The Whirling Dervish -Haiku

Gaining, by loosing
dancing to the mystic tune
the whirling dervish
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Horsman Avatar
January 22, 2013 at 2:48 PM
love this, the subject a little different for me,, but i'm willing to learn...
Lamoureux Avatar
January 21, 2013 at 12:26 PM
Most do not realize there is gain in loss. It is a lesson taught with age. We are diminished and yet more complete.
Ali Bhat Avatar
January 22, 2013 at 2:04 AM
Richard,rather than age ,it comes with understanding...my daughter is 16 and she is a fan of whirling dervishes and the philosophy related to them....sometimes i feel a bit immature compared to her... its only when we give everything then only we can think of ultimate gain....:)))
Ali Bhat Avatar
January 22, 2013 at 2:03 AM
Richard,rather than age ,it comes with understanding...my daughter is 16 and she is a fan of whirling dervishes and the philosophy related to them....sometimes i feel a bit immature compared to her... its only when we give everything then only we can think of ultimate gain....:)))
Kendrick Avatar
January 21, 2013 at 7:21 AM
Enjoyed reading this one today..I am glad that I chose it to read..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Ali Bhat Avatar
January 22, 2013 at 2:04 AM
Thanks Sara...:))
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