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Lemon Cake

Lemon layer cake frosted With lemon cream smooth Sliced and served upon blue plates Sweet iced tea lovely Lemon slices served Delightful Tea
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Horne Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 7:30 AM
yes, delightful indeed, my friend - just like this write
Kendrick Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 9:35 AM
Thank you, Jack. I appreciate your visit. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
May 8, 2025 at 12:03 PM
Mouthwatering!
Barberis Avatar
May 5, 2025 at 8:02 AM
This one rolls so sweetly off the tongue. Such nice colour imagery with the lemon & blue. Congratulations, Sara, on your win!
Fowler Avatar
May 5, 2025 at 7:45 AM
Nice combo and nice win Sara. Congratulations! :)
mysore Avatar
May 4, 2025 at 11:02 PM
Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
George Avatar
May 4, 2025 at 10:19 PM
I knew this would be a winner. Congratulations Sara, on your top win.
Mckeithan Avatar
May 4, 2025 at 4:22 PM
I commented before when you first wrote the poem so I will just say congrats on your placement.
Poet Avatar
May 4, 2025 at 2:19 PM
Excellent poem, Sara; lemon cake is delicious. Your first-place win is quite remarkable.
Dietrich Avatar
May 4, 2025 at 12:56 PM
Back with congrats, Sara
Goldsmith Avatar
May 4, 2025 at 12:32 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative/fun "Lemon Cake" write again. I would love some with coffee. Have a blessed day with your win................
Kitchin Avatar
May 4, 2025 at 11:22 AM
Sara, such a sweet poem, love the cake a tea imagery. Congratulations on your first place win.
Empress Avatar
May 1, 2025 at 8:10 AM
Dear sara, Im usually a chocolate flavor lover but after reading this and seeing that picture now i am craving for lemon layered cake! How delicious it sounds and looks! And you did it so well! Ending it with " tea" perfect for evening tea! Well written! Seamless flow to your delicious word weaving! Pleasure reading! Best wishes! Sending you light always always
Rolland Avatar
May 1, 2025 at 3:37 AM
just delicious, to read and more, thanks poet
Mckeithan Avatar
April 30, 2025 at 10:49 AM
I sure could use a piece of that cake about now Sara. The picture and poem are great. Best in the contest
Buhagiar Avatar
April 29, 2025 at 2:50 AM
Did you leave a piece for me :)
George Avatar
April 28, 2025 at 8:09 PM
It sounds yummy. Haven't tasted it so far. Beautifully written, dear Sara. All the best!
Goldsmith Avatar
April 28, 2025 at 12:27 PM
I enjoyed reading your creative/fun "Lemon Cake" write. Great Picture. Is the party at your house??? Hahaha!!! "Good Luck" I did a couple of food ones. Have a wonderful spring day writing away...........
Dietrich Avatar
April 28, 2025 at 10:39 AM
Cake with tea. It sounds delightful.
Andresen Avatar
April 28, 2025 at 9:15 AM
- At my very first workplace I made lemon cake every Friday, Sara ... everyone loved it :) - Was served with coffee, Norway is not a tea drinking country - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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