Best Whirling Poems


Premium Member Whirling Winds Wail
The sky becomes synonymous with grey,
signifying a storm is on its way.
And a sullied sun swiftly slips away;
allowing shadows to overcome day,
while clouds release their droplets straightaway.

Thunder echoes across purple-bruised skies,
as lightning causes drops to vaporize.
And ebony descends to claim its prize
while the whirling winds wail and Nature cries.

Treetops get tossed and bullied by each...

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Categories: whirling, 10th grade, anxiety, hyperbole,
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member Twirling Whirling Swirling Into Myself
Twirling, whirling, swirling into myself
I listen to my ready soul
I take blank canvas off a shelf

Twirling, whirling, swirling into myself
My muse becomes my happy elf.
As I begin, I feel whole


Twirling, whirling, swirling into myself
I listen to my ready soul...

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Categories: whirling, 10th grade, 11th grade,
Form: Triolet
Premium Member The Whirling Butterfly
I stepped into a world of pinks, reds, yellow, and purple.
Bee’s, butterflies, and hummingbirds flying free!
Long flowing stems swaying,  in a soft summer breeze.
An aroma, fresh cut hay, teasing my nose!
Smiling, I recall that day…  not so long ago.
Closing my eyes,  I inhale a welcomed scent.

Looking up with dark green eyes -
I...

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Categories: whirling, childhood, family, life, giggle,
Form: Free verse

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The Whirling Dervish -Haiku
Gaining, by loosing
dancing to the mystic tune
the whirling dervish...

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Categories: whirling, dance, spiritual,
Form: Haiku
The Whirling Army
Beautiful scenery, rolling hills with craggy cliffs adorned with winter scrub clinging to impossible places. Narrow winding roads, leading somewhere, maybe nowhere, finding out when we get there. Rounding a bend just enjoying the scene, finding an eyesore almost obscene. In the ground in front, towering high a plague of of wind turbines I did...

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Categories: whirling, business, power, science, social,
Form:
Premium Member Autumn Whirling
 

O withered garden,
your dazzle is decaying;

And leaves are falling,
burnt orange and yellow drop,
drifting, twirling and whirling. 


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September 5, 2014


Poetry/Tanka/Autumn Whirling
Copyright Protected, ID 09-597-659-05
All Rights Reserved, 2014, Constance La France


Entered into the Premier contest, Autumn Colors, 
sponsor, Francine Roberts, Judged 09/2014

Third Place...

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Categories: whirling, autumn, color,
Form: Tanka


Ecstasy of Sufi Whirling
Letting my body perfectly free
As anonymous star in the sky’s sea 
While whirling, I closed my eyes
Lit the Holy Candle inside
As light as an air
When losing my existence 
As I am a wind
Or a particle of sand
Or a Dandelion seed flying in the air
In a Sufi (mystical) flight
I am a soul in luminous Twilight
The whole...

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Categories: whirling, god, journey, religious, spiritual,
Form: Free verse
The Dance of the Whirling Wheel of Lights
In the twentieth year on the 11th day of the first month
I saw a vision and the skies open up before me

As I stood facing the south direction the Sun began to dance
In colors of light

The Sun moved to the right and then the Sun moved to the left
The Sun moved higher in the sky...

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© Mel Brake  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: whirling, birth, earth, extended metaphor,
Form: Free verse
Whirling Dazzling White Dancers
Spiraling snowflakes.
Dance ballerina duet.
Pas de deux descant....

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Categories: whirling, nature
Form: Haiku
Premium Member Whirling Pleasure
Gazing upon the image of the earth from space,
I see a round mosaic sphere of an array of colors,
almost magical, so beautiful and alluring,
made up of  blue, white, green, and earth tone hues.

While mortals stand upon the earth and look up at the sky.
Royal Blue Ocean, home of billions of creatures, 
mysteries it hides...

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© Eve Roper  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: whirling, earth, nature, ocean, storm,
Form: Free verse
Wispy Whirling Flakes
Satin wisps twirling
Blue transparent dreams swirling
Grey dank haze shrouding...

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Categories: whirling, nature,
Form: Haiku
Premium Member Whirling Watermelon Ride
I woke up one gray and melancholy morning
munching oatmeal and buttered toast, alone
same as yesterday, last week and maybe tomorrow 
when I saw a whirling wonder flying down the road. 

It whirled outside my windowpane
it whirled from head to toe
it whirled with neon pinks and greens
it whirled and twirled and flowed! 

I saw a bicycle...

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Categories: whirling, fantasy, fun,
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member Whirling Dervish
The bedlam lifts if only for a while;
a brief but needed calm falls on the house
when she departs for school aboard the bus.
Though trying hard to suppress overt smiles,
I grin in the direction of my spouse,
for any more would be superfluous.

But storms can interrupt our best laid plans
and so it seems our calm was but...

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© Jeff Kyser  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: whirling, granddaughter, storm,
Form: Sonnet
Whirling By
Whirling by, munching away at the worn-garnet shingles, chopping trees with its transparent rope and hair-raising dynamism, and flushing your garish memories and spotless portraits down the toilet, sucking them away, fracturing and splintering your heart and soul, for they mean the world to you, they turn the lights on in your life.

Whirling by, facility...

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© Sam Allen  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: whirling, abuse, dance, nature,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member The Galaxy In Your Heart
The revolution of stars in the galaxy
Resembles the whirling of dreams in your heart
The unknown part of the galaxy
Symbolizes the unachievable dreams in your heart
The galaxy is the future base of mankind
And your dreams are your future life goals
The galaxy in the dark is to be conquered one day
And your dreams in the unpredictable futue...

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Categories: whirling, dream, future, stars,
Form: Free verse
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