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Premium Member Black and White

I am like an avalanche slithering in shivering angst,
free-falling into an abyss of an aching era,
where luminous lakes reflect pixelated regrets,
for time throws my canvas into splitting helplessness,
and mind plays tricks in aimless frequency, 
framing toneless tenors within paralyzed psyche,
pushing and pulling ivory strings of my ebony heart.

Now I’m dwelling in the chaotic caves of a calculative carnivore,
unable to grasp the lunar light that envelopes forsaken fields, 
while crooning caged memories, like a pensive nightingale,
pondering, would the moon ever untangle these starless thoughts? 
Or was it written on the wailing walls  of melancholic museums~
that I was meant to drown in dizzying darkness?

I’ll rest my pen in a glass casket of equations~
cloaking this crippled conscience from seeing beyond vague visions,
detached from kohl eyes, eager to steal my voice,
as I keep sinking in black and white polarity, 
pausing curative prose in screeching silence.
Categories: untangle, angst,
Form: Free verse

Interwoven

Place your head on my shoulder,
let it stay there
and we'll just breathe
together
in
...and... out

Inhale positivity,
exhale negativity-

Pluck the sadness from the air,
unravel that ball of worry...
We'll find that knot
that started it all,
untangle it, 
and wave ribbons 
in the air

We'll let those colors swirl
around each other,
we'll blend them...
then weave them

into a tapestry

that comforts us 
in the end

Doesn't matter 
at all
if it turns out
 too short

Our lives
are full of tangles
anyway,
a lot of thread
out there...

So place your hand in mine,
let it stay there,
and we'll weave
together
...in
...and... out...






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Categories: untangle, family, friendship, life, love,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member Song Of Demise

I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead;
I lift my lids and all is born again.
I think I made you up inside my head.
-Sylvia Plath

I see no reason to rhyme, 
but an aching heart, 
stranded in the midst of nothingness,
as quill rests in a nameless
coffin, like a trembling corpse.

Words woven in tears
glisten like rain,
amidst rustic pages 
within a book of bleeding ink. 

While 
I, the deep darkness, 
ponder, would the moon
ever grieve for the sun,
or will she allow waning
stars to abandon 
her doleful realm?
As her face
shifts and turns through
phases of changes-
and her soul like 
the weary winter,
withers into white-washed wounds.

I am the hazy mirror to 
a lunar goddess.
There shadows betrayed
this cruel conscience,
roaming within forlorn vales,
swirling through a woeful wind,
to nocturnal sonatas. 

My mind nestles like
a raven resting 
at the treetop,
calling your name into
frozen oblivion,
laced in secluded silence,
echoing amidst obsidian fears.

What would they know
of tainted tales,
obscured within the 
mellifluous sound of splitting rain?

I am throned to a fallen sky,
drizzling thorns and splinters
upon bruised toes.

Remember, I love you,
through dreams and more,
stretching my fingers
to your silvery spheres. 
Now your palette of romance 
paints a blurred portrait
of hallowed misery;
dreams forgotten with time. 

There’s no perfect 
pigment to correct
my insomniac frame 
but metaphors to lure me 
back to a colorless 
castle above satanic seas.

I’m dancing with demons;
as the pain you’ve fed me,
rushes through chained chambers.

Tonight, the storms may seem calm,
like forests awaiting for a trail
of redolent rainbows,
to flicker upon mourning meadows.

Tomorrow, when I slumber
six feet beneath breathing fiction,
will you rewrite cruel convictions,
that stole my purpose to live?

Maybe darkness sparkles upon
rich rivulets of rippling regrets,
so the cosmos would allow the moon
to rise and beam brighter than 
the selfish sun. 

Let this poem be the last 
amulet to sorrowful sagas,
as I untangle your vines 
suffocating my final breath,
this is the eternal demise—
I’m dying before your dead eyes.
Categories: untangle, angst, dark, death,
Form: Free verse

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Premium Member Dangerous Thoughts

Aching with desire
my thoughts are filled with you
thoughts I should not dare to think
for fear they will destroy me.
Just a thought of you and I am seized
by feelings that shatter me
and thrill me
burning my flesh as they rush through me
leaving me thirsting in their wake
thirst only to be quenched
with the knowledge of you
thoughts that twist and taunt me
until I am at the brink
trembling to my very core
intoxicated by this sweet torture
my body silently crying out for yours
begging for release
relief
begging you to come to me
and let me wrap myself around you
and lose myself to you
as you lose yourself in me.
Nothing else can untangle me
nothing less will satisfy this aching need
as I am lost to thoughts
so dangerous
so delicious.




written 2005
Categories: untangle, passionme,
Form: Free verse

The Hero I Don'T Deserve

Hey, my name is Aaron and I am kinda a modern day superhero

Now I know what you’re thinkin’

Okay, this guy? A hero? Like with powers and skills?

Nah but before you think further hear me out.

Yes… I don’t have money like Stark or Wayne

I don’t have a back story like Peter Parker and definitely not a love interest like Mary Jane.

I don’t have a super serum or gamma radiation to explain the chemical imbalances in my brain

My super hero name is not catchy or personifying.

Normally it comes along as,

“Dude”

“Brother”

“Son”

“Dad”

But you see I know how it feels to not be able to save the ones you love most,

To always try and do the right thing but still fail the ones closest to you.

When other's worlds are falling apart I’m always the planet they land on

Now what I do have is a secret identity,

Hiding the pains and struggles I bare to bare the problems of those who can’t themselves.

While Ironically not wanting to put the burden on someone else because I feel I’m strong enough and the traumas others go through are way worse than mine.

My super powers aren’t swinging from roof tops or having my fiery flaming eyes glistening,

Mine are as simple as loving and listening.

Never judging and forever being understanding,

Fighting the villains that are your biggest weakness that have no effect on me.

You see,

Depression, Anxiety, mental tortures

Family traumas and mental disorders

Those of which I’m immune to like superman to bullets,

Now I do have a kryptonite.

losing site on the ones closest to me because I go out of my way to try and save others.

Because even though my life is impossibly knotted,

If I can still manage to untangle someone else’s and hopefully inspire them to be the light they want to see in this villainous world, then I know I have done what I’ve been called to be,

To be the hero I don’t deserve.
Categories: untangle, endurance, hero, inspirational, mental
Form: Free verse

Premium Member Undergrowth with Two Figures, Van Gogh

brushed by the blushing Fontainebleau,
   blooming with rainless foliage,
like a poem kissed by the green…
I sigh as thoughts wander
   in saffron silence,
   in the echoing warmth
of your breathing silhouette...

we are beyond wraiths of wildflowers,
   waltzing through the wilderness,
   sipping honeyed drops of sunlight,
whilst specks of citrine 
soar above olives~
merging in mystical mists of magnetic gold,
oblivious to the spectral leaves
  thriving within inner forests,
  veiling the vindictive vines
painted with ice-corpse colors of life.

O time, cloaked in cryptic clouds~
in a world that cares not for the forgotten,
let the fields of fervent petals
dress the untouched trees
with butterfly-blue blurs,
as peace is more than a mere noun,
nestled between framed figs…
and to heal is to heed the harmonized~
hymns mirroring soft springs of Eden,
where l o v e is an aesthetic array
ribboned with amorous emeralds~
scattered across meadows
   lost in redolent reveries.

I speak to the breeze, 
cradling the balmy boulevard 
in hushed tones~
  to unfreeze the wintry thistles,
  to untangle complex chords of woes
piercing the pained canvas
aching within my mind..
for in the layered heart 
of external pleasures,
there I’ve found the palette~
that homes not regrets and troubles
but elevates the m a g i c
              of sketched solace…

the verdant of swirling hope
fine-tuned strokes of sage~
 sun-soaked distraction,
   a memory of soulmates 
            tied
                  to the timeless roots
                              infused with trust ...
Categories: untangle, art, emotions,
Form: Ekphrasis


Premium Member Anywhere But Here

But wherever you are, I no longer want to be:
for you are thunderstruck moonlight,
and I am a scarred sunset ~ a secret in saffron,
melting into the myth that floats forever, 
within silenced dunes of scorpion stones,
where the cryptic coldness of sand feels like~
Cupid’s daggers piercing through
my aching skin and bones.
Frost-kissed vines wrap around
my wintry heart,
screaming for a sacred release
from the tethered torment 
of satanic sapphires,
breathing within the haunted caves
of unending nightmares ~
and the twilight that wanes 
behind flatlined promises.

Tonight, I feel like arrows of angst,
ricocheting within these woeful walls
of my melancholic mausoleum,
mirroring the heat of a burning breeze ~
like an epitaph lost in the sweltering air.
The clover of golden green glimmers,
like fireflies around my wrists,
luring distant ravens,
croaking above paralyzed dreams,
to untangle the crooked lines of lies,
crawling within clouds of comfort,
oblivious to Lilith’s serpent slithering
around my fragile feet in slow cadence,
pushing me to the darker dusks
drawn above the prying
valley of putrid prunes,
where these wistful musings
will remain as mere voiceless ashes,
cremated in vain,
with flames of forgotten folktales
echoing as faded music within a glass urn.

So, if tomorrow I’m gone, remember me ~
I still breathe silver snippets of hope,
a frozen quiescence,
etched in seven arcs of stardust,
longing to be anywhere but here.
Perhaps as the last verse of your poem,
or could I be the lone rose,
forever thriving in the galactic gardens of love,
where hate and greed, tangled in
jinxed jewels,
dissolve into nothingness ~
like rusted ribbons of the crestfallen lunar.

I hope lilacs and lavenders will bloom
in hypnotic hues, to calm raging rivers flowing
within the arctic arteries of a dark poet,
longing for a home 
away from hellish hands,
so I can serenade songs of survival
and rhapsodies of resilience,
while watching every tear I’ve shed 
crystallize into pearls and diamonds,
like born-again stars in violet skies.
Categories: untangle, angst, dark, destiny,
Form: Free verse

Crazy Beautiful

I'm crazy beautiful 
or plainly insane
I consider insanity 
to be a personal gain
perpetual bliss
or so the surface shows
hidden secrets
no one can know
inside i want to scream and shout
im a jigsaw puzzle 
with a million broken pieces to figure out
I'm an intricate web
you try and untangle
dont get to close
you may fall and strangle
my scratch is a cut
that sorefully deepens
a painfull wound 
in which my memories seep from
I'm a gift to the world 
one nobody can keep
I must be plainly insane 
my beauty is only skin deep
Categories: untangle, beautiful, confusion, dark, inspirational,
Form: Free verse

A Kite

A Kite by Weston Gregory 

Gamed and played, swift to flight
a kite outbound disengaged from 
gravity's might
A laughter of sort at least a smile
that by and by we can untangle 
humanity's plight

By swish and swirl and crazy hoops
a kite lighten burden inspires hope on 
journey not new
yet, ever changing when life's wind blew
until all's but distant sight, held by cords 
and glue 

Above horizon daunting for me and you 
but, a cinch for a kite with faith inbrued
a chime to dance the rhythm which 
nature taught true.... 
w. gregory
Categories: untangle, adventure, analogy, brother, faith,
Form: Verse

Premium Member A Haven of Order


In this tangled web of chaos, 
trying to untangle my being 
of this spider's lacework; 
if my soul will just assent
to a haven of order.

11/2/2014
© Eve Roper  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: untangle, freedom, hope,
Form: Light Verse

Premium Member Our natural state

"free from conditioned belief 
no agenda on our shelf
vibrant as the light of Self
life flows on all by itself” - Unseeking Seeker

Faith is more than a mere noun,
       phrased within fragile pages
of a tailored manuscript;
       it is a way of life,
found in the zestful air we breathe,
         in the hushed haze 
                    of peace and intrinsic love.

I bloom like a lotus,
floating through silence~
tied to tulip-twinkles of twilight,
turning nautical stripes
into midnight prayers,
sailing through the skyline
like a cultural odyssey,
facing the eyes of
the speechless sun,
to untangle brutal tendrils
chaining my sapphire spirit
to terrains of ashes,
smudged with societal lies
and narrow perceptions.

And as the wind blows
cinnamon hymns,
I listen to the heartbeat
of the horizon,
adorned with balmy auroras,
ricocheting runes engraved
within the pristine pillars
that hold firm the hibiscus haven~
a sanctuary that hears not the mantras
of megalomaniac meadows,
too consumed by stereotypes
and prewritten scriptures,
curled into clusters of constraints,
sprinkling superficial sparkles
to hypnotize the naive.

O utopian chateau,
I choose to soar free,
like a peacock plume
swirling in sync with
the lilac light of falcon fortitude,
and the timeless pulse of the Almighty,
unshakable from the
gusts and gales 
enveloping my conscience
like a maroon maelstrom of misery.
I choose to follow
the soothing shimmers,
of the morning stars,
letting go of the
tempest of Midas’ touch~
   labels and ego,
   discrimination and darkness,
   materialism and fickleness,
while the icy weeds
in my skin unfurl
   empathy and kindness,
aware of sacred states
sewn with threads of
   karma and kundalini.

I am the soulful veins
of an amaranthine leaf,
   flawed in fire,
embracing the 
fluorescent frequencies
that ebb and flow
like waves of wisdom,
surfing through fogs of fairy-tears,
like sea-glass smoke
kissing the porcelain 
  sands of serenity.

So, between the melodious mists
of the breeze and the blue,
there I find a reason
to rise and rinse stained ripples,
while attuned with
the butterfly dews resting upon
divine diamonds of blissfulness.
Categories: untangle, devotion, faith,
Form: Free verse

Friends of the Twins Metatron and Sandalphon

Three Popes died within six years
I wonder if what killed them 
were the sum of their fears
Could the cause be what they
covered or uncovered
The bible speaks of kings
who's wickedness God discovered
Historically their causes
were just and awed
But Heaven alone judges
the guilt of it's laws 
It took six years to stop
the naming of angels
And the most we don't know
because of their angle
So just for the record 
I'll untangle the tangle
Nine angels minus two
so scholars can tango

Michael the warrier
"Who is like God"
Gabriel the messenger
"Powerful Man of God" 
Raphael who sometimes stirred
a pool
"The Healing of God"
Uriel Who protected John the Baptist 
during Herod's wicked rule
"The Light or Fire of God"
Salaphiel
"The Prayers and Communication of God"
Jegudiel
"The Glory and Praise of God"
Barachiel leader of guardian angels
"The Benediction and Blessing of God"

Thrones, Dominions, Virtues, Principalities
Powers, Archangels posses
Cherubim and Seraphim
are even Angels none the less


( A few riddles included )
Categories: untangle, 12th grade, angel, faith,
Form: Free verse

Prayer (2001)

Who will unravel the tangled skein
These silken threads of thoughts?
Each strand possesses a special sheen
But is obscured by knots..

The day seems done before it starts
The night seems swathed in gloom..
For though facts fade, memories last
And clouds then hide the moon.

Who will unravel this tangled skein?
I turn to You dear God
A light to guide, a post to lean
You are the staff for all.

So hold my hands when they do flail
And steer my stumbling steps
And send the wind to swell my sails
And light when the Sun sets.

Steady these shaking fingers, numb
With cold; dispel the fears,
The loneliness when none will come
I know, to dry the tears.

When wanes the moon, recedes the tide
When ebbs the strength I've got
When all goes bleak, be by my side
Dear God, untie the knots.

Unravel then, this tangled skein
Untangle the threads of thoughts
When hopes are lost, teach me to dream
Bring to order the chaos.

When dark clouds hide the midday Sun
And the day in doubts' enmeshed
Rekindle snuffed aspirations
The morrow'll dawn afresh.

Suffuse me with strength so i can scale
The mounts that mark my way
So march on brave, not rant and rave
When it isn't 'my day'.

And tell me God, I needn't hide
For fear- You are with me
And won't forsake your errant child
Who now, ahead, can't see.

That you will show the correct way
Steer me clear of what is wrong
Teach me the words I ought to say
And sing with me my songs.

That you will bring the tunes i need
With music, words to sound
That you will be the flowing ink
when my pen cannot be found.
Categories: untangle, faithwords, me, light, day,
Form: Verse

Riddles On the Wind

in the desolate
          solitary hours
    when fear trickles down my spine

  time is my jailor
    closing me behind its doors
              isolating my heartbeats
        distant from yours

  drips following a storm
      ping a pattern of rubies
                upon my flesh
    heat carved runes
          tell of lovers set aside
      long ago

  riddles on the wind
answers unfound
  my present twists
    into a knotted conflagration
            higher
          hotter than before

voices from the past rise
          and resonate:
             
    ‘your heart-pain
          bleeds from your words

  that love is the umbrella
        under which these wounds fester
              is that much worse

    untangle your heart-threads
      from their prison bars
         
        the landscape of your life
                must evolve

          immerse yourself
                    and know freedom’

            my quest begins now
Categories: untangle, dark, prison, uplifting,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member The Rent of Judgement

I've traipsed down a cobble of your path.
If you're ever lost, forgotten or misstep
I'll surely spruce up a room for you.
It'll be on the mundane -humble side 
but safe-warm and welcoming
like in a child's sunlit dream.
I can cloak the well-worn floor
with a pattern of your choice.
There'll be no rent (of judgement).
Only a gray shoulder to stain 
with the colors of your 
desperation and heaviness.

We'll whisper of the misty past 
untangle the present and its jaggedness
pan the gold from the slag of tomorrow.
I'll gently lay a patch upon
that blue chip in your heart
for I love you immensely 
you can stay forever if you wish
dear heart
Categories: untangle, love,
Form: Free verse
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