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This Life

This Life

Your eyes saw my unformed body,
Yet even then, LORD, You knew me.

In Your Book were all Your plans laid,
You gave me life and I was made.

Before I saw light You were my Light
Each beat of breath, unfolding sight,

And as Your Hands knit me together,
Each bone and flesh inside my mother.

You saw how I would walk this earth,
How I would fall and lose my worth.

This child You made for Your own glory,
You took from darkness and misery.

Made new again by Grace and Mercy
You saved me from sin and set me free!

With thanks I sing, Your plans came to be
From broken to whole, LORD, You loved me.

Now as I see the coming sunset,
This form, this life, will soon face death.

From You I came and to You I return
Till then I breathe, but for that day I yearn!

Cynthia Buhain-Baello~~~03.03.16

"For you created my inmost being;
You knit me together in my mother’s womb.
I praise You because I am fearfully and wonderfully made;
Your works are wonderful,
I know that full well.
My frame was not hidden from You
when I was made in the secret place,
when I was woven together in the depths of the earth.

Your eyes saw my unformed body;
all the days ordained for me were written in Your book
before one of them came to be.

PSALM 139:13-16

Premium Member A Moment In Death

My eyes wide open, all I see is Ebony
  A white hot Light, to the left : "to the Past"
  A Heavenly bright White Light to the right "to the Present"
  I know the path of the past : I live it every day
  Holding  LENORE’S hand entwined to Forever ,Forever
 Her Heart and mine beating as one for Eternity
 A Loving Kiss : Heavenly Bliss : Teardrops’ Mist
  I walk the path to the right, toward the Heavenly Light
 The mirage I see,  behind the White Light, unhued colors, unformed shapes
 I quicken my pace and run toward the place where I can see LENORE again
 She sits there , braiding Her long auburn hair , Emerald Eyes glistening with tears
 “LENORE” ; whispered from my mouth , why so sad; we are together again Forever
 She puts Her finger to my lips “shh my Heartbeat My LOVE, My LIFE , ALWAYS
 You are here only for a minuscule of time, You have to go back  It is not your time”
  We embrace I feel the warmth of Eternal LOVE : a Heavenly glow on Her Angelic Face
  We kiss, memories of  a distant  past flood my mind I remember the sweetness of her lips
  LENORE fades away: No , NO , Noooh  then I awake to the glare of Hospital lights
  Shimmering off the tears streaming  down my cheeks

Premium Member Soar Among Stars

Let me fly
Let me soar
soar like a bottle rocket
soar like shooting star
star of the sapphire sky
star of the multi-verse
multi-verse of endless song
multi-verse of ballads formed
formed of shatters she's
formed of immortality
immortality unformed
immortality of thought
thought of rainbows
thought of waterfalls
waterfalls of prism light
waterfalls of tears
tears from children
tears from mothers
mothers warm
mothers home
home with yellow clapboard
home with a cat
cat with whiskers
cat with purrs
purrs with cuddles
purrs for dinner
dinner stewed tomato
dinner hot
hot mouths
hot skin
skin nee dip
skin in the game
game to play
game to try
try me
try shusi
sushi pink
sushi rolled
rolled in sesame
rolled in the hay
hay the field
hay Nane Nane
Nane sang
nane piped
piped the harmonic
piped to the star
stars shine
stars explode
explode
shine



*dedicated to Mr. O


Premium Member I AM POETRY

I am poetry
An unheard whisper
Shadows
Conspiring
A tear
Soaked in laughter
Anger
Molded in metaphor 
Humor
Wielding the axe of angst
Whispering
A farewell kiss

I am poetry
The invisible heart of language
Beating a near silent drum
A quiet vibration
Teasing the moonlight
A cool breath of air
Drawing lovers closer
A metered heartbeat
Quickened in passions petulance

I am poetry
A dream yet unformed
Stirring the ink of dreams
Weaving a wondrous web
Awaiting unsuspecting words

The Poet

To take a thought and shape a poem
Takes patience, and a clue – 
The patience for the diligence
Required of a muse
The clue for clever subtleties
Engaging poets use

To form connections yet unformed
Reveal with clarity
The mysteries that men have known
Throughout the centuries
Unraveled with apparent ease 
In fonts of industry –

To trace the riddle of a thought
Decrypt it as it bends
To find epistles in a phrase
And coax it from a pen
One finds a poet at his craft
Plying, with keen intent

The words with which to move the earth
And all the universe

Premium Member Angelic Callings

Words on a page, sounds, Mother's calling
soft tones rose from leather tomes sweetly,
through rouged lips they tumble with love.
Lullabies call through the coldest of nights
as frost haloes about the curls, open-hearted,
eager, a child of contested love’s joining.

What would this chimera become now joined.
Oh what would be the result of this clarion call?
Angels wonder at the blend of unformed heart,
as words of Our Fathers resound so sweet
for the thrice kissed lips of child and overbearing night.
May all who come from the light delight in love.

May the child addressed bring comfort, bring love, 
grow in service to the higher good and join
the wholesome hearts who warm the darkest night,
for bringing comfort, kindness, and caring is a calling,
which teaches every opened soul of sweetness
and heals the aching angry sores of forlorn hearts.

With words of joy, and a voice full of heart
let her hands touch, and sooth, each pain lovingly,
with the like-minded teachers and nurses sweetening
the balm smoothed upon the brow of man, enjoined
to heed the call, the ancient ever-present call
of majesty in morning and peaceful rest at night. 

Each life presents its morning and ends in eternal night.
Each soul stores fonts of happiness and heartache.
Conception buds and blooms, sending out a clarion call
enjoining all who have the healing gift to garner love.
Gentle ones, who plant the seeds, tend the hearts join…
be the humble gardeners of the meek and sweet.

What task could be richer or path sweeter
than that of those who doctor, and nurse, and warm night?
Tender hearts and helping hands come together, join…
in the higher consciousness of he’s and she’s heartfelt.
Raise the banner; fly the unifying flag of healing love,
make this your onward path the Way, the Red Road your calling.

For what is sweeter day or night for each are joined,
heartily we love and live to heed these fine callings.


Premium Member Birth of a Poem

Birth of A Poem

What can be done with these pedestrian morsels?
I have tasted unformed clay before.

Phrases plead to be thrown into
the redeeming realm of manifestation.

Pushing to be metaphoric,
they will arise and come to me.

From some unplumbed soliloquy.
 

Kathryn Collins
February 25, 2014

Premium Member Oops, There Goes the Baby Grand

It's not because of flood or fire,
nothing more than a desire
that's  prompting us to tear apart 
all that we've  established here.

Tired of treadmill tedium
breakfast always at eight am,
walk the dog by nine o'clock,
skim the pool tick tock, tick tock.

Time to find new closets, in which
to re- arrange familiar things, 
possessions, we can find in our sleep
Convenience, imprinted on memory

Decisions now on what we must cull
things we thought we'd always keep.
Oops, there goes the baby grand, 
the price of shipping way too steep.

We know of roads we've yet to take,
new friendships that we've yet to make.
Unseen rainbows and unformed dreams,
leaving behind established routines.

Beyond - a new horizon rises
Freedom comes from letting go
Detachment happens from cutting strings
Mix up the pieces - start again

Premium Member Unmeant Meanings

 Unmeant meanings

	Words keep watch
				
      their eyes in the empty spaces
                                         	fingers feel their unformed faces

Can words mean what they were not meant for    all by   
                                                          theirnonselves
even if they come clothed in nonentity 
     cuneiforms hieroglyphics ideophonograms 
               strokes signs signals sounds shapes silences squiggles squares squirms suctions squirts scuds screams squelches screeches screams          or sickening sobs

	words sum up fix errant thoughts
speak for all
	though in tongues without jousting knights
  errancy will not lead to errantry

Only the blind conceive their shape form posture 
	the staid but rumbunctious music of stilled hieroglyphs
   the pliability of ideograms caressed down rice paper
					their squiggly strands
the self-effacing hand-and-foot maidens 
		of matronly phrases
    some leaning awry  
                                           the calligrapher’s trembling hand
all all straining upright
	the custodians of invested stock
	foot-stools of pouting poets
		         the sum-total of coveted currencies
	exchanged stock variables 

Who would be hurt    knifes himself
			with meaningless words
         who would laugh 
		breaks out into song
	the sing-song stress and accent of vowels round and strong
   learns wayward steadfastness
              with his words
	           with words
			with the word
				with the world of wonder in
  always willing and wilful words


April 23, 1997
From the privately-pub. coll. (re-worked 2016): longhand notes (a binding of poems), Paris: 1999, 115p.
© T. Wignesan – Paris,  2016
© T Wignesan  Create an image from this poem.

My Place

My place

There also is my place, where I explore my understanding
Of words that are said and thoughts revealed, interpretations made;
Intimacy shared and dissected, speculations proffered and discarded,
And wisdom is given and received, the acolyte at the master’s feet.

It is my space and, like another place, is defined 
By boundaries that keep us within the precincts of confidentiality;
Although I unspokenly stretch these boundaries to my own ends,
And bring my world into the professional arena of supervision.

I look within, to my past and the life I have lived,
And Terence speaks across the centuries to remind me:
"*****sum, humani nihil a me alienum puto", restatement
That I am human, and live and feel as do those I counsel.

We live in parallel worlds, my client, my supervisor; and me,
Who counsels others yet who explores himself, whose 
Understandings of others are but insights into his own
Psyche and his struggles for understanding and closure.

Nothing human is alien to me, and I forget my role, sometimes;
And move into my own spotlight, that I may illuminate 
Myself with the insights gained from you, who is here,
Before me, my supervisor and unwitting therapist to me.

And you? You also watch, alert to my half spoken thoughts. 
A mirror, that bends and shapes the reflection of myself
To reveal unformed understandings, to give them meaning 
And substance; a shaft of sunlight penetrating murky 
Waters, that both teaches, and counsels me.

Premium Member Stock


			Stock

Lines derail trains made from stern stock
    shunting worsted words in wagons to and fro
cabins depleted by looters piled on dock
    signals distressed faces not any more  

	forefathers shape not their twisted progeny
	when foremothers shunt them out of agony

the fear that might in the grain burst bunds
    resides unformed in unwilling face
    the dark inscrutable face of race    
blood thinning through bastardized sons

	forefathers shape not their twisted progeny
	when foremothers shunt them out of agony

to guard the rhyme within the quatrain
    no end of artifice will make for sacrifice
content lets form intertwine lines in vain
    clickety-clack of the train lulls us nice

	foremothers never think of their progeny
	when forefathers shunt them out of agony

May 6, 1997

From the privately pub. coll. (rev. 2016): longhand notes (a binding of poems),1999, 115p. 
© T. Wignesan – Paris,  2016
© T Wignesan  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Life, Death and Tumble Weed

life, death and tumbleweed

I have never encountered tumbleweed
in all of its restless rolling glory
never really thought about it
until just now.

if you ask me why now
my mind would appear 
as a new page
filled with potential
but all unformed

brown dried skeletal lace
at the mercy
of every wind that blows
crackling scraping

it was once green
leafed and filled with life
rooted into the soil
beneath passing cloud
the motions of sun and moon

in death it moves
with thin fragile beauty
free.

Defining Moments

Sun-kissed sand seeping warm softness through loose fingers
Gritty bits of sea worn shells clinging to sweaty palms
Endless stretches of churning salty skirts, swirling soft sand offerings
Timeless routine unless confined to an hour glass; then time defined and depleting
	I will stay here, one more day, in this moment with you
Billowing wind toying with chimes dangling from a hook outside the window
Weather-worn strings attempt constant purchase on their prized pipes
Hollow tubes and smooth wood dance as if marionettes
Called to action without self-will; blown and battered sporadically to purpose of 
sweet note
	I will stay here, one more day, in this moment with you
Fragrant formed wax with wick in need of trimming
Sagging brittle edges from last burning yearn for more pliable state
Called to illumination and guardian of the very flame that diminishes
Beauty invoked by warm flickers as shadows dance; knowing that soon it will only 
smolder
	I will stay here, one more day, in this moment with you
Precious kisses on soft skin and caresses on tiny fingers
Confused pleas of tears and unformed words when communication is elusive
Nurtured as if a fragile rare flower, coaxing to bloom and thrive
Rooted and reaching for the sky; so soon to spread limbs, absorbing and obscuring 
the sun
	I will stay here, one more day, in this moment with you
Heady thoughts of desperate need, wanting skin and souls to touch and mingle
Uncharted and unrehearsed voyages across deep waters and over daunting cliffs
Strengthened or broken by attempts to fly; stretching wings in unison to keep aloft
Long sought destination reached, realizing now that the journey’s purpose was to 
find you
	I will stay here, one more day, in this moment with you

Afternoon Nap

Flat on my back
I waste a sleepy
Sunday afternoon,
Just a few breaths
Left in the room,
Approaching end
Of a restless phase,
Taking my space.

Smiling to no one,
Wild child never
Left my side,
Not that it needs
A justification,
In sweetness
The means trump
Intention.

The source is
Elusive, unformed
Aloof and free,
Like me, she
Does not belong
To anything,
Except maybe
Her naked soul.

Random voices,
Like good sleep,
Are opaque,
Middle distance
Perspectives
To differentiate
The ache of
The ages.

Lyn-Lyn-Kin-Kin

the draw to you is untenable,
unformed yet perpetual,
tentatively checked, indirect,
corrected...
irreversibly defined.

and this distance is appreciable,
pining, yet unspeakable,
wandering dazed and crazed,
directed...
unrequited but aligned
© Billy Tunk  Create an image from this poem.

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