Get Your Premium Membership

Coucou

If sunrise sat on a dish- should this be your wish- hope for golden dough, mellow spheres of cooked cornmeal sunk in okra slosh tomato skies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/5/2025 7:05:00 AM
Yes Trina - yum. Congratulations! :)
Login to Reply
Layne Avatar
Trina Layne
Date: 5/6/2025 4:26:00 PM
Thank you, Linda! It is yummy.
Date: 5/5/2025 6:30:00 AM
Indeed, tasty! Congratulations!
Login to Reply
Layne Avatar
Trina Layne
Date: 5/6/2025 4:27:00 PM
Many thanks, Christuraj :)
Date: 5/4/2025 11:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
Login to Reply
Layne Avatar
Trina Layne
Date: 5/6/2025 4:28:00 PM
Appreciative as always. Thank you!
Date: 5/4/2025 1:27:00 PM
I can't imagine this dish but I think it must be popular where you are. Congrats on the win the first two lines are really cool
Login to Reply
Layne Avatar
Trina Layne
Date: 5/4/2025 2:21:00 PM
Hey! If you are familiar with polenta, that's the closest thing to it.
Date: 5/4/2025 11:35:00 AM
Trina, sounds like a dish I may try, congratulations on your winning placement.
Login to Reply
Layne Avatar
Trina Layne
Date: 5/4/2025 2:20:00 PM
Thanks. I could probably eat this every day. My husband doesn't like it. I love it!

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry