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3rd in Epulaeryu Food Contest (Sponsor: Tania Kitchen)

Judged: May 4th, 2025

If sunrise sat on a dish-
should this be your wish-
hope for golden dough, mellow
spheres of cooked cornmeal
sunk in okra slosh
tomato
skies

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 5/5/2025 7:05:00 AM

Yes Trina - yum. Congratulations! :)

Trina Layne
Date: 5/6/2025 4:26:00 PM

Thank you, Linda! It is yummy.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/5/2025 6:30:00 AM

Indeed, tasty! Congratulations!

Trina Layne
Date: 5/6/2025 4:27:00 PM

Many thanks, Christuraj :)

thriveni c mysore

Date: 5/4/2025 11:10:00 PM

Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

Trina Layne
Date: 5/6/2025 4:28:00 PM

Appreciative as always. Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/4/2025 1:27:00 PM

I can't imagine this dish but I think it must be popular where you are. Congrats on the win the first two lines are really cool

Trina Layne
Date: 5/4/2025 2:21:00 PM

Hey! If you are familiar with polenta, that's the closest thing to it.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 5/4/2025 11:35:00 AM

Trina, sounds like a dish I may try, congratulations on your winning placement.

Trina Layne
Date: 5/4/2025 2:20:00 PM

Thanks. I could probably eat this every day. My husband doesn't like it. I love it!