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Premium Member Finally Decided To Give It Up

Cute baby clothes I say.
Weird that you have ten thousand blue things and only one pink item.
I always wanted a girl, she said.
Kept that onesie around for years, hoping.
Twenty-eight years of marriage, but now 
I have finally decided to give it up.
Her eight boys laughed.
They were 15, 16, 17, 19, 20, 22, 23 and 25.

Let It Go - Give It Up

Our stay in the 
mushrooming subdivision 
      Ashley Springs
can achieve full ownership only
by meeting the developer’s 
latest requirements...
     six bushes and two deciduous trees,
    keep your garbage can in the garage.

Such restrictions have put the whole
neighborhood in the throes of unrest. 
Gears are clashing even as I write.

    To sully the community spirit 
in this way evokes emotions which 
attempt to sidestep legality.

We more flexible newbies, 
about thirty in number now
are pitted against 
the established oldies
who could grandfather out of some of 
the constraints based on length of residence.

       Solution? It’s our property now!
Mr. Developer.  Your raw power gains nothing
by the forcing of personal preference.

written May 27, 2018

Give It Up

I gave up myself
to be you
I watched myself go
vaporize into the wisp
where dreams go and your life
dies
a hard death 
give up
its done
its over
yes
I can be you
i can be anyone
its the secret you find
midlife
when youve crossed the line
between
possiblity
and no chance in hell
so you might as well
sit on that barrel
on that porch and just
give it up


Give It Up

I'll never forget what you've said
I think you don't care
but that can't be true
It's real
but we can't do anything with it
I try to keep it alive
but that isn't fair
I need to let go
I say the same thing over
and over again in my poems
what more can I say
I'll regret this forever
I know that
I want to say that I'll move on
but I don't really want to
I still repeat myself
I'll stop writing now

Give It Up

who do you think you are, acting all brave?

by getting rid of me, there's nothing to save.

try to searate us, if you dare,

with your pointless attempts, we wont care.

you cant stop love, even at its earliest form.

if you try, you'll get lost in the storm.

how can you stop me with all this distance?

why bother trying with all his resistance?

your words aren't wise, your threats don't scare me, 

I'll continue to fight until you see.

-Neko

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