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Obeying the Whistle

A thin-lipped nun blows her whistle. An acre of concrete ground stops playing, acting-out our brief make-believe lives. Reality is a cold wind chewing at pale knees, gray shorts and blue skirts. Catholic children forget their names, their made-up names as well. as they march into the bricked block where classrooms are already shouting instructions. Old now, we forget how it felt, as we filed into the bare-boned halls of a bickered religiosity. How we had to study by rote, like our times-tables, how angry God would forever be with us kids.

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Date: 12/5/2023 10:39:00 AM
Eek I went to Catholic primary, secondary and college and it wasn't quite so harsh but they did indeed teach you how to feel bad. I've just sent my 12 year old to Catholic high school after getting her baptised but providing barely anything to ready her for Catholicism. Coincidentally I've just said we'll have a chat about what agnosticism is later so she can decide herself. I'm already brainwashed of sorts though.
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