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Whirling Dazzling White Dancers

Spiraling snowflakes. Dance ballerina duet. Pas de deux descant.

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/7/2010 5:13:00 PM

Will see some of those tomorrow as predicted by the weather crews and luv your Haiku Marty.. they do look pretty coming down but turn to ice and zippo.. down u go... luv your last line too.. awesome... blessings... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Elaine George

Date: 1/7/2010 10:54:00 AM

Hi Marty, I can translate all but the word descant. I can guess, but I would rather hear it from the hoarses mouth. lol. Thank you. Elaine

Derrick Burton

Date: 1/7/2010 9:31:00 AM

Abeautiful read and thank you for your awesome comments. Enjoy your day. :):)

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 1/7/2010 8:19:00 AM

This is beautiful, you have captured so much. Regards Déirdre

Andrew Roza

Date: 1/7/2010 8:14:00 AM

Beautiful lines! the last part in French quite beautiful even though i never understood it :) Great poem never the less :)

P Sheart

Date: 1/7/2010 8:04:00 AM

I'm looking out my window right now at these dazzling white dancers! Wonderful Haiku Marty! Love Light Patty