
now as always,
cooperating our slow-growth political power relationships
as co-arising economic transactions 
of pleasure health
for Beloved Bodhisattva compassion wealth.

Wealth of Eartheistic 
0-soul neuro-receptors
health caring 
EarthTribal wealthy 
and sacred humanity.

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