Whirling Dazzling White Dancers

Spiraling snowflakes.
Dance ballerina duet.
Pas de deux descant.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Sweetheart Avatar
January 7, 2010 at 5:13 PM
Will see some of those tomorrow as predicted by the weather crews and luv your Haiku Marty.. they do look pretty coming down but turn to ice and zippo.. down u go... luv your last line too.. awesome... blessings... luv.. Linda-Marie..
George   Avatar
January 7, 2010 at 10:54 AM
Hi Marty, I can translate all but the word descant. I can guess, but I would rather hear it from the hoarses mouth. lol. Thank you. Elaine
Burton Avatar
January 7, 2010 at 9:31 AM
Abeautiful read and thank you for your awesome comments. Enjoy your day. :):)
Omaidin Avatar
January 7, 2010 at 8:19 AM
This is beautiful, you have captured so much. Regards Déirdre
Roza Avatar
January 7, 2010 at 8:14 AM
Beautiful lines! the last part in French quite beautiful even though i never understood it :) Great poem never the less :)
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January 7, 2010 at 8:04 AM
I'm looking out my window right now at these dazzling white dancers! Wonderful Haiku Marty! Love Light Patty
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