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Dirty war

Sometimes I cry
and I don't know what for
every step we have taken in life
has taken us to different worlds
now you are an ally
to those to whom you were a foe
and you are using dirty traps
to win a dirty war...

But I won't play this game
you can take it call
I won't even try
to keep what I never got
the battle was uneven
I stood no chance at all
we are now on different sides
of a tall bricked wall.

Jessica
Form: Rhyme

The Inward Artist

A washed-out skyscape
where mountains climb,
only to be ripped apart
by small gusts of wayward winds.

Is it that my eye is gray, or is the day
waiting to be colored?
Sky high hues
are contained in small paint pots.

Our inner artist
is looking upon its featureless soul.

That unseen picture
needs us to complete the rainbows,
fill-in the vivid and half-hidden,
to add color to drab fields,
sparkling reflections to every window
in all bricked-up cities.
To daub uniqueness onto the ordinary.

To take a different and another look
at how it is we,
that can wash in the washed out
with an ever-willing eye.


Obeying the Whistle

A thin-lipped nun blows her whistle.
An acre of concrete ground
stops playing, acting-out
our brief make-believe lives.

Reality is a cold wind
chewing at pale knees, gray shorts
and blue skirts.

Catholic children forget their names,
their made-up names as well.
as they march into the bricked block
where classrooms are already
shouting instructions.

Old now, we forget how it felt,
as we filed into the bare-boned halls
of a bickered religiosity.

How we had to study by rote,
like our times-tables,
how angry God would forever be
with us kids.

Born There

I was born there,
there between the grey days and ghostly nights.
I came out of the warm cave
fully encased with my mother's sadness.

The ghetto walls moved in or out
inch by crawling inch, they were a mirage,
but they remained in our eyes
as forever impenetrable.

I still dream of it, in that nightmare,
the buildings are too close together,
too full of bricked-up holes.
The narrow streets leading to no roads.

Sometimes, I find in the rubble
of a derelict building,
a tin wind-up manikin,
its painted form flaking,
yet its eyes
blink in the sunlight
as I carry it away.

Premium Member Researching Fly Trappers

Wizened elf researched the fly trappers as well as he could.
They were wreaking havoc and destruction in the deep north wood.
How do you get them to stop? He asked, looking them up at will.
Unfortunately, you have to push them out a bricked over window sill.

We don’t have those wizened elf lamented, now worried.
He heard the mice below, some of them now had scurried.
There has to be another way, he said, reaching for another book.
He has no great solution, I guess, I say, giving him a sad look.
Form: Rhyme


The Flood Contained Electric

"The Flood Contained Electric"

walls of glass 
sheathe this heart
a conservatory
for the lacking 
of menagerie
the walls aren’t
bricked up 
comme dans une
la orangerie
clearly seen 
straight through
X-ray vision
dancing dervish
until the clouds 
roll in and the 
pea soup fog 
mists over the view
jade is the colour 
caught courting within
the flinting prisms
seen in the eyes
of jaded others
the storm's coming
warns Elektra 
standing outside
the shattering
evaluation 
rain like hands 
clapping 
hail like pebbles
thrown by the good 
heavens above
turn Pollock 
tomatoes crushed
hard thrown 
the bleed painted
as water colour fades 
pink and naked 
cantoring in the mind
then, racing west
unbridled like 
a white wedding 
splayed onto the page
the bride stripped bare
surrenders
bricked in 
l'orangerie
the flood
contained,

Elektra 
turns away

(LadyLabyrinth / 2023)










canter
cantor
Form: Narrative

Enigmatic Love

His voice is as fresh as the morning air, 
of his existence, every bone in my body is aware. 
His face is as mysterious as a book with no cover, 
oh how lucky I am, to have him as my lover. 
His exhilarating eyes look deep into my soul, 
his voice causes shivers through my bones. 

His soul is like a bottomless pit filled with care,
but his exterior is harder than a bricked well. 
A stoic expression plastered across his face,
him, no-one can replace.
A warm smile strewn across his heart,
my heart aches when we're apart.

He belongs to me, 
his heart is mine and so is his love. 
I’d never give him up, at least not easily. 
He looks after everyone with no declines. 
Loving him isn't tough, 
it makes me want to be alive.

Whimsicality

She had a face like a fish fryer's basket,
All stressed  and creased and lined 
His like  a bag of old spanners
Abused, misused, misaligned. 
She jumped his place in the bar queue
One  Boozy Saturday Night
Instead of taking the Hump 
He loved her at first sight.

Two aging hippies
Who’d never ever bricked it
And when they met each other 
Felt they’d really clicked it
They consummated their relationship 
In the yard outside  the bar
And once or twice more
On the back seat of his  car.

They came down to earth together
Laughing at life’s little joke 
Then he pulled out his baccy pouch 
And rolled them both a toke.
Two ageing hippies who
Quickly grabbed the chance
To waltz their way together
Through life’s oncertain dance

They became a couple
Saw each other more and more
And when they looked at each other 
It was only beauty that each saw,
With her face like a fish fryer’s basket 
All stressed and creased and lined, 
His like a bag of old spanners
Abused, misused, misaligned
Form: Rhyme

Saint Hilda's Tears

We were always a little ash white,
the girls always a bit cleaner;
the soap always green carbolic
the toilet paper always slick and hard to scrunch,
six year old bottoms always a little sore.

The nuns who ran these grey bricked barracks
called it the: Covent of 'Saint Hilda's Sacred Tears.'
There were lots of tears but no saints.

No black kids either, though there were many
seen on the grimed streets. They looked well fed and happy.
We were different. Our parents had sinned,
had broken the golden rule and got caught
birthing the unwanted.
Back then the birch cane was an instrument of love.

From here-on I must paraphrase...

Each Sunday, The scrawny priest
would look down upon us -
speaking thusly:

"You're all sinful
fit only for cannon or factory fodder,
forever doomed to poverty."


A pause while he did the sign of the cross
while mumbling to himself in Latin.

"The righteous must
resign themselves in good grace
to their natural place,
to humbly throw themselves
upon the mercy of their betters."

Such sermons filled us all with much joy,
and we were all briefly uplifted
until the hatchet-faced nuns
led us back to our own special hell.

Renovations

The House was featured on the T.V.
Celebrities put on hard hats
posed with sledge hammers.
It was said that the old structure
had ‘good bones’. What it did have
were walled-in nocturnal whispers
and a resident paranoia.

Interior decorators re-imagined rustic hues
a bohemian nest chic-est
Rooms were staged and displayed
yet beneath the contemporary
the old retold its history.

Much of the house was to be renovated
pastel and neutral colors
replaced flock and wainscots,
yet bricked-over alcoves
still dripped a dried red rust
of long held rumors.

The house concealed itself,
but its fiber and pith,
its conduits continued to throb-on
echoing an older heartbeat,
a retelling
of long unsolved crimes
thinly painted over.

Trailer Park Flood

households lurch
creak unmoored
  hulls rocking

the twang of whip lashed rigging
as electric wires stretch
pull up clods
  yards of plantings

where once roots clutched
bricked-up aluminum
long jacked-up boards
  swirl and bloat

bed-springs shiver off
      unwinding sheets
the dumbfounded foaming
  of absconding pillows

bedrooms fall out
of plunging submarines
chests and draws
shedding a put away sundry 
then the roll and billow
  baffle and muddle

the face-up exposure
of everyday innards
  sweeps by
riding the backbones
of the up-turned
  the bowled over

hard to fathom
that a river of storm clouds
could move all this
manifold clutter
  the cheesy and cherished

dumping down clumps
into wet clay models
  of any new address

The Quadrangle Well

They made a decorative well
in the campus
where books and laptops
were set aside
by the skinny staked
newly planted ancient oaks.
Students could sit there
to be good company
if they could find it.

The well is small, a bricked hole,
a shallow ocular sink
holding a green stillness,
yet direct sun made it live.

In the dazzle of the day
undergrads agree not to notice
a diminutive tide going in and out,
the hump-backed splashes of
surfacing Plesiosauri
magnified from lava and spawn,
until a passing cloud
clarifies these malformed gestations.

Girls in shorts check their bare legs
for teeth marks
as the noon day bell rings.

The wells inner-life
subsides as light dwindles,
damsel fly
and water striders
skim the small round waters,
while some feed upon
the drowned bones
of prehistoric ghosts.

A memo is eventually sent
to the groundskeeper
demanding he stop feeding
the reptiles.

Bad-Year Obituary

Well the Will of twenty twenty
Did not favour its kids gently.
Was the smirk in in that jerk's dying breath a gest left to make us unfriendly?
Or did it point at his suffocators, through pillows of plastic-made plenty?

Forget that loud death - there's quiet hordes
Bricked under this scene in front-room wards
Trapped, trialed, trickling up - put down by the order of the Always Of Lords
The mines that bind those poor prole's souls, extracting human oil like whale-ships boards.

Two and two's evils struck many by surprise
Some felt for necks, asked what's next, tried to open eyes
Saw cruelty crawl from Antique times, muffled in masks, found ways to rise
Saw profiteers who murdered years, bombs built below the pier in snake-sweat and lies

At the wake we'll say they died a crap uncle, and showed us good and sad.
The instant that first twenty waltzed in, it proclaimed itself to be mad.
Form: Rhyme

Lawnless

It's blisteringly dry.
Martian, winedark, overweight -
No lawns on this mesa of millet-baked pie,
To make this crater straight.

No spades here, no scraping rake.
Just sharp sticks, blood-bricked mortar.
Berbers camp here for old time's sake,
But can't stay; as there's no water.
 
In this sahara's nape,
There sinks this winderly dome.
Winedark, martian, squat-blooded black grape,
The Nomads' ruined home.

Its winedark walls're muralled,
Of a grand god grazed by honest plague.
His gentle green ways enmarbled,
Wonderfully weathered, and vague.

He sent no fire or floods,
So those drifters still kiss his hand.
He let grave waves pave their jungly woods,
In a lawnless scheme most grand.

Ancient bone-sands, sifting.
Campfire rise, boots trace.
Dead trees' shoots forever lifting
That Martian, winedark place.

The green god grins, in a mirror's embrace.
The dome, squat-blooded, has an ozyman grace;
If lawned, he'd have deserted it, its peoples displaced;
And there'd be less life living upon his face.
Form: Rhyme

Puttied Panes

Puttied Panes

	Puttied panes, encased in pink-primed steel
	Watch tiny rivers wend their downward way,
	While puddles form where thin green spikes reveal
	A just sown lawn, where one day I may play.
	New houses; salmon bricked, like some great quilt.
	Stark line posts, straight as soldiers, stand erect,
	All razor edged, where blood may soon be spilt
	In play; and then, through life, I’ll yet reflect
	Those nightmares, wrought from childhoods fragile dreams
	That circumstance, in one swift move, has made.
	A jagged hole lays bare the fragile seams
	Of security; a mornings sun filled glade.
	  	Another day, another shower of rain,
	  	Distorts the past and waters down the pain.
Form: Sonnet

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