Robin L. Gass Poet Free verse

Dangerous Thoughts

Aching with desire
my thoughts are filled with you
thoughts I should not dare to think
for fear they will destroy me.
Just a thought of you and I am seized
by feelings that shatter me
and thrill me
burning my flesh as they rush through me
leaving me thirsting in their wake
thirst only to be quenched
with the knowledge of you
thoughts that twist and taunt me
until I am at the brink
trembling to my very core
intoxicated by this sweet torture
my body silently crying out for yours
begging for release
relief
begging you to come to me
and let me wrap myself around you
and lose myself to you
as you lose yourself in me.
Nothing else can untangle me
nothing less will satisfy this aching need
as I am lost to thoughts
so dangerous
so delicious.




written 2005

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Johnathon Souders March 19, 2009 at 11:49 PM I enjoyed and felt the pain of this one, good write Johnathon

Izzy Gumbo February 8, 2009 at 6:05 PM Wow Robin! How passionate! This leaves my heart beat quickened... how wonderful!

Laura Mckenzie January 31, 2009 at 12:21 PM Wow your on fire with passion I loved your energy in this piece wooo woooow I pray for the man that holds you near you may just set him on fire! Lololo just kidding great write! Laura :)

Kristin Reynolds January 31, 2009 at 3:11 AM lo at Sharon's comment, no kidding, wheaties on speed, or something! lol man, hot stuff girl, hot stuff! what will be next, I wonder? love, K

Raul Moreno January 30, 2009 at 4:07 PM Great poem Robin, I loved the lines " thirst only to be quenched with the knowledge of you " Keep up the good work...Raul

Sharon Winter January 30, 2009 at 2:15 PM So Robin, just what exactly have you been eating for breakfast lately? : ) Whew, your poems are so passionate! Any secret ingredients you're willing to share? ~lol~ Steamy write! Love, Shar

John Loving Iii January 30, 2009 at 12:15 PM thats what they call falling in love. who knows if things don't work out you may become a stalker. lol who knows? but you have captured that emotion that we all suffer and enjoy. well done. jhl

Maryam Jameela Haniff January 30, 2009 at 10:20 AM wow so much feeling...I like the words "Dangerous thoughts"....sometimes it is delicious yet dangerous, how true..liked it lotz* love*/*/*Maryam

Keith Bickerstaffe January 30, 2009 at 8:42 AM Whew! ...tastefully yet hotly passionate. Well done Robin! Best wishes, Keith

Brian Strand January 30, 2009 at 7:38 AM You touch the humn soul with your pen Robin.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Carrie Richards January 30, 2009 at 6:42 AM How could any man refuse an offer like this?? Wow, Robin....!! Goodness girl! :) Carrie

Amy Swanson January 30, 2009 at 6:22 AM Hi Robin, I have been away for a bit and it's so nice to be back. I loved this, thought it was really passionate and beautiful, I have been there with those "dangerous and delicious" thoughts, you captured it excellently! Blessings, Amy :)

Christopher Higgins January 30, 2009 at 6:11 AM The voice in this piece speaks with such determination and hunger. Thoughts can be dangerous..they can also be exciting. Good job.

Michael Degenhardt January 30, 2009 at 5:29 AM Robin, this write is one that I feel many can relate to. Whether it be true or not, it is certain people that can truly unwrap another. Sometimes yes, thoughts can be dangerous, but they can be so much fun too. A very passionate and well written piece. Michael