Improving Poems | Examples


The Final Push

Things are changing, 
Maybe for the worst or best,
 Hope it's for the best,
 Just going with the flow.

Things are going to get hard, 
The pressure is upon us,
 Yet here we are, 
Standing to finish strong.

It's here. It's time, 
It's upon us to decide—
 To finish fast, 
Or to finish strong.

IDYL IMPROVING



   So I broke  her ice
  throwing just a single glance
  with my rainbow eyes
Form: Haiku


Premium Member Improving on Perfection

If Mrs. Paul's™ got together with Planters™
To create a new breakfast treat
That everyone, kids and adults alike,
Would be eager and happy to eat,
It would be quite spectacular,
To use the vernacular,
One no other product could beat.
They'd tout their new filling
As natural and thrilling,
Organic and super delish.
But who would be thrilled
With a pastry puff filled
With peanut butter…and jellyfish?

Improving

Improving 
I had a good talk with the manager
About my numbers the account and sales
You need to do this and that

Yes I shall do my best boss
Here are my suggestions
To make the account better

First there is…
Next there is this…
Followed by this…
And lastly this…

Please see that this is done boss
So the account is smooth
Without issue or trouble

What a good meeting we had
I’m so glad the boss listened
Much will improve
Form: Verse

Premium Member Improving Mood

the stress can't be heard
now, such as drowning, draw in~
the hum of healing

search keenly at range
to go on fine wanderings~
beyond horizon

the bright humor sense 
a witty mind and cute heart~
this is a strong mix.

words seem so feeble
our times make life so precious~
and death book a thief

Written: February 05, 2023

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Form: Haiku


Improving Your Lot

Improving your lot
Is a commonplace goal.
Whatever you’ve got,
It is in your control.

To take charge and to change
Clothing, looks, or décor
You can just rearrange
Or can do a lot more.

Once you make the first move
There’s no limit to what
You might do to improve,
So just give it a shot.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Improving Our Lives

It is impossible for our every day lives

to improve 

unless 

an inward transformation we, first, manage 

to make !








© Demetrios Trifiatis
     30 January 2020

Improving and Behoving

Improving and Behoving

As more poems I write, they are improving;
And for you to read them all I am behooving;
Poems to read;
Fodder to feed;
Provide delightful experience that is moving.

Jim Horn
Form: Limerick

Thoughts of My Wisdom Improving With Time

Leave the mind open for interpretation and stimulation
Accept that another being, you will not change
Seek wise counsel
Peacemaker
Forgiveness

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