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Riddles On the Wind

in the desolate solitary hours when fear trickles down my spine time is my jailor closing me behind its doors isolating my heartbeats distant from yours drips following a storm ping a pattern of rubies upon my flesh heat carved runes tell of lovers set aside long ago riddles on the wind answers unfound my present twists into a knotted conflagration higher hotter than before voices from the past rise and resonate: ‘your heart-pain bleeds from your words that love is the umbrella under which these wounds fester is that much worse untangle your heart-threads from their prison bars the landscape of your life must evolve immerse yourself and know freedom’ my quest begins now

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Date: 1/13/2022 12:11:00 PM
Thank you for your thoughts and feedback on my poem. I appreciate them.
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Date: 1/12/2022 11:54:00 PM
Susan, as poetry, this work is powerful, truthful, sadly beautiful. I wrote something today showing why Nature survives our pollution & depredation WITHOUT THINKING. As humans we must control recycled thinking, enjoy the " now," a PRESENT
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Anil Deo
Date: 1/14/2022 4:36:00 AM
Susan, sorry: one is titled Animal Analogies. My nature poems show Animals think, but productively . Humans think in addicted cyclical patterns (often recycling / reliving PAIN & BLAME). Watch your breathing, & thinking slows down - to peaceful levels
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Susan Szoke
Date: 1/13/2022 12:14:00 PM
I don't see a poem of yours entitled "now" or even "present". I'll review today's poem but I wonder if you had another you wanted me to see?
Date: 1/7/2022 11:59:00 AM
Floods of undulating emotions ripple thru me upon repeated reading, Susan, to mine faves...
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Susan Szoke
Date: 1/7/2022 3:23:00 PM
I am honored! Much thanks for your kind comments.
Date: 1/6/2022 9:14:00 AM
Well expressed Susan, enjoyed indeed.'
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Susan Szoke
Date: 1/7/2022 10:18:00 AM
I appreciate your kind comments. So glad you enjoyed!
Date: 12/31/2021 6:46:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Also, I welcome you with the love of God expressed in John 3:16 of the Bible: "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." A blessed New Year 2022 to you and your loved ones. God bless you.
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Susan Szoke
Date: 12/31/2021 9:04:00 PM
Thanks much for your greetings. I also love the passage where John tells us that '...the Word was with God...and the Word was God.' Indeed, he is the Word personified. May the Lord bless you greatly in 2022.

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