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Premium Member Oozing Chimera

don't crave my chimera
string loudness and dew

bloom explodes in my stream
A cluster of crepuscle rainbows

It comes from  
devotedness for you
don't steal my daydreams
the ocean I share with you

If the melody 
gently has daringness
strike my face
well... 
I will wait for you

Written: September 30, 2022

Premium Member Inspirational

Whatever ensues, we'll bequeath to God. 
God unfolds, and he sustains us thus faster. 
The work we adopt should be uniquely cowed. 
God has endowed us all alone on this matter. 

To cheer, I should foster a dignified bearing. 
As yet, each of the muses affords their amenity. 
Since wagging devotedness in any dealing. 
The verse is feeble and prosaic as a lousy authority.

Yet long my dome it bobbed back, I can't sight. 
Somebody is flopping tight for a truthful replay. 
With trust redressing the case upon the plight. 
Decay is undeniably greater crucial than headway.

There, I'll yield my spirit a co-conspirator. 
My zealous heart has generated the blaze.
After that, the sonnet will be worn forever. 
Time never alters the line rooted in God's praise.

Premium Member Noble Virtues

Virtue
of Loyalty:
dependability
sincerity, devotedness
fidelity, credence-
noble to be
Loyal.

Virtue
of Honesty:
respectability
transparency, morality
accountability-
noble to be
Honest.

Virtue
of Eagerness:
vim, determination
committedness, vitality
exhilaration, flare-
noble to be
Eager.

Virtue
of Cleverness:
acuity, quickness
inventiveness, sagacity
artistry, intellect-
noble to be
Clever.


May 18, 2021

Heptastich is a non-rhyming verse poem of 7 lines;
Syllables are; 2-4-6-8-6-4-2


-the Affection of Our Connection-

dusk grieves his fury to whisper farewell,
it is time for dawn to offer appeal-
in a haven of affection, we dwell, 
only living for the love that we feel

my body aches for the touch of a man,
a man that craves to embrace furthermore-
for you are that to me since time began, 
forevermore you’re the one i adore

my soul bleeding passion for none but you,
nights of fervency and devotedness-
utmost pleasure with kind kisses you blew,
living in an abyss of tenderness

lost in a labyrinth of love's respect-
sweetheart...romance is our way to connect



*****

Date - 1.30.20

Pure Devotion

I have always wondered if I can be loyal to a fault, 
Can pure devotion somehow bring a relationship to a halt?

I’ve noticed in my life friends can’t accept my faithfulness,
For it scares them far away as they run and simply digress.

I breath with codependency as my kindness pushes them away,
I get too attached and they get annoyed and finally stray.

But my fidelity with my hubby has always been in my life,
We are two bodies sharing one soul, for I am his loyal wife.

Commitment to his devotedness has always been a priority,
I concentrate on our trust and honor in utmost majority.

Our piety has grown deeper over the last twenty years,
Yes, there has been much honesty, but also many tears.

The benevolence I carry keeps me alive forever and a day,
And the true steady of my dedication will always stay.

I’ve always wondered if I can be loyal to a fault,
Now I know that I should embrace my reliability and exalt.

~Date Written: April 20, 2016~

For the Contest, Loyalty, Sponsor, Broken Wings

Us

Steadfast,
                                                    Devotedness,
                                             Seize me into your soul,
                                       Feelings of ardent love for you,      
                                                       Closer


Premium Member Powerless

devotedness gone
tender yearning relinquished
feeling powerless

By Eve Roper 11/10/2014

Devotion

To many days gone wasting by,
to many devotions rotting time.
Devoted to him, to her.
Devotedness everywhere making me stir.
Things are happening my love is strongest.
Pulling me which way and that.
Devotion to Ashley, Devotion to cutting, Devotion to writing.
To many days have gone by wasting time.
Mainly Devotion to be apart of this cruel powerful world.
Thriving to seem important, when people tell you your nothing.
A little task, a little deed, makes it all seem,
Important.
That is my real devotion, that is my real conquest, that is the ultimite deed.
TO survive.

Smoldering Pasts

My, heart pours out to my Love 
A love of today, 
Helping to close the books of yesteryear 
Bad loves, heart ripping past 
Watching my heart break in the worst way 
Now a Prince on a White Stallion has come for this broken soul

One clocked year of healing 
Growing inside and learning the feelings of hate 
To walk away from a past that, is now forgotten 
Learning all new and forgetting all the old 
Looking into your eyes my Prince 
Seeing the Love, togetherness, passion and devotedness

With this new calendar, we start as one 
Sharing feelings, ideals and passions 
My, thoughts are of you daily 
Never a day passes where you are not on my mind 
I, glance at your picture wishing you were here 
Waiting for the time when you come home

A life once lost, has been found 
A love once lost, is found 
A woman that has lost her will, has once again found it 
A life of degradation is now but a memory 
A life of Love and passion is now here upon us 
A time to celebrate the today, now and the future

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