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The Rent of Judgement

I've traipsed down a cobble of your path. If you're ever lost, forgotten or misstep I'll surely spruce up a room for you. It'll be on the mundane -humble side but safe-warm and welcoming like in a child's sunlit dream. I can cloak the well-worn floor with a pattern of your choice. There'll be no rent (of judgement). Only a gray shoulder to stain with the colors of your desperation and heaviness. We'll whisper of the misty past untangle the present and its jaggedness pan the gold from the slag of tomorrow. I'll gently lay a patch upon that blue chip in your heart for I love you immensely you can stay forever if you wish dear heart

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Date: 11/23/2024 4:44:00 PM
Congratulations on POTW. An enchanting poem on pure serene love - truly enjoyed every word, every line.
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Anthony Biaanco
Date: 11/28/2024 5:07:00 PM
Thank you for your kind and supportive comment. best wishes Anthony
Date: 11/23/2024 12:37:00 AM
Congratulations to you Antony on POTW, love wins every time. Tom
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Anthony Biaanco
Date: 11/23/2024 3:13:00 AM
Thanks for having a look, Tom love wins most of the time anyway God bless Anthony
Date: 11/21/2024 1:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTW. Well done.
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Anthony Biaanco
Date: 11/23/2024 3:12:00 AM
Thank you Daisy Best wishes Anthony
Date: 11/21/2024 5:01:00 AM
Wow! Impressive how you put this together! I love it because it gives warm fuzzy feelings despite the cold world! Congratulations on potw!
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Anthony Biaanco
Date: 11/23/2024 3:11:00 AM
Thank you, Karen, Best wishes Anthony
Date: 11/20/2024 6:32:00 AM
Hey Tony nice POTW choice. Enjoy your special week
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Anthony Biaanco
Date: 11/20/2024 2:20:00 PM
Thanks Tom
Date: 11/19/2024 11:29:00 AM
an ode to the idea of "unconditional love". Nicely done Anthony
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Anthony Biaanco
Date: 11/20/2024 2:19:00 PM
Thank you for taking time to read my poem Best wishes Anthony
Date: 11/19/2024 5:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your potd honor Anthony!
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Anthony Biaanco
Date: 11/20/2024 2:18:00 PM
Thank you, Karen,
Date: 11/18/2024 10:59:00 AM
Love the second verse, Congrats on POTW!
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Anthony Biaanco
Date: 11/18/2024 2:48:00 PM
Thank you, Kim, but what about the much larger first one? just kidding. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem Bless you always anthony
Date: 11/18/2024 10:12:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem Anthony congratulations on your POTW.
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Anthony Biaanco
Date: 11/18/2024 2:48:00 PM
Thanks again John Anthony
Date: 11/17/2024 4:11:00 PM
An wonderful poem of unconditional pure love....just lovely! Congratulations Anthony on POTW! Debx
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Anthony Biaanco
Date: 11/18/2024 2:45:00 PM
I'm glad it touched you in the way it did God Bless you always Anthony
Date: 11/17/2024 3:59:00 PM
' There will be an old shoulder to stain with your pangs of heaviness. ' Such a comforting thought. Your words caress gently around me and my heart. Congratulations Anthony, on Poem of the Week. Hugs, Brandy
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Anthony Biaanco
Date: 11/18/2024 2:45:00 PM
Thank you, Brandy. I've been on this site for 19 years and those are some of the kindest words That I have ever received It makes writing worthwhile after all. Bless you Anthony
Date: 11/17/2024 2:05:00 PM
Anthony, beautiful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings, Constance
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Anthony Biaanco
Date: 11/18/2024 2:42:00 PM
Thank you Constance Its over simplified but Honest. Best wishes Anthony
Date: 11/17/2024 12:08:00 PM
Hello Anthony, I loved your POTW for It beautifully captures the essence of unconditional love and support, creating a sanctuary for the soul. Such an intimate and heartfelt vision. Congratulations and enjoy your day. Autumn Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Anthony Biaanco
Date: 11/18/2024 2:41:00 PM
Thank you Daniel I'm glad you enjoyed it. I was thinking about somebody in particular when I wrote this. Best wishes anthony
Date: 11/17/2024 9:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTW win. I enjoyed reading your write. Have a great day/week with your wonderful win.............
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Anthony Biaanco
Date: 11/18/2024 2:39:00 PM
Thanks Paula Best Wishes. Anthony
Date: 11/17/2024 8:00:00 AM
Hi Anthony enjoyed reading your wonderful POTW, sending you my best wishes.
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Anthony Biaanco
Date: 11/18/2024 2:38:00 PM
Thankyou for reading my poem John
Date: 11/17/2024 6:53:00 AM
Anthony, congratulations on POTW.
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Anthony Biaanco
Date: 11/20/2024 4:24:00 PM
Than you so much for your kind words Tania best wishes Anthony
Date: 11/17/2024 6:28:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.w. Anthony :) -
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Anthony Biaanco
Date: 11/18/2024 2:37:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise
Date: 11/14/2024 7:36:00 PM
How awesome you are Anthony. We have not been in touch for a long tome, golly. I am packing my bags now! I love the idea of a true lstener who accepts me as I am andsings of a winged future. Not demanding I must be a certain way …A FAV… Lve, Pangie xx
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Anthony Biaanco
Date: 11/17/2024 6:53:00 AM
Thank you Pangie. Bless you always anthony

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